Reviews by ecsc
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Mean? That is not a good enough word for what you are. :P

I only hope it's not Aro, but I guess it's just wishful thinking of my part.



Author's Response:

ha ha ha ha

Yeah.. sorry... and with Aro.. *shrugs* no clue.. *looking around whistling*

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Well, what can I say, at least Aro don't have sex with the girls. That's good, but at the same time is twisted as hell, I mean really as Bella thinks that is just not right. losing your virginity in that sadistic way for sure must be very traumatic.  OMG and making the future husband hold a knife to the girl's thoat, I don't even have workds for that. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward get out of this mess, because they are going to get out before Bella's ceremony aren't they?

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Please let it be Edward, please, please please!!!!  Ok or anyone from his family will do!!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Mean, mean, mean, mean!!!!!!! That's NO way to end a chapter!!!! Please, please, pretty please hurry with the update!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

TMS

This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17 - Back to Reality

No way you left it there!!!!  I don't know who that can be, maybe Tanya? Please, please update soon!!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

OMG Edward is still blind he doesn't imagine the monster that is Carlisle!!! And I think that that memory was beyond cute!!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I was so scared bu it was genius the way he got away with it!!! :D

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

This is a big mess. So Jim is the James that rape Rosalie, he was thrown away from his family and now was revenge through Bella!!!! He thinks Emmett and Rosalie's house is Edward's Oh he is up for a surprise if he breaks in Emmett WILL kill him!!!

What's up with Esme?, I hope she was crying from gratitude!!!



Author's Response:

You got it in 1 ! thanks for the review

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

 I loved that Bella and Edward's roles were reveresed, Bella being strong and Edward weak. But the best part was that Bella wouldn't have been this strong if it wasn't for the fact that she was in a submissive set of mind!!! That was brilliant!!!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Are these two ever going to have a break? I really hope you are a 'happy ending' believer!!!



Author's Response:

Hey now!  I am the eternal optimist and I ABSOLUTELY believe in happy endings and in betweens - I PROMISE!!! But I am a bit of a drama queen (no shit!) so there may be ups and downs but there will be loving!!!! And weddings - and babies - oh yeah and kink :)

And this, dear heart is for you for reading and reviewing my little story :)

 

 

PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

 

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you, :)

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down

Emmett is a riot!!! Can't wait for that BBQ!!!

Oh and Tanya is going down of that I'm sure!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have the best time with him :)  He makes me laugh, always.  The BBQ should be fun.  Tanya will be handled :)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact

hahaha Alice was hilarious, I was waiting for Tanya to be put on her place , but not in a million years could I have guessed it would be done like this. That was classy :)  Can't wait for what surprises does Emmett and Rosalie's bbq bring along.  Thanks for the laughs!!



Author's Response:

Alice is just a great friend.  Wish I could rip her off the page and into my life because everyone needs someone like that on their side!  I'm so happy you liked it!  She managed to neutralize Tanya without any bloodshed or name calling.  Classy's a great word for it!

Haha yeah the BBQ...I can't wait to see what Em has in store either!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

OMG!!!!  And I thought Emmett was hilarious!! Esme rocks, she's just genious!!!!  I can't wait for that auction!

Author's Response:

Hehe thank you so much :)  I love Esme and Emmett on about the same level I think.  So awesome.  I'm glad you like them too.  Auction is soon, I promise!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review

I was looking forward for the auction but you certainly made up for it. That was fun!!!! Renee it's out of this world. I can't wait to see how it goes when you put the Cullens and Swans together ahhh and don't forget to add Emmett to that mix!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha sorry, I had some important things to do before the auction.  Renee and Charlie needed to be told!  I promise the whole gang will be together at some point.  It'll be wacky! ;) 

So glad you liked it anyway!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

awwww Edward is so sweet!!! Him rambling was priceless!!! Thank you that was a nice chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The only time he ever gets truly nervous is with her :)  Gotta love it!  Glad you liked the chapter.  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

Hilarious!!!!! Every single word, starting with the Emmettake!!!! Hats off for your sense of humor and imagination!!!!!

Emmette is always portrait with a wicked humor but this one takes the cake. I love him and as I have said before....dibbs!!! :P

 

I'm not american so I'm neither acquianted with all the football (I have scarce knowledge of the basics) and the references, so you keep me on my toes, frequentely googling names to get the refrences I don't get!!!

Thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I had the best time getting into his head and I love the response to my Em.  I love that you all love him so much!

Hahah I love that you look everything up, that's awesome.  Maybe I'm teaching you a bit then.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Thank you for the laughs!!!! You certainly surpass my exprtations. Throwing in Hercules, Thor, and Zeus to the mix was genius!!!!  Now I'm waiting for that gossip column!!! Ha it's going to be something!



Author's Response:

Haha you're very welcome and I'm glad I surpassed expectations.  I loved getting the cock names in as well.  Too much fun.  The gossip column is coming up!  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

Oh my, oh my!!!! Have you posted the update yet?!!! Come on don't leave us waiting!!!! This is not going to go well!!!!!! (For Dan that is)

 

I want Emmett as my big brother, may I have him?!!

 

Whenever I receive an email with an update to this story I can help but smile, Thank you!!!



Author's Response:

Haha I don't have it ready to post!  Have to write it! :)  But I'm thrilled you're anxious for more!

Get in line!  I think everyone wants an Em :)  Glad you love him tho!

I love hearing that it makes you smile.  Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

This chapter was very fun to read. Can't wait to find out what Emmett is going to do with the bust!!!! I'm sure it's going to be Epic!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you had fun with it :)  We'll see what he has in store soon!  Thanks so much for the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

My only guess is that Daniel Marks is some kind of financial advisor? You know to manage her money now.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Oh, no, please don't tell me that this means Tanya is going to show up at the Gala?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

{PS, I think you meant Victoria, not Tanya!} 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Incidents

Oh I suspected epilepsy since he had his talk wth Carlisle after his fainting episode. I could be wrong though. But one thing I do know is that witnessing a love one having a siesure is an experience I would be more than happy never to have to endure. It´s scarry and you feel impotent and insignificant not being able to do anything to help.



Author's Response:

you're on the right track, but we'll find out more next chapter.  and i agree, seizures are very scary to witness.  it's something you will never forget and never want to live through again.  thanks so much for the review!!  ;)

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession

Oh no!!! Those are sometimes inoperable and judging by the time that had pass without them removing it, it doesn't look good. I really hope this is not the case and they were waiting for a certain age or somethng. I'm really intrigued with what the Drs' who found Emmett and Bella role is with Edward story.



Author's Response:

you are correct.  we will find out more about his diagnosis and prognosis next chapter.  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

OMG!!!! Bella is awesome!!!! Please don't keep us waiting too long!!



Author's Response:

bella is awesome!  she's getting her revenge... finally! i'm trying hard to get the next chapter us shortly, so hang in there!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Huh? Ok I think I remember Mike being there? But since they thought it was a woman, my theory is that Tanya got the code from Mike since they probably know each other from the club.

 

The Heather situation is creepy and I think she may be linked to creepy Hawk.

 

Bella will be fed she's going to be in her best behaivor to get that treat!!!!



Author's Response:

I would be on my best behavior ....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

Well Bella took it very well. I of course knew there was goign to be a Domward since it's in the summary, but it's kind of out of character.  LOVE IT!!!  Can't wait for part 2 when Bella finds out the necklace is it intended as a collar?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61925
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG Who is he? Hurry with the update!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Really? What clues? Now I have to go back and see if I can figure it.  Maybe Emmett's underwear ad?



Author's Response:

by now i bet you know if you guessed correctly! lol Thanks!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Wow proposing already?  Talk about whiplash he was dumping her a few weeks ago!!!!  LOVE IT!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Edward's nothing if not insane.  lol.  He's head over heels...Thanks!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389603
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Oh wow!!!! I'm speechless!!!!

 

I can see the speed bump right in front of my eyes, as soon as he learns that Bella is in Seatle and 'separated' he'll try to pull out!!! Can't wait, please hurry (pretty please *insert puppy eyes*) :P



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

What so you mean  by "last chapter" and "quit"?!!!! NO WAY you are letting us hanging!!!!!!  Please let the Kettle One rest and come out from under the bed to continue this wondetful story!!!!!!  Don't keep us waiting too long!!! :P

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Oh NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Why did you left it there?!!!!!!! That's plain mean!!!!!!

 

I'm glad Edward listen to Jasper and gave Bella a chance to explain!!! 

 

Please update, update, update!!!!!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

No!!!! seriously? You left it there? Ugh!!!! Have you posted the next update yet?

 

Other than that, it was perfect!!! edward was so romantic with all the preparations!!! 

 

Loved it!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Poor Carlisle!!!  Even after all this messed up story, the thing that stands out is that masquarade ball. That sounds fishy!!! I hope it isn't Angela's doing you know to get some kind of proof to infidelity or something!! Please hurry with the next chapter and I'll love to see the teaser.



Author's Response:

xoxoxoxo hope u like part 2 babes....heres the teaser

 

I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.



I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.



His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.



His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.



My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.



“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.



Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…



I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”



I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

While it was fun, I'm not sure I liked that Bella accepted so little information on Jane. Edward didn't even tell her what he said to Jane. He should at least have asssured her that he didn't want anything with Jane. The way he said it, it was more like if she would've been stronger they would still be together. 

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

WOW can I take both sides?! LOL Well if you hear Edward's story he has a point not as valid as Bella's but I get it. I guess is time for Edward to man up or lose Bella!!

And I thought las chapter was a cliffy!!! Please hurry with an update!!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

what? Are Sue and Tanya the same person? That would explain why Harry was using his name.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

LOL that was the funniest thing ever!!!

 

Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

LOL and I thought it couldn't get better!!!

Silly me!

Summary:

 

 

This is a look into the minds of those who have watched Edward slowly remove himself from his own cimmerian view. These are Outtakes based off of His Cimmerian View. Read through chapter 24 of His Cimmerian View before starting this. AH/OOC

Banner made by the wonderful SoapyMayhem for His Cimmerian View, we just added the word Enduring.  Thanks SoapyMayhem you ROCK!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71046 Read Count: 5928
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: ecsc Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

I love it!!! I will like to hear from everyone's POV. The more the better!! :)

 



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

PS... Janes POV posts soon