Penname: team rob [Contact] Real name: karen
Member Since: 07 Jul 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

i don't write, but love to read


never quite sure what to say in a review, but will leave a :) to let you know i was there


recently i have been reading on my phone at work... for some reason it won't let me review... know i am reading and will review when i can


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Reviews by team rob
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 308419
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 312225
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

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Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 427]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53577
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Summary:

Edward and Bella have loved each other since they were kids but never said anything. When circumstance brings them back to Forks will they get their chance at forever or will the memory of the past be too much to live up to?  Originally written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44128 Read Count: 15745
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Way You Look Tonight

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Author's Response:

thanks hon!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I Remember When

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Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 193747
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

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Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

:)

 

glad to see this update... i was missen them

can't believe he is going to leave now that she is finally back

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

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yeah... what a great wake up this am... in fact i got 3 allerts for it...

love the fact that his demon is pushing him home

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note

Hello. ..just checking in

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Rereading

More please

Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 111780
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

:):)

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 184977
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

i love the relationships that these 6 seem to have.  Alice is... well Alice...

edward might regret "hiring" her...

didn't get to read this at work today

have you thought about hockey???

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love writing them all together.  Alice is a force, but she'll take good care of Edward.  He won't regret it, I don't think :)

Have I thought about what?  Watching hockey or writing it?  hehe I don't know enough to write it, and it gives me a headache trying to find the puck (moves the instant I do) hehe. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

:)

read this last night at work but then the phone died...

love the story and your knowledge and use of football...

good advice from buddy



Author's Response:

Ahh well thank you for coming back to review!  I'm so glad you love it and my football.  I love writing the game into the chapters now and then!

Buddy definitely was right and knew what Bella needed to hear, which is why she went with calling him.

Thanks for the review and I'll see you next week!

 

Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 36599
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Sacramento

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Lubbock

Colt Mccoy

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Baby, one more time!

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Boston

Thought it would be Erik yorkie

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1703]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 292005
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

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Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 63393
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

the first few chapters were hard to get in to....

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:)

great introduction of rose and alice

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

how does he think he can keep this un-.....

jake will see right through this

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1

:)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 208364
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

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Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

:)

comes up faster here than at ff.net

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

:)

 

 

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Author's Response:

YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a bunch for pushing that little review button

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42500
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped

aro is somehow involved



Author's Response:

i believe you are on the right track.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1230379
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

ok..

 

officer hawk knows more than he is saying and so is the girl....

people know about her money...

someone wants jake in trouble and he will be if she tells about james and he will tell about jake beating him up



Author's Response:

hmmm...interseting theories, I guess you will have to see if you are right or not ...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

:)

am enjoying their visit to forks and meeting her "old" friends

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

:)



Author's Response:

:) back at ya ...lml

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

:)

 

it's great the caius and irena were put in their places

bella is new to this "lifestyle" and they were completely wrong

love jane

 

 



Author's Response:

Edward took care of it..Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

 

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

:)



Author's Response:

Back at you ... :)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

guess reading this chapter while sitting in my doctors waiting room was not a good idea

 

:)



Author's Response:

depends which doctor you were at...lol... Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

Fucking great…

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

 

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

:)

Author's Response:

I have a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

:)

 

happy thanksgiving



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

:)

 

haven't pre-ordered.. always wait to pick up the  best offer that day



Author's Response:

That would drive me insane...I would be a nervous wreck ...lol ...I'm telling you I take my Twilight very seriously and called Boarders two weeks before the release to secure my copy for the midnight release...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

:)

read this story faithfully but my phone won't let me review for some reason...

 



Author's Response:

I have the same problem not on this site but on FF.net it won't let me into the review space...anyway,,,I got you so thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

:)

punishment fit... not too sure how about making her wear things in public/family

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

:)

mike??? tanya???



Author's Response:

Good guess....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

:)

so... people at the club seem to want to know more about bella and her "relationship" with aro and about her money... seems someone must know her ex



Author's Response:

Somebody knows something and there are alot of rummors but they all have to have started with someone...the question is who and why...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

:)

thanks for the rec...most stories i am reading are ending and i am always looking for something new to read



Author's Response:

It is so sad when stories end... it's like loosing a friend,,,,thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.

 

Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”

 

At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”

 

Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”

 

Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”

 

Why?

 

“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”

 

“What is it?”

 

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

:)

sorry that i don't always review.. i read on my phone and it won't always let me review...

love this story



Author's Response:

have the same problem with my phone, sometimes it lets me - sometimes it don't ....i sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

:)

got to read on the laptop today so i am able to review



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 279863
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

love your story

 

glad to get daily updates but wish the chapters were longer

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

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Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

:)

 

CONGRATS

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

po

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14514
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Broken : EmPOV

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/10097/images/sunsetDutydesire_(2).jpg

Edward Masen was brought up in a world where responsibility to your family and class was everything. Tired of the endless pursuits of women he becomes more and more jaded. That is until, he meets his match…..

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113881 Read Count: 18316
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2010 Updated: 03 Dec 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: 26. Comeuppance

more please

Summary: Past Featured Story

vv

Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

stories/33558/images/VirginsVillains-BestLoveStory.jpg   stories/33558/images/VIRGINSVILLAINSBestCanonPairing.jpgstories/33558/images/VIRGINSVILLAINS-BestShockValue.jpg


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 308735
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

:)



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Tasers & Interrogations

:)

 

love your story and that you update frequently



Author's Response:

Thank!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bestbanner

Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 47993
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)

i like your writing style

 

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:)

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

stories/10761/images/Speakbanner1.jpg

 

Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 26750
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

:)

connections???  james... taking bella... pheonix...



Author's Response:

;-) thank you,

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

:)

love to hear both povs...

update soon as i want to read about dinner



Author's Response:

thank you

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/stories/30342/images/things.jpg

Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 117909
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:)

jacob doesn't need alone time with bella

Summary:

stories/33558/images/LRM.banner.final.jpg

 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 75935
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

:)



Author's Response:

thank you somuch!  always love the smiley!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

love to "hear" edwards pov for this story



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

:)



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Resolutions For The New Year

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Calm Before The Storm

:)

 

i always love "hearing" edwards thoughts on all this...

booger boy and the groping old woman



Author's Response:

crazy old lady....they do exist.  i'm not making ALL that sh*t up.  lol.  Thanks!

Summary:

Edward Cullen is the rich new kid in town, with a troubled past and stuck up parents. Bella Swan is the neglected daughter of the towns Chief of Police, who is used and abused by her older sister, Rosalie. In one weekend can Edward and Bella fall in love and right the wrongs in each other's lives?

Lots of humor, lemons and language. All human...all your usual suspects!

I'm trying something new and publishing this as a completed story. Reviews would still be appreciated! Thanks!!!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41796 Read Count: 11574
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Oct 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:)

Summary:

Companion story to "It Happened One Weekend", only told entirely from Edwards point of view.

Edward Cullen is the new kid in town with a troubled past and stuck up parents. Bella Swan is the neglected daughter of the towns Chief of Police, who is used and abused by her older sister, Rosalie. In one weekend can Edward and Bella right all the wrongs in each others lives?

Language, lemons and lots of humor...all human and all the usual suspects!

Once again, I am taking a chance by publishing this as a completed story. Please make sure and review! They make my day and inspire me!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57688 Read Count: 4099
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

always love to read the "other" pov



Author's Response:

YAY!!! I hope you like it! I almost like this POV better than Bella's. It was definitely more fun to write. Edwards head is a fun place to be! :)

Thank you for the review! It means a lot!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 385502
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

:)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it..


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

:)

seems we like same stories as i am reading most of your rec's

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 197332
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

b

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47422
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

here was his chance and i'm not sure he will get another



Author's Response:

My poor, stupid, Edward.  I sometimes feel bad for writing him like that haha

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

for some reason i can't review when i  read on my phone

:)

poor edward, but you knew this was going to happen....

update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Even though he's my character, I feel a little bad for Edward too haha.

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:)

this is just going to make it worse when she finds out.....

 



Author's Response:

He's actually going to do a lot more stuff to make it worse when she finds out haha.  That's the next part I'm trying to figure out right now.  I definitely had a few key story points in the plot that I wanted to add before she finds out...but I don't want to irritate readers and make them feel like I'm dragging it out.  But Edward hasn't hit the bottom of his downward spiral yet.

Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:)

love your story and i hope you update soon...

this is going to tear her apart...

 

 

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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how the mighty have fallen....

how much more will she put up with???



Author's Response:

You asked the dreaded question I knew people were going to ask after this chapter.  It will all come together very soon - I promise.

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

sorry i don't get to review each chapter, for some reason this site and my phone won't let me review

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

:)

wow... now that we are at the bottom, i'm looking forward to the ride back up...

 



Author's Response:

It won't be a ride ;)  It'll be a climb...where you can get scraped and bruised along the way - but we'll make it out of there, I promise haha

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

:)

don't twitter or "do" the thread but do love your story and the way you write...

not a fan of jacob...

hoping for a hea



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  It WILL be a HEA!

Summary:

stories/16321/images/untamed_Hearts.JPG

Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9642
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:)

30 Days by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary: Past Featured Story

30 days

30 days for him to make her prom queen. 30 days for her to turn his world upside-down. AU/AH. OCC. Canon pairing.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24840 Read Count: 38297
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2011 Updated: 03 Mar 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Day 30

sorry to see this end...

like the daily posts even if they were short...

not really interested in baby edward/bella

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1

:)

love daily stories even if the chapters are short

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Day 5

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Day 25

:)

bella gets her time and eddie-kins gets a taste of what it feels like to "love"someone

do not miss high school drama .. but even as a "grownup", i get it at work  :(

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Day 11

:)

sorry that i don't always review... i read during the week on my phone and it won't let me review....

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Day 13

:)

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Day 20

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A fluffly one shot about vampire Edward worrying about what to do for human Bella for Valentines Day.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2186 Read Count: 290
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2011 Updated: 15 Feb 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)

Summary:

A three part songfic inspired by the song by Lady Antebellum. Edward and Bella naturally. Can Bella forgive Edward for what he "did"?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical, Horror, Humor, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6724 Read Count: 2879
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Jul 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

love the song...

interested to see where this is going



Author's Response:

thanks so much :) I really didn't think anyone would like this one...

Centerfield by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A sweet moment shared between a married couple.

My entry in TwiNetwork's First Iron Pen Challenge.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 724 Read Count: 1575
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Mar 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Centerfield

:)

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 75227
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Rereading

Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Rereading

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 30359
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: team rob Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

have been enjoying the story and forgot to review....

 

i am also a mom of three... two out of house and one almost... it does seem as many are younger but that's ok ...

love your story and characters...  do you post on fan fiction??? only ask because this site won't let me review from my phone where i do lots of my reading

Summary:

O/S for the FANDOM 4 CHILDREN COMPILATION: Bella Swan is a cheerleader who has her sights set on someone who is deemed unacceptable by her peers—awkward and shy water boy, Edward Cullen. When she takes matters into her own hands, Edward takes her by surprise and shows her something she never expected.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6173 Read Count: 1453
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2012 Updated: 23 Aug 2012
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

more please

Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 243966
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: team rob Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

:)