Reviews by artri
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Still with you and still enjoying it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That was a beautiful and moving chapter, you can see the pace of their live pick up and move on. They are developing a deeper and lasting relationship.



Author's Response:

yes, very much intended to do just that

thanks for reading!

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Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Outtake Two ~ Wedding

Very,very enjoyable...



Author's Response:

thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

17 year old Bella is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be all she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And will she still want him when one night changes everything? A/U Cannon pairings


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74283 Read Count: 29128
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Loved the story.

The construction, with the twists and turns, was great.

All feelings of anger, frustration, sadness and joy were drawn beautifully, eilciting intense emotions.

Really enjoyed it.

Artri

My Prodigal Son by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Carlisle POV. Takes place after chapter 10 and before chapter 11. If you haven't read Edward's Clan it may not make much sense. How does Carlisle REALLY feel about Edward and Bella?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 775
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That you have done... without the outakes the ambivilance of Carlise to Bella and Jasper makes less sense.

The Piano by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake Esme's REAL feelings towards Edward, Carlisle and Alice. Best to read AFTER chapter eleven. If you have not read Edward's Clan this won't make much sense.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2239 Read Count: 665
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

God, horrifying.

Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Jasper's History. Takes place during Chapter seventeen, it won't make sense unless you have read Edward's Clan first.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2848 Read Count: 546
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a crappy begining he had.

Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Tanya's POV - what was her relationship with Edward really like? And what did they do to traumatise her friend?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2253 Read Count: 1151
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yikes!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Boy is he , ie. Edward in for a rude awakening.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Not pleasent to read in places (not fun to walk in others shoes) but oh such a good story, thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapt 30 The Way We Were

Good to see another great chapter...just love this story.

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

episode

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77102
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

Perfect...

You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Belonging

Can understand his annoyance she never - as do most women - thinks much of herself.

IMMERSION by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

...Immersion... 

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High? 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available. AU...Canon Couples

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46809 Read Count: 6473
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

Wonderfully constructed story, nice twist.



Author's Response:

Thank you artri...so glad you enjoyed it.

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752859
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Sweet...

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Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

Glad they sorted that out. Still sweet...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Surprise, SURPRISE

Real life intervened and I never finished this, I had forgotten how good it is, I do love these characters.



Author's Response:

Well, i'm glad you're back to it.  I hope you enjoy it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366631
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

THis is brillient, I just love it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: First Date Insanity

Oh,Oh! interesting times a coming.



Author's Response:

Interesting is an "adequate" definition. LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Shadows

AH Ha the penny drops...

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Latent Image

Very intense...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Shutter Lag

He could have eased her into the idea of being his muse a little more slowly but then that would have been less dramatic. Glad the angst did not last too long.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Scary Eddie...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Aww... HEA, am glad, did not like that Edward...nasty piece of work.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you liked the ending.  Edward was definitely an S.O.B. in this story .... at least the vampire was.  Thanks for reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU/AH OOC Bad girl Bella Swan takes on a challenging bet to turn Edward, resident golden boy, to the dark side. Can one bet turn into a life time of love? Lemons and adult situations. Better Summary inside. Collab w/Luvrofink and Chartwilightmom


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64046 Read Count: 38007
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High

Ha, ha talk about, sealing her fate...

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Thank you for the ending, It took me all evening to pluck up the courage to read this... I was dreading what they would do to her...at least I can get some sleep tonight.

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

Yeah!!! go in there and get the bastards...

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

I'm glad thats resolved...for the moment. Very well drawn, the emotions and the action.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

Phew...a marathon but worth every moment. Glad to see you back...was looking at this story last week and wondering but I knew, from the feel of the last chapter, you would continue it. What a skewed world they live in...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

I waited and waited...and...you updated. Yesterday I looked again at your front page and wondered and you delivered, thank you, worth the wait. Sorry life has been such a bitch, I also have just finished my November cold/flu, roll on the New Year. Looking forward to the update.

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note

Great to hear from you...glad to see you back. Looking forward to the new chapter.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Quite honestly the dom stuff is great but you have written these characters so well I almost prefere (almost) when they are just being as they are at the begining of this chapter. I love the verbal play between them. The way you write their normal interaction mkes them a very relaxed couple when they are together.

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I understand it is all about respect, control and meant to be serious but god that was so funny. I can hadrdly wait until the next installment. *giggle* it was the tick in Edwards eye *He,He*.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This just gets better and better.

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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Nice for the two of them to be alone and that Jacob and Jim (creepy pair, they terrify me) were not in this one too much.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

It is good to see them resolve issues and being so happy.

Glad she won't be alone in the apartment again... hopefuly.



Author's Response: thank you for the review and no she won't go back, but bad pennies have a way of showing up...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I'm in two minds about how Edward is treating Bella. She is in a fragile state emotionally and her insecurities and reactions at the play party are a direct response to her frame of mind. Her trust in him has taken her a long way but the turn her life has taken seems to have dredged up feeling and anxieties from her past, she may need more help then he can give her... I feel there is more horror to come.



Author's Response:

thank you for your commets & review

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Maybe Garrett was right about the length of time they needed to spend getting to know each other and he collared her too soon. She is right to spend time learning about the lifestyle.

Author's Response:

thank you for the review - update tomorrow

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I really don't know...

Author's Response:

well thank you for your review (I think) 

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Happy now...had my fix for the week...I am so not addicted to this story...really I'm not...I'm not.
A lovely chapter, some worry but it lightened up, needed to after the last one.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Glad to see some of the Charlie Bella stuff resolved and that she is getting recognizion for her work(part of this was she was talented and it got lost for a long while).
Alice *hmmm* can see these two (B&A)in serious trouble if they don,t come clean.
As for the play party. Think he would never display or use her in any way that others could really see her completly, he is too jealous, intrested to see what happens.
RL and family are important wean yourself off (I've had to) and don't let this control your life, be in control of it, set times etc. and try to stick to them.
Love the work.
A

Author's Response:

thank you for your insightful comments and review

xoxo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Think E&J overreacted and you would think by now E would have learned to look after B better. Stress her out and all she does is loose weight. He is meant to be looking after her not making her revert to the frightened mouse she was before, does he want her to waste away.

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Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

This has the feel of coming to the end of the story? Well a great chapter... puts to bed lots of loose ends and seems to be setting upnfor a HEA...looking forward to it.

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Better to take the time for real life, the work , life and writing benefits. Not that there is anything wrong with the writing-I love it-take all the time you need to feel comfortable with what you have written...don't rush...the story works and |I am sure will continue to...Happy Christmas and New Year. Artri

Author's Response:

thank you so much for your support. the outtake will be up in the week. Merry Christmas honey

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Wow! that was a marathon but a good one... glad you did not do a cliffie.
Everything seems to have settled down and OMG Emmett was so funny about the baby.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review and comments - don't you just love Emmett?

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Well worth waiting for...superb as usual.

Author's Response:

thank you so much - outtake this week - look out for it..

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Nightmare of nightmare weeks, thank for the superb update.

Author's Response:

thank you so much - it's all over now! Yeah, on to the next one! xoxo

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Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

What do you mean, 'its a long one', Its half a bloody book... and thank you for it. My God 1 million words, incredible...You write it so well, my blood pressure went through the roof at Renee's antics...I was there with Bella...I wanted to throw up. Long may you write ...love it.

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Great as usual...you spoil us...love the quiet development of their relationship.



Author's Response:

thanks so much, Honey!

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Thw whole chapter was lovely, if a bit unrealistic (Alice as bridezilla was the other extreme) but it is never as angstless asthis coming up to a wedding... and now you have me all wondering what the hell was in that letter. Really enjoyed the moment at the lake side...hehe



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and comments and yes, i did let my imagination get ahead of me a little, but I figured that they had enough angst/excitment etc at the party and hey, I think that we can all do with a little blatant romance and fluff every now and again and especially as we still have to read THAT LETTER!  

Thanks again,

Michelexoxo

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Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Great...intense and so so exciting...



Author's Response:

thanks honey! xoxo

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I know it was long butworth it. This just gets better and better. My understanding of them increases with every chapter.

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Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Nice to see her coming into her own...talk about overkill where the car was comcerned, hehehe, was he ever right to be afraid to tell her.

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Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Still excellent...



Author's Response: thank you *blushes*

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Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Of course more, more and more, wait for each and every update and oh! God that was the best sting, just love the grand unks.

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Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Wohoo that was a great chapter...caught it all.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

You have been a constant for so long, I have loved every bit of this story and awaited each update with anticipation. Glad to hear its not all ending and you will be on author alert. Thank you for many hours of enjoyment.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64145
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well worth the wait. More soon pleaaasssse...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thank you, a wonderful story.

Dragon Stones by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time. 

Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon. 

She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates. 

 DRAGON STONES was the THIRD PLACE WINNER in the

Once Upon a Twilight Contest! 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55360 Read Count: 2688
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Beginning

Great start and a wonderfully drawn set up. I have a major thing for dragons... something incredibly beautiful about them. Love the characterization of all the usual suspects and I am so looking forward to the rest of this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you like it...I do love dragons too!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Jasper, Cathair's Rider

Oh! I adore your Jasper...he seems very sweet. As for Tanyara, he, he she is written as trouble all over...great.
Excellent second chapter...moves the story on.

Author's Response:

Jasper is a sweetie...a bit more cheerful than in the SAGA...

LOL...T is nearly always a bad girl...LOL...so much fun!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Bella, ShayTan's Rider

The description of each of their emotions, riders and dragons, is exquisite.
Each new addition or explanation to the story is done in a very subtle way.
Must read on...

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate hearing that...

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Edward, Volterra's Rider

I like Edward, he is kind...with a lonely persona and yet is written with a sense of deep strength.
James on the other hand gives me the creeps, yet I like the way in so few appearances he has been drawn so well.

Author's Response:

James gives you the creeps?  Hmmm....I must be doing my job then!

Thanks for reading, artri...and those lovely coffee cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Bella, ShayTan's Rider

You can see the struggle about to ensue..
I will admit I have just read some of your reviews My all time fav author is Anne Mc Caffrey,I have all her books. I thought I had gone to heaven when I found the Pern series... I have read it so many times I have lost count. You can see why I like this story. well onward...see you next review.

Author's Response:

I do love Anne McCaffrey too...I've read it so many times...from beginning to end too...

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Esme

I like a powerful and talented Esme.
The story moves at a lovely pace...it has caught me.

Author's Response:

Esme...not that minor character here...LOL

Thanks, again, fopr reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Volterra

There is so much emotion running through this story...joyful, sad and I have no doubt passionate in the future.
Also reading GE at the moment, great story.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked Volterra...he is such a sweetie...

Oh!  And GE too!

Thank you!

Alice is the next chapter here...and I'm about a third of the way through...

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Alice

I am thrilled you have updated, I love this story...it had to be Alice didn't it.
Looking forward to the next update, want some more E&B.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reveading, artri...and those lovely coffee cups!

Yep, had to be ALICE and Brenith!

Bella will be up next...

Kathie

Minibusted by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

After Alice puts a risque engagement photo of Bella & Edward in all the local papers, they attempt to lie low and avoid the gossips. 23 days before the wedding, BD, canon-based.

A Sequel to “Unforeseen Events”. Please read UE first or this will not make any sense:)

Rated NC-17 for sexuality and some language. Lemons in some chapters.

To learn what kind of 1910's slang Edward might use, go to www.alphadictionary.com/slang

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14139 Read Count: 4945
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2011 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Thwarted

Ugh don' t you hate being interupted...



Author's Response:

Oh, for sure.  Interruptions are no fun.  LOL Thanks for reviewing.  Keep in touch:D

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Clifton Hill

"Junior league gossips" love it, as iIdo the story of the photo, he, he...



Author's Response:

Thank you:D  I love discombobulating Edward.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Practise, Edward!

Liked the lemon, sweet yet sexy.



Author's Response:

They start at the very beginning, and go on from here to bigger things.  Hopefully, like life:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Afterglow

Even better...



Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for the rating BTW

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Gambling

Liked the whole trip. The casino and Ang and Ben was fun, as was Bella sleep talking.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I have a fondness for A/B.  And Bella must entertain E a lot in her sleep before she loses the ability to sleep a few zillion chapters from now.

 

I must get the rest of the fics posted.  All I need is time.  Sigh.

 

xo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Confronting the Scandal

That was the funniest, I am still laughing.. :)



Author's Response:

ah, bless you.  Glad I made you laugh.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: Saying 'Goodbye' to the Group

That was a great story and very funny. ( Liked that E shared all the condoms, An absolute necessity for all boys and girls,he, he)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.

 

And E & B certainly have no use for condoms.  At least, they don't think they do XD

 

LOL

 

Trying the next story?  Keep in touch.  Thanks for all the reviews.

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHAHA!!!don't we all know, famous last words.

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?

You write the characters smoothly, the prose flows... love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, artri!  That's lovely to read...and thanks, also, for the lovely coffee cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn

The describtions of both of them are so cute.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you, artri!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Taken

Well named, I was fooled. Excelent.



Author's Response:

LOL...yes, TAKEN was rather mean of me...but it DID suit this one...

Thanks for reading, artri!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The First question

Cute.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, artri!

Thanks for reading...and those steaming cups of coffee!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Answers

I love the idea of the picture and that it is in his possesion.



Author's Response:

It was kind of a nice coincidence...ah, fan fiction...sometimes it works!

Thanks for reading, sweets!~

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 We Do

Lovely wedding...

Author's Response:

Thank you, artri...glad you liked the wedding!

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue 2.0 Alice

Lovely to see Alice so happy.

Author's Response:

Thanks, artri...she really needed to hear that...

Glad you liked it...

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: The Final Epilogue

A good ending...just right for this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, artri...glad you've enjoyed it!

I've enjoyed your reviews...

Kathie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: FGB Auction Chapter

Nice little extra...

Author's Response:

Thanks, artri...it was so much fun!  Those prompts were fun to work with!

Kathie

Lucky by Prettypretty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds herself as Emmett's new statistics tutor. How did that happen? Emmett's loud and Edward was vulgar? First attempt at Twilight Fandom. A/H Canon Pairings. A little on the fluffy side.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50141 Read Count: 10112
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oooooh Esme is the bis, hehe. Like the feel of this chapter, real homey.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

:) :)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This should be fun.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Haha typical family stuff...nice and funny Carlise

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more!
minawritesfanfiction.blogspot.com


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: The Real Cinderella

Love it, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: The Blank Canvas

Lovely smooth writing in this chapter.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Pragmatic Gentleman

I like this, seems familiar.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Idealistic Painter

Must have read this at some stage, loving it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The First Meeting

Renee is a piece of work. Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Impulsive Chase

God R is a witch. Will be interesting to see what happens.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Unforeseen Consequences

Poor Bella...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Unspoken Promise

Ah! Ha! this should be good.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Royal Duties

Good way to move it on. This is an excellent story.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: The Google Search

Beautifully done...can't waitto find out if E knows about this. Worried about R and what trouble she can cause.