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Bio:
UPDATE: JULY 25, 2012
I CHANGE MY PEN NAME. PREVIOUSLY LetRobstenLuv4ever NOW LuvRPatz4ever. Thank you.
I am 42 yr old mother of 6 and I love all things Twilight. I love to read BDSM stories and all stories with a possesive Edward.
My second favorite stories to read is Mobward.
Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.
After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible?
(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I love the lemons. I wish Edward would get more vocal with them though. Oh and it would be nice to read what he did with Emmett too. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL, some day, but when all you know is grunts, you aren't going to say mucn during sex.
Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser
Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward. The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.
Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair. When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?
(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)
- Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
- Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184539
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
These guys are going to be so hot when they finally do have sex. Its driving me crazy and I must admit gets me pissed at times. I am thinking what ever Alice keeps dreaming about has something to do with her mother.
Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out
Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: First Day
well I am hoping it is Edward. I must say the chapters are very short.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Friendly Surprises
Well I am a team Edward all the way. No Jacob at all. I mean its ok for him to be a FRIEND ONLY but thats it. I guess I was probably one that mentioned the short chapters. Sorry about that, but I like to really get into a story and sometimes it gets frustrating to have to keep stoping and waiting for another chapter. lol. But I understand it. I think Bella did the only thing she could have done and left the diner I mean I would have too. I wonder how he will be able to make it up to her.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Breakthrough
Well its about time that Edward realize he needed to do something. I dont know anything about this thread that authors keep talking about and I know I am missing a lot of teaser but I tried to figure it out but I just couldn't. So I hope I get at least one teaser.
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Thinking
Well at least they are getting a little bit closer. And the only thing Edward could really do was sit with her. She will tell him if she wants too. I just hope she finds her strength to tell Jacob that she doesn't have feelings for him. I was just thinking about you and wondering if you were still writing. I am so glad that you are.
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Talking to the Dancing Gods
He's so sweet bringing her lunch and remembering how she likes her hamburger. ahhhh.
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Rain Checks
Well I am glad he got the answer he wanted that she was having dinner with a girl and not some guy.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I vote for slapping the shit out of Bella. LOL. She knew what she was doing and she still did it. Its not all his fault. She should at least hear him out. I thought for sure he would kiss her since that was one ot the no no's in his rules. Cant wait for another update.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
These two are both so screwed up. they need to grab a hold of each other and he needs to make love to her and they both have to tell each other what the hell happened in their past. Its killing me waiting so long for an update.
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Well I am a little upset that Bella is still playing the victim card in regards to what her and Edward did years ago. He didn't force her yet she is still acting like he did. I feel like she should have more compassion for him. He is trying and she doesn't seem like she is trying at all. Uugghhh its frustrating, I just want them together already. Even if its some flirting and kissing, something, please.
Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done. The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her. Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well I liked the chapter I mean he didn't push her too bad. I mean she told him she didn't know how and he showed her so that was good. At least he gave her release too. lol. Good job.
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Well so far so good. I will continue to read this story and I really hope you do make the chapters longer as I love to read. It really sounds interesting and I am anxious to get into the story.
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well again I think the chapter are extremely short. 3-5 pages is not really what I would call a chapter. But I am enjoying the story. Its just hard to comment to much when we dont get very much information.
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Well this chapter was longer and for that I am thankful. I actually like EPOV more sometimes so hopefully you will keep that. I agree it seems like its not as easy as he thought it would be. lol
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Well Edward really seems to want to be with her and not just use her for sex. As for James well he seems to abuse Victoria, I guess that is one way that Edward could show Bella that he is not like that if he helps Victoria get away from James.
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I like it. I am wish that Edward would give her more pleasure. I think if he gave her the pleasure and showed her how good it could be she would be more willing to give herself to him.
Author's Response:
She'll get more pleasure even though she's not sure she wants it. Her head just keeps telling her to fight it. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Well I think he needs to give her more pleasure and definietly give her kisses. That is the way he is going to win her over.
After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...
Rated NC-17 for language and lemons
*SM owns Twilight
AH/canon pairings
My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Wow that was a great chapter. I really loved it and I am very interested to see where you take this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am really happy you like it! Thanks for leaving your thoughts.
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Ohhh how sad. I think maybe he thought she didn't want anything to do with him since she was the one that left the bed back in forks.
Author's Response:
I love hearing your thoughts on the story-thank you!
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Well it seems that Edward did love her like I thought. I am glad to know. I hope Bella gives him a chance now.
Author's Response:
Yes, he does love her. He just over-reacted to seeing her and panicked lol thanks for leaving your thoughts!
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Well at least their talking. I like Paul too. He seems nice.
Author's Response:
They'll get there. I like Paul, too. You havent seen the last of him...thanks for reading!
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I love how you are moving the story along and not dragging things out too much.
Author's Response:
Thank you-this story isnt really about them 'getting together', otherwise, it would be taking a while for them to find each other. It's more about them improving on the initial bond they have. Thank you!!
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Well things are moving right along and I am still really enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks again!!
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Sex in the car was sexy but I was a little dissapointed in the fact that she had already lost her cherry. I like when that is explained in the first lemon how he breaks her barrier.
Author's Response:
Well, I think they were a little surprised too...LOL I know what you mean though. Not sure I could do that justice...Thanks for reading :)
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Well I dont blame Edward at all for talking to Dan, he was being a prick just like Jacob. Men they think they can blackmail women all the time. I am glad that Edward stood up for her. Cant wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
The way I was looking at it is that he was just trying to help-looking out for her. I see both sides of it. But, when done properly, what woman doesn't want her man sticking up for her? Glad you liked how he handled it. Thanks!
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
i LOVED this chapter. I love the lemons. I would have loved to see some of the tattoo pictures or other pictures in the chapter though.
Author's Response: Awesome :) I know you want pictures...I can't figure out how to add them, first. Second, I don't normally have time to find a bunch of pictures to add to it. I WILL look into it and try to add some in my next fic, though!
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Again I wish you would include pictures. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! (and sorry!)
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I think Professor Black needs to be taught a lesson and I love that Bella told Rene off. I mean seriously where does she get off thinking she can talk to her daughter that way?
Author's Response: He's gonna get his. Renee is just a controlling biotch, who thinks that her opinion is the only right one. She'll get hers, too! (i know you already know this... lol )
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
I think the guys went overboard with the prank. I dont think I would have reacted quite so nicely if I were the girls. But I am glad that Rose got some pictures.
As for the accident, well it was an accident and I think Bella is right, that guy just wants money.
Author's Response: The prank was a little over the top. I'd like to see the pictures, though. How funny it would be!
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Oh I thought that was hot. I mean how many people can say they were inked while having your mans meat inside of you? lol I loved it.
Author's Response: LOL Probably not many! I wasn't sure how that would go over, but I thought it was pretty hot :) Thanks, so glad you liked it!
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I absolutely loved this story. I loved that you gave her two sets of twins and I adored the girls baby names. I am so glad that you are doing better from your surgery and I am sorry that I haven't reviewed more.
I am trying to catch up on all the stories I read and I am getting so behind, but eventually I will be reading your other stories as well.
Thank you for all your time and dedication to writing this wonderful piece and sharing it with us. I would have really loved to see some pictures of the tattoos but thats ok I have imagination too.
Author's Response: No apologies on the reviews, you already did more than most, and I really appreciate that! I am doing very well, thank you. I haven't felt this good in years :)I'm really happy you liked the way I ended Love Ink. I really will try to figure out the whole picture thing for the future. Thank you for reading, reviewing, supporting... :) See you next time!
After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
Wow that was such an on edge chapter. It was great though.
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Finally he is talking to her and he got to touch her and kiss her cheek. I love that Payton gave him some things from her treasure box. I love this story and I tried to comment on your blog but it didn't go through. I love the pictures too but I am disapointed that you changed the people for the characters only Edward is the same picture. I really wanted to see the actual people.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
That was a hot make out session. I dont know how Edward was able to stop. He sure is passionate. uuugghhhh I cant wait for the lemon.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Wow at least they both got some release. I am glad that Edward stood up to Xavier he needs to back off.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Wow I was shocked that Bella sent him away. I mean I know it was a shock to find out that he was in prison but it wasn't his fault. I am sure that the money they gave him was from the man his friend robbed.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
wow I was shocked at Emmetts reaction. I hope he doesn't cause trouble.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Wow that was HOT DAMN. I love the lemons. I only wish you would include the pictures from your blog so that we can see the pictures as we read the story. Finally they got to show each other how much they care. I cant wait for more.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
LOVE THE LEMONS. Now as for Peyton, I love that she loves him so much. I knew she wouldn't be mad at him and I kinda expected the exact reaction she had. lol. I have kids too so...... yeah they see things differently than us. Great chapter.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
I love the lemons!!!! That was so sweet of Edward to get Peyton that braclet. It sounds like maybe we are getting close to the Prologue? Please tell me there will be a HEA? I dont like reading stories where both or one of them die in the end.
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
I love this story I am just so worried that you are going to take it all away from Edward and this is will not be a HEA.
BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!
Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!
Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason. Some violence, though not much. The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74927
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ok I really like this story but I think you rush a lot of it. First I think their first lemon was really lacking and it was VERY short and not very descriptive. I cant wait to read more of your story. I did see that you have most of your stories on Twilighted and I really HIGHLY recomend that you post them all here. I used to read on Twlighted but since they are so strict on their authors sometimes I decided to move to a more relaxed site. I do enjoy your story and I hope you are not offened by my review. I only give my opinion to try to help the author.
New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five
Oh it looks like Edward is going to read an earfull. LMAO
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
OOOOHHHHHHH Bella's in trouble. But hopefully he will find it funny but it doesn't look that way. Those poor guys they cant get a break.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
LMAO I dont think they are the only ones reading it. In fact I bet the whole family is reading it. lol. I was so hoping to see Bella's response to his review in this chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Discussion and Dissection
OMG I love the pen names you were juggling around with. I really liked Im2sexy4mypants but I think that would have given away that he was a male so Stardusted was the best I think.
I cant wait to read what she writes back to him. Hopefully he will see that she really does want them together.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Sparks? I wouldn't call them sparks, well maybe. Now if they were flirting then I would call them sparks but it just seems that they are being friendly. I thought Esme's review was hilarious and I could actually picture Edward laughing his ass off on his couch. That was too funny. Like father like son. lol I am thinking there are a lot more people that are reading her story that are in there immediate circle and everyone is going to start figuriing it out. I think Angela already did. She is a smart cookie.
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
oh yeah great potential I cant wait to read more. Boy Edward sure is into himself. lol.
Author's Response:
Hi LRL4e!
Thanks for the vote of confidence! Edward...he's got good self-esteem. We'll see how long that lasts. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
OMG I laughed so hard. The hat on his dick OMG so FUNNNYYYYY. I Loved it.
Author's Response:
Hi again, Let...!
I'm so glad you got a kick out of that. It's good to have a place to hang your hat. Thanks for the storylove!
-bannerday
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
This story is so entertaining I am absolutely loving it. It is definitely a great read.
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever!
I'm glad you enjoyed that chapter. Thanks for the Storylove! Happy continued reading!
-bannerday
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
Wow Edward really is an Asshole. At least we know the hat really fits. He is an arrogant prick. I hope he cant get it up cause he is thinking about his neighbor. LMAO
Author's Response:
Hi Let Rob.....!
Edward does seem to be quite the asshole, doesn't he? ;) I think you'll like the results of chapter 5. It's posted. Have fun. Let me know what you think. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Perceptiions and Misperceptions
I would probably go through every draw and medicine cabinet. And it would so great if he came home early and caught her lying on his bed. LMAO
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions
Oh Poor Bella. I didn't think he would get that mad at her snooping. I would think he would have figured it out that she was so curious about him that she had to look at his stuff. The key word is HIM. He is a dope not realizing that she is VERY attracked to him. I wish he would just grab her and kiss her already. But it sounds like maybe she needs to grab him and kiss him. I say Bella needs to get the game face on and start teasing the shit out of him.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Gosh I cant wait til they share a kiss.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Word Processing
I love that he changed his sheets and pillows. I think that was a great start. Who wants to keep around sheets stained by ho's? YUK. I do think he should not keep reading her story without telling her he knows. But then again she is writing about him without his permission. So I guess they are even. I just hope things will start getting better for them and he can "Pop her cherry" LOL.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
I am getting impatient here. I mean we have had 31 chapters and no action between Bella and Edward. I mean like kissing or lemons. This has been one funny story dont get me wrong but I like to see action too.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Still no kissing. Geeshhh
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: The Last Lap of the Night
I really like this story but sometimes this slow burn kind of burns me out. I mean I would really like some action with them to happen.
I loved the bar b q with all the friends, family and co workers but I thought for sure he would have kissed her or more by now.
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness
I am sure this reveiw will sound contradicting but......in your author note I must say, I was extremely dissapointed. I mean we have followed you so long and we wait, here it is 45 chapters and still no lemon and they haven't even kissed and you are telling ut is going to be over soon?????? Yeah not what I was expecting at all.
As for the story, I have really enjoyed it and it has been very funny and entertaining.
However there is one thing that just really infuriates me about authors is that they drag the story out til the end and when we finally get what we were hoping for, the author just up and ends it.
Author's Response:
Hi LuvRPatz4ever
I'm sorry you are feeling let down. I can only write the story that I imagine would be logical. Edward started out as a rather unfeeling Manwhore with something in his backstory that has made the way he is. We'll find out what that was. And Bella, meanwhile, is a somewhat shy and bookish virgin without much self-confidence when it comes to men. I felt like I had to get them closer together first through a series of trials. Edward is falling in love for the first time in his life, as is Bella. They started out quite badly with a lot to overcome to get on the same page. And they are overcoming it, but it doesn't feel right to me to have Bella just give it all away after a week of getting to know someone who she saw as a dick and a predator of women. That doesn't seem logical to be throwing in lemons.
And they have kissed already. They started a kiss at the end of chapter 40, and all of chapter 41 was the rest of that first amazing kiss between the two Chapter 44 featured a heated kiss in the doorway of a shop after Edward revealed his past to Bella and told her he wanted more with her. I also left them kissing, stretched out on the couch at the end of this most recent chapter and there's more coming of that event.
So believe it or not, they are getting there. I just like writing about the chase. I love the falling-in-love part of a romance, so that is what I write. And I said possibly 10 chapters, there could be more. You know I'm wordy. There will be sex. If I devoted a chapter to a kiss there's a good chance I'll devote quite a few words to their lovemaking.
Hang in there, I'll try my best, but I just have a very logical mind and I have to keep my characters' personalities and where they're coming from in my mind.
Thank you for the review.
-bannerday
Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!
Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia
Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM
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Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427996
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
He sure had a hard time controlling himself huh? LOL Well it looks like he has the plan all set to catch her in his web. I hope it works.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
HmMM I am starting to think Charlie only cares about money. Poor Edward was interupted in his fantasy. lol
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Expectations
Well I think he freaked out like you said. lol. But he finally realized that he never told her to call him Edward so the door swings both ways. At least he got some release when he went to bed. lol.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I think Bella is just as much effected to him as he is to her. And hopefully he wont be able to stay away for long.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Well that was hot. I would have loved to read it from EPOV. I am surprised he didn't take her virginity though.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Experience
Well it doesn't seem that she is going to have any trouble once he tells her he is a Dom. lol. She seems to be enjoying what she is reading.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Conversation
Well at least its out in the open now and like I suspected she is not running. lol
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2
Well he seems to be having fun already. I dont like that he has left her wanting a few times now.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 **Playtime**
I think that was a really good session. I think he was very attentive and asked her several times if she was ok. I was very pleased with it.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping
Oh I bet Edward is going to be so pissed. lol
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Panties
I am really surprised that he hasn't made love to her yet. I dont think I would have lasted this long as a matter of fact I know I wouldn't have. I dont know how he does it or should I say doesn't do it. lol.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice
Well its about time he is going to make love to her. I know it hasn't been alot of chapters but still it seems like forever. lol. It looks like Peter was really pissed when he found out she was taken. lol Too bad Peter, she is taken.
Quiet Storm Sequel.
How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.
Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward.
Edward/Bella.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533724
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse
You accidentaly named this chapter 18 and It was 17.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure
Sopranos huh? I never watched that show. But I thought it sounded good. I guessed that Charlies wasn't her father way, way back because of how hateful he was to her. But that doesn't excuse a mother for letting it happen. I knew a mother like that once too. Its so painful and its something that stays with you forever. Great chapter.
Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire
Well its about tiem that Edward see that she doesn't have to wait for him and she can have a life with someone else if he doesn't want to take what she is offering her. I am so glad that it is out in the open now and that blind Jasper finally saw the truth. Rose is a real bitch in this story. I would definitely NOT like to see Bella give her virginity to someone other than Edward though so I hope that is not going to happen.
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Beneath the Surface
Well I think we all expected the explosion from Jasper. I am glad that Edward didn't fight back and I am even more happy that Emett and Sam are on Edwards side.
Now as for the chapter I am a little disspointed that it wasn't longer. I mean its a big difference from chapter 2 thru 6 when you were doing 9k words. I dont think putting two words on each line really makes up for the loss of words with your great writing.
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Nice and Not
That was fucking awesome. I loved it. Its about time is all I can say.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty
So FINALLY it seems that Edward has gotten his head out of his ass and is going to fight for her. I can not be happier. I just dont understand why Rose is so against it. Unless she is just jealous because she cant have Edward. And that damn Jasper needs to cool his jets and hopefully Alice will kick him in the balls. It will be love at first sight. LMAO.
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time
So it sounds like they are not going to have sex until he decides to marry her. :( That is depressing. I mean yes she deserves the fairy tale but I am impatient and want the lemons. I dont want to wait for the Epilogue to read the lemon and then the story ends. That makes me so mad when authors do that.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
I am sorry but I think she should not be acting so timid. If she wants to be with him then be with him. I think she is acting more like she is 13 right now. I know she wants to wait til she is married but she didn't let him do anything and him touching her shirt was too much???? That doesn't sound right.
Author's Response:
You're taking things a bit to literally. She just wasn't ready for him to take it off of her. I don't think there's anything wrong with her being a little nervous about that, and neither did he. He stopped without her having to ask him to. He's going to be as patient as she needs him to be.
A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100896
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: A déjà vu
I wondered if she was going to have the strength to turn him away. He is too cocky for his own good. She needs to make him jealous then maybe he will change his ways.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions
Long time no see girl. I missed you. I just found this story and I must say this is HOT. I love it. I will give you a 10.
Author's Response:
Long time no see indeed. I thought you had abandoned me... I don't understand though. I've not left the place, I'm always here, posting on a regular basis, every month or so every one of my stories. But let's face it, if people don't let me know they are still here foloowing me, it's hard for me to stay motivated and to update more often...
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: New impact
hhmmm Well please tell me there will be a HEA? I hate to read stories where Edward is some weirdo and ends up being the bad guy. Now it seems that maybe Edward pulled some strings and got her that job back. Well we will see.
Author's Response:
I'm pretty sure there will be a happy ending to this story, however it is not complete yet in French, and I'm just the translator, so if you want to know for sure, you should ask Drinou, she's the author and she's the most popular author over the French fandom on FF.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Second chance
Ha I was right, at least I think I was. lol. I think Edward got her that job I mean how else would she have gotten it? Well this should be fun. lol
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Surviving the fisrt day
Wow he can be an asshole too. Not sure I like him right now.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Adaptation
I was half expecting Jake to kick Edwards ass. lol.
Author's Response:
It might happen later on...
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Contact
I love it that she tells him off. He needs it.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Infernal rise
Oh wow, he is a slut. lol
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Provocations
Oh no looks like they are both playing games now.
Author's Response:
:0)
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening
I hope Alice slaps the shit out of him.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: On the wire
Hmmm well its hard to say what is going to happen next. But I think his shell should have been cracking a long time ago.
Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.
Banner by Rochelle_0089.
-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
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-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Beginning
Well it looks like Edward finally opened his eyes and sees that what he has been missing and they really had fun.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Slipping
Wow they had such a wonderful night making love, I would have loved to read a lot more about the lemons since they made love all night. lol. Now it is all going to go to shit now that Jasper is opening his trap to Emmett.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Two Steps Back
Well, Edward is acting like an ass but he was in it for the house. Now he feels something for her and is still acting like an ass because there is no way he can get out of this without hurting her.
So I wonder how long it takes Rose to punch Edward AND Jasper in the face? LOL They BOTH deserve it.
I hope Alice leaves his ass for a time too.
And Emmett was right, he should have told Rose right away, now his ass is grass too when she finds out.
Stupid Boys.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Test
hhhmmmm I dont know if I would be that hard on Edward. I am a softie and I know he was a jerk but I would not have the will to say no to him. lol.
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Edward a recovering sex addict and he opens a tattoo shop.
The new Artist he brings in to work with him is not what he
exspected will things work out, can he make things work,
Will love find a way.....
BETA'D BY RAH07890
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4180 Read Count: 2664
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like it so far but I am concerned at how long it took you to make 3 chapters.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it but if you had read the authors note in chapter 1 " I will copy and post it here as as posted in chapter"
A/N This story has been eating at me so much I was stuck on Master to you and Grauation gifts so I thought I would put it down
so I could get back on track with them. This will get updated but not as fast as the other two until they are finished. So Engoy this
as I post the chapters!"
But all my storys are at a stand still for a little bit I am sorry for this but real life has stepped in and gave me problems I am going to be having surgery as I have carple tunnel and my hands hurt pretty bad right now.
I will update as soon as I can!!
Nancy
A.K.A VAMP_LUVOR
One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167546
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 21: 21 Are We There Yet
Well they seem like a really great family. I wish I had one like theirs. lol. Now I do believe there will be more teasing for Masen in the next chapter. lol. Great way to spend his birthday.
Author's Response:
Oh definitely more teasing! He makes it far too easy ;)
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Intro
Wow I really like this so far. I cant wait to read more.