Reviews by Saydonee
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

I also like Craig Ferguson. He is hilarious!



Author's Response:

I love Craig, he is great. So glad they have full episodes online to watch.

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

full speed ahead Bella, lol



Author's Response:

i know, go bella!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

trouble already



Author's Response:

would it be ff without some trouble?

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nice seeing a fic where bella is not a clumsy clueless girl who doesn't think she is pretty 



Author's Response:

yeah, i kinda like that too

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

nice that they both know they want the same thing



Author's Response:

yep, and they talk too

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yay, he followed her :-)



Author's Response:

these two can't get enough of each other!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

they are outed ;-)



Author's Response:

it was bound to happen sooner or later

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

james is creepy



Author's Response:

you have no idea

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

monster-in-law



Author's Response:

oh esme has her reasons

wouldn't you be protective of your son in that environment?

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

TMZ attack, lol



Author's Response:

and you know they do things like this all the time

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

love the way you have them having private words in public, its fun



Author's Response:

they have to have their own thing, makes you wonder what kstew and rpatz say to each other

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

he can't be worse than Esme, lol



Author's Response:

let's hope not!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yay, charlie likes Edward and what is up with Bella ignoring important pink elephants



Author's Response:

we all tend to ignore a pink elephant every now and then

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

love it

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

alone with edward on a private island, yummy



Author's Response:

i know, wow, the things they can do

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

just wondering if there will ever be any EPOV 

would really love to know what edward thought of bella before he met her



Author's Response:

nope, sorry, no EPOV, but working on some outtakes that will give you more insight to him

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

boohoo



Author's Response:

*hands you a tissue*

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

aawww



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77102
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

This is a response, to your response, for my review for ELEVEN. I am leaving it here because I can't review it twice and the contact author link has been disabled. 

You're right there is a warning there and I am sorry I missed it. I'm not angry but I was shocked.  

People FREQUENTLY skip story and author notes, especially if they are long, start out like the standard I don't own Twilight disclaimer, or just don't really stand out because of big distracting pictures, lol.

When I pick out a new fic, I go to the MOST RECENT page and scroll. There was no warning there, which I think is where most people expect the warning to be. I am also often reading on smaller screens instead of a full-size monitor so I didn't even realize that there was anything else to read below the picture after clicking on the story link.

However, most people do read the summary when they are picking out a fic. Most will also read the rating, category, genre, contest, challenge, etc. I always look for relevant warnings like non-canon couples, horror, slash, man-whoreward, and no HEA there before I ever even click the story links, lol.

It was great writing though. I would have totally wanted to read more if he had decided to change her after hearing her thoughts :)    

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for replying. I'll make sure when I get home tonight that I'll edit the story to include the warning in the title summary as well. I must say Eleven is the darkest story I've written...if you decide to browse through my other one shots, you'll see they are fluff with a tiny bit of smut (lol)! this story, Episode is my only WIP, or multichapter, and the one shots I use to get through writing or plot challenges as well as siphon off some negatives or positive, depending on how I am feeling. Eleven came out of watching Breaking Dawn and thinking worst case angst for Edward and Bella, I don't find myself reading heavy angst much. Unless I know there is a HEA...

So, once again, I apologise for not making the warning stand out more... I would never want people to think I tricked them into reading something that made them shocked or uncomfortable, so a thousand apologies xxx

 

Looks like TWCS have disabled all PM function...oh well you can always find me on Twitter if you wanted to chat about it more @boydblog

 

BBxx

 

 

 

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189015
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

I am really glad, that even though the game and Bella having to write about it sucked, he took it like a man. I loved the line you put in where he knows that Bella probably wouldn't want to read the article either.



Author's Response:

He did take it like a man.  Needed some time to deal with it, but he never blamed her.  I'm glad you liked that line.  Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Super Bowl XLVI

I would like to see more of the first superbowl and definitely the MVP part.



Author's Response:

I'll be doing that via outtake, thank you.

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Well I have been looking for all of the best fanfic sites and found you here too.

really full chapter, loved every bit of it, can't wait for more.after this chapter, I think Esme would be very amused at the Zeus joke, LOL. it sounded like there is some interesting girl talk in the future, maybe including Rene too since she is already crushing on pics of Edward ;-)    



Author's Response:

Haha thank you!  I'm honored you found me here as well!

It was a full chapter, but hey, Thanksgiving is about being full anyway.  Isn't it? hehe In my world it is! 

Esme would probably be quite amused, but I like having her be kind of aware but unaware.  She's so on top of everything else. hehe  Oh Lord knows what will happen when Renee meets Esme.  I just can't even comprehend it yet!

Thanks for the review :)  I can't reply to FF but at least I can reply here!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

I am really glad Esme is ok. I hope he makes up with Carlisle and they explain to the gang. Can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

I promise some Edward/Carlisle time next chapter :)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

loved it! perfect! :-D



Author's Response:

So glad you loved it!  TY!  I've got your FF reviews saved to reply to if they ever get the feature working again! ;)

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme

I love how Edward doesn't want the delivery guy to see Bella, lol.

I can't wait to see what else Emmett does with David and the video of Jasper.



Author's Response:

Haha yeah Edward's not about his girl giving out a show!

I'm glad you're looking forward to the fun ahead!  Thanks so much hon!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

geat! i actually enjoy the game details the way you write them. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  That's a huge compliment to me!  Love it!  See you soon with more!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Conference Championship

bring on the superbowl :-)



Author's Response:

It's on! hehe Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

I would really love to see Edward finding out he will be a daddy, both times and the births.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll see what I can do :)

Sunburn by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Lemony oneshot.  Bella lets her soon-to-be sisters talk her into sunning in the back yard, with citrusy results. Originally written as a trivia prize for bloftus, for guessing where the title of "As Children After Play" came from.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4093 Read Count: 2285
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!

always looking for more canon/AU stuff

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184471
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Antidote

I was so happy when I got the update email from fanfic but went to read it and it wasn't there. So I decided to review here.

Option 1 dress is my favorite, but I also really love the color of 5.

I really love how Bella came to her senses quickly and went home. I am also very happy that they know Tanya was lying about those critic reviews. Can't wait for the next one. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bella

so far so good :-)



Author's Response:

Your response is so funny to me, it's the same response I use!  I always leave a review when I read, i figure that if they took the time to write it, and I took the time to read it, i could at least leave an opinion.  In the first few chapers, though, there is often not enough to go on, and I'm not sure I like the premise - so I just say what you did!  thanks for hanging in there and reviewing!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Cobwebs

he's going back, yay



Author's Response:

I tried to make him just be the most pitiful, confused, upset Edward that i possibly could!  Hopefully, I succeedd!  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Billy

so bella and an unphased jake will be out there alone, coming up against vic maybe



Author's Response:

Yes . . . Victoria.  She has her rold to play in this, and Jake doesn't even know he's a werewolf!  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Planes & Plans

i'm on the edge of my seat :-)



Author's Response:

I absolutely love to hear that, it means i'm doing my job!  Thanks for telling me, you made my day!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 5 Posters & Crews

i hate triangles, lol



Author's Response:

Not to worry then!  Not much of a tiangle in this story!  thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Returning Home

well at least alice has made the first step toward smoothing things over with Charlie :-)



Author's Response:

Charlie is a piece of work and so fun to write!  He is going to be difficult about this for some time to come!

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Natural

I thought I saw this coming and now I am wondering if she will end up racing against Edward. He may join up to get to her, lol.



Author's Response:

I never thought of such a thing!  Good imagination, but no, no Edward racing in this story!

Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Leaves & Looking

ok they would be showing her face if she was winning :-)



Author's Response:

True, but remember it's fictin, and the story is that she is keeping the helmet on and refusing photos!

And, she only just started winning, drag racing doesn't get mych tv airtime anyway!  lol

Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Drag & Pull

i hate cliffies...please update soon



Author's Response:

Update on its way!  Hope you are enjoying the ride!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Ambulance

YAY, if she isn't going to live he can change her, LOL.



Author's Response:

Yay!  He found her!

Glad they are together again,k now we have to see what's ahead, and whether she will have him back easily or not!

Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Promises

wow, i like it, your jake is much more mature than canon jake, lol



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Jake just has held her through enough nightmares that he knows first hand how she feels, and he really cares about her.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Victoria

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions

wow, wasn't expecting a wedding so fast but i like it. can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Well, she saw him, and she wanted to know he would actually stay!  Marry the boy then!

Thanks again for taking time to leave an opinion, it helps to know if readers are emjoying the chapters and what they are geting out of it!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Early Surprises

I like the setup of this fic and I want to see what happens next. I am really happy that Jake wanted Bella to be happy more than feeling the need to take her from Edward. Of course, he isn't a wolf either. I guess that makes the difference. But Sue seems amenable too.

They have done everything in the world already to show Charlie that they are in love, married, financially secure and very happy. There is no way somebody could be that dense and in denial after seeing that much evidence to the contrary, lol. 

Now I am wondering if Rene is giving Bella a hard time about it too.



Author's Response:

It does kind of make you wonder if Renee said something in private, doesn't it?  Well, Charlie is just going to have to adjust!  Thank you for the review, and the encouragement!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)

I am really enjoying the story. I am so happy that Rene is happy for Bella and she may be just the person to make Charlie see that Bella & Edward are a forever kind of deal, lol.

I am glad that Bella was only working through her own emotions and not crying because of something that someone else did or said. I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Be careful with spelling errors and switching POVs when you are writing and editing. It can get confusing. Like in the beginning of this chapter. You switched between Alice and Bella when it was supposed to be Alice. You might look for a beta reader who will help you edit and catch your mistakes.



Author's Response:

I am going to go check out the POV's right now, thank you for letting me know you think there is a problem,  Actually, I have a beta as well as reediting the story again when i get it back from her!  I guess some mistakes just get through!

 

Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Birthday

Finally, he acknowledges that he is blind and stupid to think she will leave Edward, lol.    



Author's Response:

Well, it took enough convincing!  Not sure he is on the edward bandwagon yet though!  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife

I think hearing them serves Charlie right, lol.



Author's Response:

It had to keep him up all night, right?  He is really being a hard sell, but i modeled him after my grandad, the Charlie in the book reminded me of him.  he had his own ideas about the way things really were, regardless of reality!  thank you for reviewing the story!

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Mom

I like Rene much better than Charlie!



Author's Response:

Yes but Renee is far mre intuitive - they may not get much past her!  Thank yu for leaving the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56337
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Oh, Danny Boy

Thanks for the update. I don't want to read  about her long drawn out relationship with someone else so I think the way you wrote her thing with Riley was a good approach. I hate cliffies so get on with the crumble of her reality, lol,  and Protectiveward's. He really needs to be shaken up :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Glad you understand her need to try to live without him/get on with her life. I was a little nervous, but everyone has been good with it. *shwew*

Sorry for the cliffie. This story lends itself to them so well! LOL Oh yeah, I think Edward's reaction to Riley will shake things up for them. :)

Thanks again -Sandra

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Small Town

Love the setup. Now I am wondering what Edward is thinking and if we will ever have EPOV? I really hope Bella does get a life. I also hope she makes Edward work for it a little, unless he has secretly been carrying a torch too but didn't want to see her that way because of the age difference and that she is practically a sister, lol. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

You know, I really wanted to keep it BPOV, that's what I have written it all in so far - but I'm thinking that an EPOV might be a good outtake...so it's possible. I know people are going to want to hear what he's thinking - and it's way different than what Bell's thinking, so maybe I'll work something up. :)

Anyway - Thanks so much for reading and leaving me a note. I"ll update next week. 

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: With a Little Help From My Friends

I really want to know what Edward is thinking, lol. If they aren't gettting together anytime soon then I think Bella should get some decent dates/boyfriend. I hate triangles but if Edward won't bite, I don't want Bella to be alone and lonely while everybody else is having fun.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I totally zoned out on replying - crazy week. So sorry. :)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There seems to be a consensus that people are wondering WTF Edward is thinking. LOL

I'm going to post ch3 now - you'll get your wish - although I know what you're really wishing for, and that's later. :)

thanks again -

sandra

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Shame

Wow, so much need and loathing...I don't really like manwhoreward but he is in so much pain, wanting her so much, that I must know what is going on, lol. Since she is so off limits to him and he is so sorry and disgusted, I am thinking she is family to him, and/or younger. Maybe somebody he should care for and protect but not lust after. Somone not related by blood but maybe his father's wife, or brother's wife. Or maybe nobody's wife/girlfriend but a precious daughter/sister/something to his best friend, or she is his step-sister, etc. That would certainly be considered forbidden, lol. His dad/step-dad would probably want to kill him but it sounded more like a jealous lover to me. I don't mind forbidden. In fact I kind of like that but I am hoping she isn't married/in love with the guy who would kill him because I am a hopeless romantic who likes to read fics with one great love of their life kind of stuff. I can't wait to see who she is to him.



Author's Response:

I've been rather amused by everyone's theories, and how far off most of them are, but perhaps you're a bit more insightful about a few things. And I'll say this... everyone has their 'thing' about Edward, and the way he is written or portrayed. This Edward hasn't been well received by all, and I get that, even though most of the h00rs like him just fine and are anxious for more of his escapades... but just know that this is just one glimpse, and he is not a one-dimensional character. Even if what comes next doesn't keep you with him, thank you for giving it a shot.

Summary:

Bella pays a visit to the Doctors and gets more than she bargains for.

AH, lemony fresh,  originally intended as a one shot, but I squeezed out a few more chapters.

I acknowledge that all things Twilight belong to Mrs Meyers and that i'm just playing around.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15686 Read Count: 19004
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it! you should make this longer and maybe give us a little bit of back story too :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, you've boosted my confidence, I'm working my way up to writing some thing longer. x

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Swan's typical teenage life is forever changed, she's forced to rely on a brother she barely knows and the makeshift family that surrounds him.  AH, OOC, ExB

"Darlin’, I have some bad news,” Wes began, and what he said next ripped my world apart.

I knew he was talking, trying to explain what happened, trying to lessen the blow. His lips were moving, but the pain was so loud I couldn’t hear him. My father was dead. Dad, the only family I really had, was gone, and I was…what?

 

*banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17212 Read Count: 7816
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The End

oh poor Bella, bring on the rest of the gang, she needs them

Summary:

Nerdy, studious Bella has a boyfriend... but nobody believes her.  They  all think she made him up, and give her hell for it.  Then, Edward is made aware of the situation...

Inspired by the song "Landing in London" by 3 Doors Down


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8222 Read Count: 3406
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Life IS good!! loved it!! you should write more (and of course let us see how lauren and jessica act now, lol)

Summary:

Banner for Desktop Desires

 

Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well what there is of it, I really like. but it is so short its tough to have much of an opinion :)



Author's Response:

The one shot contest it was written for had the rules of 500 words or less. This was pushing the limit :)

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

love more *traditional vampire* Darkward that is not out killing humans, yum! don't really like that Jessica got a sample of him, lol and I can't wait for him to meet Bella :)



Author's Response:

I had to start him some where...at the bottom, it had to be Jessica (and Mike) to show his progression...his tastes will improve

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Consumed

hope they meet next chapter

Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Feelings

don't like jacob having a sample of bella either, but his presence seemed completely incidental to her, lol

Eleven by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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How could I have ever thought my perfect recall of her would be enough to sustain me in my pitiful existence? The memory was nothing—nothing compared to the living, breathing reality of my reason for existing.

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Warnings: This story includes difficult / sensitive subject matter that may include one or more of the following subjects: self-harm, vampirism, intercourse, character death.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of Stephenie Meyer. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8716 Read Count: 587
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2012 Updated: 14 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Eleven

I liked it until the end. Your should REALLY put a warning on this because many of us do NOT like to be shocked in this way. If I had known ahead of time how it ended I would not have even read it. This kind of end with NO WARNING is exactly the reason why I am so hesitant to even give a new fic/writer a chance. 



Author's Response:

Hello, please don't be angry with me. There is a warning in the story notes, and chapter notes under the banner of the story! I know people skip reading these, but what else can I do? 

 

I'm sorry for your shock, and my intention was never to turn you off reading new stories...so, I' m sorry.

 

BB xx

Hey Arisona by Cinaxoxo99 Rated: M [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

It's just another day at the store when Bella and her freak of a boyfriend walk in, will a certain peice of blue clothing be the end of Mike's long perverted life. It's just a fun and a little juicy one shot from Mike's perspective.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1210 Read Count: 114
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot.

lol, poor mikey. a guy can dream i guess. i am strictly an E&B woman :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93652
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

loving this so far, can't wait to see how it develops :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, more tomorrow!

Summary:

Photobucket When a class activity is to give each other compliments, Edward and Bella can't   help but reveal their adoration for each other in the form of compliments despite the fact that Edward has been ignoring Bella for her own good. ExB one shot. Set in Twilight.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1349 Read Count: 482
[Report This] Published: 22 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sweet! you could expand this too, make it a dream sequence, lol

Summary:

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Shortly after Edward's proposal to Bella during Eclipse, Bella inquires about the origin of her engagement ring. Hence begins the tale of Edward's human mother through the use of her journals. ExB fluff. One-shot!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3473 Read Count: 270
[Report This] Published: 27 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it was great! I loved it! you should continue from here and do your canonish AU. I would definitely read it. I am always looking for more stuff like this to read. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you :) If I think of a way to continue this one day then I might, but for now it will remain a one-shot.

Efficacy by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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Edward is going to leave Bella. She knows the situation will be dire if she doesn’t act quickly.  Will her faith in his love inadvertently save them, or will they both live a lonely existence without hope of ever being together again?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10534 Read Count: 715
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Saydonee Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Efficacy

Awesome! but too short. I would love to read more.