Reviews by CanadianMommyX2
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I am sorry you had the week from Hell.  I am glad you updated!  I love this story.  I get all excited when I see an update from you.  I hope this week is better!

CM



Author's Response:

all is fine - updating early and thank you so much for your review xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64022
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

I just found this story and I have been sitting down and reading it all at once.  I felt compelled to review at this point because I LOVE Alice here.  I can't stand Rose and Emmett has his head shoved too far up his ass to see her for the bitch she is.  I am sure she has her "reasons" but she is acting to high and mighty.  I LOVE that Alice is standing up to them.

This story has me captivated!

CM

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Ahhh the suspense is killing me!  I am loving this story, I love that it keeps me guessing.  I have no theories, because everytime I have a theory, you somehow manage to read my mind and blow my theories out of the water.
I am loving the character development you have going.  I get frustrated with some stories where everything is rushed.  What's the hurry?  It's not like I have a life beyond FanFic LOL!

You manage to keep me on the edge of my seat with every update.  If it is good to leave your reader always wanting more, then you are doing a fantastic job!

I am dying to read more!
CM



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland

I have rarely liked Alice in any stories I read, but I really don't like this one.  I also wish Jasper would grow a set and stand up to Alice.  She was so condescending even to him. Her attitude makes me cringe.

 

CM

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61915
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I have only recently "found" your story.  Thank you for dealing with the subject of pregnancy/infant loss so delicately.  I myself have had 5 miscarriages.  The pain is something that never goes away.  People who have not suffered such a loss often don't understand that it is losing a child, even though you never got to meet them.

I am enjoying this story and can't wait to continue to read.

CM

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

I think you just won the award for best proposal ever!  I loved this update.  I have been faithfully following both stories and I love both equally.

I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love to hear that readers are enjoying the stories.

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

I love getting this story from EPOV.  I have been enjoying Bella's version of the story, but getting Edward's version seems to help complete it.

CM



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  I'm glad everyone is patiently waiting for the next V&V update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138710
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am enjoying this story.  I like how I can't predict what is going to happen.  I am pulling for Bella and her babies.

I also found it funny that at the bottom of my computer screen there is an online add with Taylor Lautner advertising his movie Abduction, as I am reading this chapter!

I look forward to reading more

CM

One Stupid Thing by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

When thirteen year old Edward Cullen met sixteen year old Isabella Swan she became his "Older-Woman-Secret-Crush." Over the next ten years their lives drifted apart only to have Fate bring them back together again and again. Now at ages 26 and 23 they are reunited in Forks. Bella is preparing to marry the wrong man...in Edward's eyes. Bella is headed to the altar, and Edward is running out of time... Can he convince her that there is another choice? Maybe Fate will intervene just one more time.

Told through flashbacks from both BPOV and EPOV. Lemons later because it would just be sooooo inapropriate at their beginning! Humor, romance, angst and suspense...because I love it all!

Lovely banner by the even lovelier Coleen561!

Thank you to Twi-Ho...Twi-Holoic for the awesome banner below!

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65635 Read Count: 3514
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2011 Updated: 18 Jun 2011
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Earliest Impressions

Consider me your stalker, you can't hide from me :)

I read this chapter this morning and then had computer problems and couldn't review, so I came back.  I am not finding this confusing.  You are doing a good job of separating pov's and times.  I am really interested to see where this one is going.

I am glad you can reassure me about HEA.  I don't mind the journey to get there, as long as I know it will get there.  I know you won't let me down LOL!  I will keep the faith.

Till next time,

CM



Author's Response:

Hi CMStalkerBabe!

It's nice to see you...or, er...your reviews. :) I'm glad to know it's not confusing going reading this thing. I think where it's headed will be a fun ride.

And yes, I do love me my Happily Edward Afters, so you needn't worry.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Girls Keep Keepsakes Too

Angela needs to be a better friend and tell Bella not to settle for the "dog".  Which chapter is it when he goes cliff diving again?  He seems like a decent guy, but Bella is settling.  Also she has an issue with the age gap between her and Edward, but the one between her and Jake is okay?  She needs a good friend to smack her on the back of the head, where are Rose and Alice when we need them?

I laughed at Edward's obsessive thoughts at dinner.  Really sharing her saliva?  Having her declare how she and Edward belong together at dinner had been laughing.

Looking foward to more...

Karen



Author's Response:

Hi Karen!

GAH! I'm so behind with review replies!!! I don't know why I let myself get so bogged down. I get to a point where I am struggling getting updates written and then I can't even bring myself to reply to reviews. It's an illness. :)

You are right about Angela...she needs to set Bella straight, but she doesn't yet know there is a problem...neither does Bella. :) Only WE know that she is with the wrong guy.

I loved the "cliff diving" reference. It's come up a number of times in reviews. ;) It always makes me laugh. I guess I should include it...make Jake have a harrowing cliff-diving experience at the end of a chapter, and then leave you all hanging from that cliffy (LOL), to come back to the next chapter and see if I've really offed the guy.

He is a decent guy. Just like in Twilight. But you are right about Bella settling...just like in Twilight...she would have been settling if she'd stayed with him. She still does have that age gap thing with a younger man...although for some reason it's okay for her to be three years younger than the guy. She has always also seen Edward as her tutee and then her student. He has always been behind her in school, college, and in a career. Now, however, she is seeing him on a level playing field...although she has Jake blinders on. So there is a big dilemma to get past before this becomes a B & E story.

You said she needs a good friend to smack her on the back of the head. Maybe she needs a new friend in the guise of a former student.

Glad you are still enjoying Littleward's pervy thoughts. I love that little hormonal guy. ;)

Thanks for the review. I hope to have a new chapter up mid-week. Thanks for reading and rreviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Knock-Knock, No Joke

This is going to be highly entertaining.

I laughed when Edward was excited that she didn't run for the hills when she found out he was moving in.  Anyone in their right mind would be celebrating and figuring out ways to combine two apartments into one if they found out Edward was moving into the building!

"Casual" Edward, I love how he revealed his new residence location to Bella.  Obsessed, stalker, pervert!  Gotta love him!

LOVE Jasper.  I have said it many times, you write the Jasper character very well!  He sure is good at math and at helping Edward figure out how to get more "Bella time"

I look forward to more!

Karen

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Cornerstone

Okay, like it so far.  I am hoping and praying (maybe you can reassure me...please?) that this will end up Edward/Bella.  I couldn't stomach if she ends up with someone else.

Looking forward to see where this one is going...

CM



Author's Response:

Hi CM!!

You found me!

You know me...I am a member of Team The Pretty...not the dark side...Team Bow-wow. lol I love canon coupling, so B won't end up with Carlisle or James or Charlie or anything kinky and perverted/ill like those things. I firmly believe in a HEA---"Happily Edward After." ;) But it'll be a real bitch getting there.

Take care, CM. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Old Friends

"Sometimes you get so wrapped up in what you're reading, that you don't even realize that you're not really there in that book. You forget you are not in that story with those characters you've come to like so well and feel you know so thoroughly. You step into their little universe and you forget there's a whole other real world out there while you're spending time in theirs"

You just described what reading Twilight is like for me, as well as at what reading your stories is like for me.  I get lost in your characters.

Emmett, Emmett, Emmett...there really isn't much to say about him.  He makes me laugh.  You seem to be able to capture the childlike qualities he has.  Yet you also show the protective big brother side.

Jake was mentioned...not happy with that.  Can you send him cliff diving?  Please?  I am trusting you here...

The mind of 13 year old Edward is a scary and fascinating place to be.  It makes me glad that I can't read minds, especially around young teenage boys.

Looking forward to more

Karen



Author's Response:

Hi Karen!

I'm so glad you liked my little nod to being totally enamored with Twilight and the resulting fanfics and loving being lost in this little universe. Yep. That little paragraph was intentional and directed to all fanfic readers:

"Sometimes you get so wrapped up in what you're reading, that you don't even realize that you're not really there in that book. You forget you are not in that story with those characters you've come to like so well and feel you know so thoroughly. You step into their little universe and you forget there's a whole other real world out there while you're spending time in theirs"

I've been a long-time reader of Master of the Universe and the final chapter was recently posted. I didn't know until I read it that it was the final chapter. Yikes...it was like having the rug pulled out from under me and I'm still reeling and numb as if someone died. Sort of. I think you know what I mean.

So back to your review: I'm glad you like my Emmett...I guess I really see him only one way---constant torment and loving older brother.

Sorry about the Jake thing. I have to do it...but trust me... ("Trust me."  -E. Cullen) I do love the cliff diving scenario, however. Maybe when the tide is out...?

Thanks for the review(s). I'll reply to the one for Chapter 6 in a day or so. Happy Water for Elephants Day!

-bannerday

 

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Guys Do Keep Keepsakes

So now I want to know what happened on Edward's 21st b-day.  I laughed at poor injured Edward with his one track mind.  The poor boy is in pain yet he still has the mindset to perv on Bella.  Typical teenage boy!

Bella has finally started to see the light.  Now she just needs to throw what's his name off of a cliff.

I will sit back and wait for her to tell Angela and I all about Jake...

Karen



Author's Response:

Hi Karen!

So, so, so, so, sorry about the lengthy wait between your review and my two-week late reply. :( I felt kind of listless about writing. I guess I was kind of in a funk. I finally got my act together and finished a chpater 8 this morning.

So, you were wondering about Edward's 21st birthday. You'll get a little more on that event in chapter 8.

And poor Littleward and his post tree drop injury lst chapter. Banged up but still ready for any imagined action his pervy little mind could conjure. ;) Such a cute little horndog.

I love how everyone is aching for me to throw Jake off that cliff-diving cliff. When the tide's out, I'm assuming? Thought so. lol Well, you'll get quite a bit of background on the jake story in chapter 8 as well. And Angela has a lot of pretty interesting thoughts to share. If only Bella were listening to them and thinking of how they can be applied to how she feels and is resistant to feel about Edward. But we've got to give her time. She's got to come around and see what's right in front of her.

Hope you like chapter 8. I look forward to hearing from you. I always really enjoy what you have to say. Thank you for that last review. And once again, I'm sorry I was such a slacker in replying.

Take care, bb!

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Conversation Hearts

I really don't like conversation hearts, but if they could get me an Edward I could learn to like them.  I love the sweet side of Edward that you always manage to show.  I love that he kept the hearts and didn't eat them.  When I read what they said, I thought, he better not eat those hearts!
I love the visual of Tyler getting tag-teamed by Emmett and Edward.  The two Cullen boys are my hereos, protecting a damsel in distress.

I am liking these peaks into Bella and Edward's histories.  I also like that we are getting both points of view.

Can't wait for more!

CM



Author's Response:

Hi CM!

There more! I updated chapter 4.

Conversation hearts don't really float my boat either, but it's fun to think that Little Edward saved that box and those three candies and put them away for safe-keeping. Who knows what else got put into that box over time?

I love the sweet side of Edward. I'm glad you were thinking he shouldn't have eaten those candies...and see? He didn't!

The Tyler Crowley beatdown is proving to be a favorite. What's not to love about beating the crap out of a lesser character? LOL I love the two Cullen boys. There's an Emmett chapter you're really going to love. I love Emmett picking on his younger brother--as if you didn't figure that out in the Transfer. :)

I'm glad to know you like the peeks into their pasts and hearing both POVs. I just hope it doesn't get confusing. Seems like everyone reading and commenting is okay with it.

Thanks for the review. I can always count on you!

x -bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Upside to a Beatdown

I love horny little teenage Edward.  I am surprised though that his grades are improving.  I really don't think he is focusing on schoolwork when Bella is tutoring him.

These little tidbits of information that you are letting out keep a person wanting to know more.  A great way to hook a reader.

Will Alice and Jasper be making an appearance this time around?  I love how you write Jasper.  I still reflect fondly on his kilt...

Looking forward to learning more about these two.

Karen



Author's Response:

Hi Karen!

I don't know how I let this review from you sit here for nearly 2 weeks unanswered. I'm soooo ashamed. I think my problem is I've got too much going on on too many sites now. Plus there's that annoying little thing called "a job" ---it just really cuts into my writing time.

I'm glad you love my little Horndogward. ;) His grades are improving because he really IS very bright, just never put out the effort until Bella walked into the kitchen. and once he saw how positively she reacted to a few good grades, you can bet he is working hard to remember everything. Maybe he goes back to his room and studies once she has left since he was so busy ogling her while they were working together. lol

I'm glad to know you feel kind of "hooked" by the little bits of information. It's kind of hard to decide what piece of information to drop here and there. I'm really such an organized, linear, chronological sort of person...telling a story this way really goes against the grain. :)

Thank you for the review. I should post chapter 5 today or tomorrow. Yippee!!!

Thanks for sticking with me and thanks for the review, Karen!

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Rite of Passage?

I will admit I laughed at poor Edward falling out of a tree.  He literally fell for Bella.  The sad thing for him is, he fell before he got to see the "good stuff".  He didn't even get to see a pillow fight at the sleepover.  Poor boy.  Then to be found out by your father.  He should have pulled the "Pet Sematary" card.  Maybe the cat came back, they do have 9 lives you know.

I got excited at the mention of Jasper.  Please let him come into the story, kilt or no kilt (no kilt has some possibilities here).  Oh yes and 3 yrs isn't too big an age difference.  There is 2 yrs between my hubby and I.  Of course we were 18 and 20 when we started dating.

Looking forward to more as always

Karen



Author's Response:

Hi Karen!

That poor little Pervward DID fall for Bella, didn't he? And thank heavens God was watching out for him, not allowing him to become the pervert that he nearly did. ;) Poor Carlisle...coming to the realization that Little Edward was INDEED just as bad as Emmett. ;)

Jasper...yep he'll be in this story. He's Edward's best buddy growing up,; same age. I don't imagine there will be a kilt, though maybe I'll figure a way out how to get a kilt mention in there...for old times sake. ;) I think you'll like this Jasper...he'll be kind of an outdoorsey, granola-eating sort of philosophizer.

And the whole three years thing...so many of my readers are 2-5 years older than their hubs. You all know it's fine, I know it's fine, Edward sure doesn't give a shit...but Bella...she's got issues, plus they just have a weird past, in addition to the whole tutoring thing...there's more. You'll going to get a lot of that very shortly.

Thanks for the review, bb!

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Two Rites, Same Night

Okay, don't like the thought of Edward and Jessica, BUT I will forgive him, he was a young, pervy 17 yr old.  Forks doesn't seem to have that many options...

I can only imagine what view Jasper is talking about.  Why do I have the feeling someone lives in one of those apts that face each other?  Please let it be Bella...

It is nice to see that Edward's mind hasn't changed much since he was a young teenager.  LOL!

Can't wait to read more...

Karen



Author's Response:

Hi Karen!

Gah!!! Behind the times again!

So...to chapter 9 first of all...

None of us really likes the thought of Jessica, but Edward was young, there was some peer pressure coming at him from several directions...Jessica and Jasper...And you're right...Forks doesn't have that many options. Besides...the chances of him bagging the Spanish teacher were not looking so good.

And the view...well...that's another chapter. I'll get there to that review in a bit. ;)

And yes...we're finally getting to see a little bit more of Edward's thought processes. He's still got that edge that he had as a little Pissy Youngward as well as little Pervward's thoughts and dreams. LOL

I'm going to try to update the Transfer before I post another chapter of OST. We'll see how that goes...this story has me by the hand now and is leading me along. It's hard going back and forth. :)

Thanks for the review once again, Karen. I always enjoy hearing from you.

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Room With a View

I love getting to know Jasper.  You write his character very well.  I am so glad Edward got the Bella-View...I mean Bellevue appartment.  Now he can keep running into her all the time.  He can console her when Jake takes a Swan dive off a cliff.

I like how you give enough information to make us want more!  Little hints and pieces of the story here and there....

Till next time,

CM



Author's Response:

Hi CM!

Under a week with this review reply! That's a new recent record for me!

I'm glad you liked getting to know Jasper. I think I'm going to make him a real "character" again. I love him that way. It's such a contrast to buttoned-up Edward. ;) So, yes. Edward's got the Bella-view at the Bellevue! Could anything be more perfect...or more upsetting, depending upon whether or not Jake is visiting her... :( But you are right...they will be running into each other a lot. You should read the review I got just prior to yours. I wrote a little "outtake-let" for that reader in my reply, based on thoughts along those same lines. ;)

Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying. I think the next chapter will be interesting.

Read you soon!

-bannerday

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love that this story is so different from anything else I have read.  Not only for the storyline itself, but it isn't often that Bella is the strong "leader" of the two, and she protects Edward.

Edward's innocence is almost heartbreaking.  I love that Billy is able to talk to him about his father. 

I look forward to more updates.

CM

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I was so glad to see an update!  I was just thinking of this story the other day and hoped you hadn't given up. This is one of my favourites. I love your writing.