Reviews by JLS0823
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995728
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

What a great chapter.   This is truly what people can go through when faced with a traumatic experience.   Thanks for sharing that with us.   

 

Great and long chapter.   Have a great weekend.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review!

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56482
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 48: Jenny's Twins

Great chapter...so glad the twins are born and doing well.   

 



Author's Response:

thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138 North on the Orient

Great chapter.  

 

I am going to start switching my favorites over to TWCS just in case my favorite stories get pulled from FF.   

I have always loved your stories!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263188
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights

Awesome chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 22 of His Cimmerian View.  There aren’t a lot of questions about things going on, other than the arrival of Uncle Harry and of course Sue’s return.  The story only has roughly 10 to 12 chapters left and through 26 are written and 27 is more than half way completed.  BPOV out-take is coming along nicely but man alive is it HUGE over 22K word count right now and it is for sure a tissue warning.  As for the few questions we have gotten, we have answers... We want to be clear that Emmett filed a paper that is giving Bella custody until the court hearing so right now no one can take the twins away from her, without first going to court.  We also had someone ask about the title of the story over at TWCS, it is the same as it is at FFN... however at TWCS I have found it is easier to look up the author and then find the story, the story search is not super simple like it is at FFN.  We are the same names both author name and story name at all sites we post at.  On a side and personal note, I am very sorry for the delay of this... after I posted the last chapters on Thursday morning, my mother passed away.  Unless something gets in the way the only thing that will be delayed is this review reply.  The next chapter is ready to go... minus mine and Nikky’s final read through anyway.  I want to thank you all for the kind words shared on Facebook already and thank you for the prayers and well wishes.  If you haven’t joined us on Facebook, please do so there are lots of fun discussions and of course sometimes extra teasers and info too.  Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Thanks everyone have a great week.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 23: teaser subject to changes during beta process…

It’s New Year Eve and the twin’s eighth birthday.  Seth and Leah shared a party yesterday at Chuck E. Cheese and they loved it.  Esme, Chas, and Angela all took the day off and came to help out at the party.  Aro brought Sulpicia and their son, Sammy, who is ten.  Sammy seemed to have taken a liking to Leah, as he stayed mainly with her the entire time. Esme and Zafrina both said it was cute and sweet, but all I wanted to do was kill the kid.  Bella even laughed at me and gave me a look when I let out a growl at little Sammy when he pulled Leah away while she was talking to us. I looked back at Bella and shrugged my shoulders, because I wasn’t really sure where the over-protectiveness came from.

Then there were the moms or whores as I call them.  I got hit on a lot.  Almost every mother of a child that had been invited was dressed like they were having a night out on the town, not taking their child to a classmate’s birthday party.  Some even said that I was really nice to help Bella and her kids out like I have been.  I felt like I was going to lose it as they made her sound so beneath them and that she was simply a charity case.  Thankfully, Bella kept me calm and stopped me from screaming at them.  As soon as school is back in session, I’ll be making it very clear to everyone what Bella and I are to each other. The fact that this was a place for children, and that it was Seth and Leah’s first real birthday party, stopped me from performing a very hot, public display of affection with Bella.  I know for a fact I would have enjoyed it, and I’m sure I would have made Bella enjoy it, too.

The Bunny Ranch by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Her outward beauty entices him, her innocent optimism intrigues him, her loving heart ensnares him. A lighthearted, fluffy tale about how a twenty-something's sanguine leash on life brings joy and happiness to even the gruffest member of the Playboy Club. A/H

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65809 Read Count: 24564
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just love this storyline!!!   

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love your powerful Bella!

The Mating Bond by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

It's like tunnel vision. And once eye contact is made, there is absolutely no reversing it. The more physical contact that is made, the more animalistic and primal the bond comes to be. What will it mean when Edward and Bella find out that their bond is unique? What will it mean when they realize that their bond has the power to change the world as we know it?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12251 Read Count: 1927
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2016 Updated: 20 Apr 2016
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely loving this story!!   I love the detail you write about the mating bond and like reading about the protection rights for Bella.   

 

Also, OF COURSE I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!   I always have loved your stories and this one seems like another great one!   Love IT!

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story and this chapter!  Hope Alice's intentions are good since she is blocking him.   We will just have to wait and find out.   I can't wait for another chapter...you are truly one of my favorite writers!!!

Summary:

 

Hearing news of her ailing grandfather, Bella Swan returns to the one place she thought she left. Read as Bella discovers old and new friends, falls in love, learns a few things about herself, and maybe even discover the true meaning of American Honey. AH Canon Couples


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20218 Read Count: 1481
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2017 Updated: 06 Jan 2017
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love this story and looking forward to reading more!   Thanks so much!

 

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter....thanks so much for writing a wonderful story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a single mom of two boys trying to make ends meet. Edward is a successful business man. Can he help her? Will she let him?

 Banner made by HeartforTwilight Production

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54251 Read Count: 71662
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2017 Updated: 23 Nov 2017
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just love this story!   So glad that Bella got out of that diner.  Can't wait for the next update



Author's Response:

?Thank you for reading and reviewing

Into You by FireRed21 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26] New!
Summary:

into you

 

Edward Cullen is a regular guy with a regular life with a future to look forward to, who is also a huge fan of the famous singer and actress Bella Swan. Or is it more than just being a fan. All human.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 329822 Read Count: 13289
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2020 Updated: 10 Apr 2024
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Can’t Help Falling In Love

So glad Bella and Charlie came back 



Author's Response:

Hey, thank you for the reviews! I'm glad you are enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 6: We Own The Night

Renee is a piece of work for sure

 

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 5: When Two Worlds Collide

So glad they found her dog and had a fun birthday 

 

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Shine

Sounds like the concert was awesome!

 

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Curiosity Kill The Swan

Great chapter...can't wait to read the next

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Something Just Like This

Glad everyone got to hang out together 

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Night Changes

WOnderful first date for them...can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 11: This I Promise You

So sad they all had to go back to California

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 10: The Three Words Plus Two More

Sounds like the group really had a good time at Edwards house

Solace by MissLiss15 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

Solace Banner

 

 Pregnant at 18, Bella struggles to make peace with her decision to give her baby up for adoption. Her father suggests moving in with her mother and step-father in Ohio for a change of pace. She meets Edward, a young Amish widower conflicted about his faith after his wife's death. Can they form a bond strong enough to help each other heal?

 

This story is very loosely based off of a story called Autumn’s Promise by Shelley Shepard Gray. It has no smut in it and is very Christian based (it’s an Amish story, so...lol!) but it’s so sweet and I hope some of you will check it out!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38632 Read Count: 13487
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2020 Updated: 01 Feb 2021
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Just love this story and so happy for Edward and Bella.

Summary:

CURRENTLY ON HIATUS: Two shy souls run into each other literally, and their lives change irrevocably. Separated by over 2,500 miles, their thoughts never drift far from each other regardless of that one small moment in time. Will fate step in and restart that shock to their souls? An E/B love story with minimal angst, livestock, farms, college, life, and citrus. No cheating!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28669 Read Count: 625
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2023 Updated: 12 Jan 2024
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I absolutely love this story and the pics you have on your blog!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So glad they all went out together



Author's Response:

Me too :) I love writing this...I feel like I'm invested in making them happy.

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Must be Bella;s new roommate



Author's Response:

We'll see! 

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So glad the met again.



Author's Response:

You can't keep them away from each other for too long...it's fate.

Summary:

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A guy trying to prove himself in the big city goes to the same bar every weeknight for one reason, and one reason alone…her. After pining for months, something sets him into motion to do what he’s wanted to do since he’s set eyes on her. Will she accept him into her life, or will she reject him?

A girl who grew up in the country wants a piece of the big city, so every weeknight she drives up and works in a famous Memphis bar. She felt like she got what she wanted, so she was about to quit…until he walked in. He’s come in every night she works for months, but besides sweet waves, blushing smiles, and sneaky glances there is nothing, until that night. Is it just him being sweet or is it the start of something new? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15681 Read Count: 699
[Report This] Published: 18 Jan 2024 Updated: 12 Feb 2024
Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Talk

SO gald they are going out on a date!

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Excitement

Bella is probably glad to not be at the bar anymore.   So glad Edward and her are together now.

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Designer Man

Love that they finally got to meet one another!

Reviewer: JLS0823 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Just A Little Cottage Chic

Love the story so far!