Reviews by halloweenlover
Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh crap i hope rose didn't see them but i bet she did i don't think em will freak but lol i bet he does i like the whole indoor couple thing so cute

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

iam glad rose didn't tell em yet and will let edward and bella tell everyone it's the best way loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh shit em is going to go ape shit on them i can't belive the bad luck they have i loved it very sweet and sexy

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91322
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I know the teacher is going to be a problem for them but they will handle her i know bella and she wont put up with any crap from anyone



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved it i don't think Mrs.White likes ppl who are different but i hope they can fix this problem .I don't trust James but then again who would lol



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I knew that teacher was going to cause problems for them I just hope someone can hold Bella down lol hell all of them for that matter no one picks on your kids that's when the shit will hit the fan lol great chapter love the lemons.I think james is going to be a dick to them as well and try to get back at alice and bella for the past but i hope the guys can step in and kick his ass



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I loved it iam glad phil is a good man and put that old bat in her place



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

that was so hot i don't think edward has ever been that raw it was very sexy loved it i hope that you will do an outtake of the set /tanya /ben/ang weekend lol



Author's Response:

Thank you:)  I am planning on doing an outtake or two of their weekend if I decide to go that way:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved it and can't wait to see what you have instore for them next.James is a big asshat lol.I am so glad things are going better now for you all



Author's Response:

I am having so much fun with James!! I have plans for him....

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was really intense WOW!!! I know it has to be James because he is a bitter man that didn't get what he wanted .Loved it can't wait to see if they all stay on her side or think she has lost it.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Room 18 by littlestar300 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

Bella Swan is a shy and reserved girl working in a publishing house in Seattle, then one busy day in a coffee house, Bella meets Carlisle a devoted doctor, husband and father. And they soon become good friends. The only problem is Bella has a serious crush on the older doctor, with his marriage falling apart, and Bella's temperature constantly on the rise, she is pushed to do something so bold she will even shock herself. Good girl Bella is about to go bad, will the good doctor be able to resist.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5085 Read Count: 537
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so hot i wish you would write more of this iam surprised how much i like bella with carlisle instead of w/edward because i always do but i really loved this great job.



Author's Response:

I love the Bella Carlisle pairing, I am not sure why but it is one off my favs.

I currently have no plans to continue this story but maybe one day,

I am so glad you liked it and thanks for the review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135063
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

that was great iam glad renee and charlie are starting to understand what bella needs and it will make them all stronger .



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Big steps for all of them.

Isabella Swan by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12311
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2010 Updated: 08 Jul 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was very good he is a dick and carlisle is an ass i can't belive he let her go like that i hope she is going to be fine



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! ;) Hope you stick with this story.

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I know edward was not happy about rose and emmett but he has to understand not all ppl are like tanya .they will be happy together i hope he goes home for the wedding for her and his family.I love how bella just ran into the room i loved it i can't wait to read about the fight she was having with renee and see what she thinks about edward love this story its very good

Bunker by vampiremama Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Bunker

Thank you to Ima Twi Hard for the wonderful banner

As the bombs land around them, trapped together in a bunker, friends Bella and Edward have to make a choice. After all, no one wants to die a virgin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2792 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bunker

i loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this first chapter i have never read a story where james was her brother and i have to say thsat i liked it great job can't wait to see what wyoming has in store for them .



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review..thought I would try James as a nice guy. Next chapter up tomorrow

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i really like this story i very glad to see how sweet james is and takes good care of bella can't wait to  read more and see what their new life will be like

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

can't wait to read edwards pov and see what mad him so mad loved it alice is the best



Author's Response:

thank you for the review..we shall see what is going on in Edwards mind next time :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i really liked getting in his head for a bit oh but bella will drive him crazy that i can bet money on as well as he will drive her nuts too lol this was a great chapter can't wait to really get in to this a bit more .great job!



Author's Response:

its going to be fun watching them play this out...thanks for reviewing

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This looks good can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Hope you like what i have planned!

thank you for reading & reviewing!

xo
jaime

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

loved it I feel for her loss but this is a great new step for her .love this story

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: C3 10 Years Later

i loved it i love that bella is so kick ass and not a wimp it was fate that she saved rachel



Author's Response:

I have read so many stories that Bella needs saving in, i decided my Bella was going to be a kickass warrior who doesnt back down and doesnt need protecting, but she is still as stubborn as always. As for fate that she saved Rachel, well you'll just have to wait for the next update (which will be in about a weeks time). Thanks for reading and taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: C1 Prologue

That looks so good i can't wait to read more and see what happens next



Author's Response:

glad that you like it so far, check out the other chapters and please review again :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: C2 Fates Collided

Oh my god that was so good iam blown away iam hooked and i just can't wait to find out how this will end but trust me i don't want it to end soon lol this is something so new and original you are a very talented writer iam in awe of your writing

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: C4 Victoria's Rath

That was very good victoria really is a wicked bitch lol i can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Victoria is evil, glad you liked this chapter, next update soon :)

Writer's Block by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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Edward is the gardener at Swan Manor. When old man Swan dies his Daughter, Bella Swan comes home to live at the manor. What happens between The Gardener and The Lady of the house.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3734 Read Count: 1088
[Report This] Published: 13 Oct 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was very good i hope that you will continue this .i think there is alot more that you could pull from this story very hot



Author's Response:

I'm not sure wether i will be continuing this or not. i have some ideas but am busy working on another story at the moment.

Thanks for reading though glad you liked it

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 47928
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved this can't wait to read more

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me

I think he is calling alice .i really liked this i can't wait to find out if bella is ok and what happens after edward finds her. i am hooked



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad your enjoying it already. I am sorry to say that he is not calling Alice. sorry

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

that was so good i can't wait to read more .i hope he shot the robber .this looks like a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you, i'm happy you are enjoying it :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -

Ok when i say that i love this story it is an understatment.I can't wait to read more and find out why leah doesn't talk,being a parent myself i can understand how much it kills you to see your child in pain and feel helpless.I loved  Emmett being there for them so sweet .Iam so sad for bella's loss i hope a new town will help her and leah heal .You are a very talented person both of your stories i have read so far have blown me away .I can't wait to get deeper into this and find out more.



Author's Response:

Wow thank you, I am glad your are enjoying my stories. It also means a lot from someone who is a mother because I do not have any kids and written from a parents view is very diffcult but I like a challenge, Again thank you.

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Seven

Oh great now Jacob has really made a big mess for Bella I know everything he told Edward was the truth but now Edward will run again thinking Bella doesn't need him.I loved that she had a little girl so sweet I just hope Edward mans up and goes after them



Author's Response:

We'll find out what Edward is thinking in the next chapter as it is an out take from his point of view.  Thanks for reading.  The next chapter might be updated tonight or toorrow.

-Lisa

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View

Yeah he got his head out of his ass LOL I loved his pov thanks for that and so glad Jacob didn't send him running again I know he can be the man Bella needs and the dad the baby needs .I am so happy Loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I'm glad you liked the last chapter.  I hope you like the next chapter.  it hsould be posted later today!

-Lisa

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35495
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it can't wait to find out how they got split up and what has happened to them both very good start you always blow me away with your stories



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Iam very happy they are going to be staying with carlisle i can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loved it can't wait to find out what is pulling her i think it's edward but i could be wrong lol



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh no not the pack but i guess they need their say as well lol i am gla she and rose are getting on better



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

loved it edward is so jealous of jasper thats too funny love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

loved hearing jaspers story and how bad ass bella is .and now that kiss was hot



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh no i can't wait to find out more love this story iam hooked



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow that was a big shock i never would have guessed that but than again she has a lot of power



Author's Response:

Yes, she does:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i loved it can't wait for this fight if and when it happens



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh crap i hope edward can help her with the pack but she can do it all on her onw she is the one with the most power



Author's Response:

:) Thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

loved it i love that she kicked the wolves butts lol that was great and edward telling her he loves her was so sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you:)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh i can't wait to hear about this prophecy and why they went after bella



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh crap busted i loved it



Author's Response:

Yepper:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

loved it i hope the only ppl she kills are the brothers



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh no i can't wait to see what will happen at the fight

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i can't wait to find out what happens next this was so good



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I really loved it it had it all .i can't wait to see what you will write next as always it will be worth it and i can't wait .



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Shake by LFC Hotstuff Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

 

Shake is Edward's story, a high school student who has to deal with the daily embarrassment and pain brought about a disorder. All-Human.

 

 



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8115 Read Count: 492
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2010 Updated: 20 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

i loved it i really hope that you will continue with this story i think it was very good



Author's Response:

Thank you. I will have a follow-up Bella POV very soon!

The Accused by mizzdee Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Detective Edward Cullen has a good life…great friends, a job he loves, and a family that means everything to him. One chaotic night thrusts him into his biggest case ever as he races the clock to save his best friend's life.

Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 10

stories/13006/images/TheAccused3.jpg


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9056 Read Count: 219
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Crime

Oh my god this looks so good i can't wait to find out who is setting emmett up and what is going to happen next i loved it great job



Author's Response:

Edward is in for a wild ride but at least he won't be alone.  He'll be working with Jake and Sam to solve the case. Hopefully they can figure it out before it's too late.

Thanks for the review.  I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can.  I don't want to keep you in suspense for long.  Hugs til then - D

Summary:

Edward Cullen is the rich new kid in town, with a troubled past and stuck up parents. Bella Swan is the neglected daughter of the towns Chief of Police, who is used and abused by her older sister, Rosalie. In one weekend can Edward and Bella fall in love and right the wrongs in each other's lives?

Lots of humor, lemons and language. All human...all your usual suspects!

I'm trying something new and publishing this as a completed story. Reviews would still be appreciated! Thanks!!!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41796 Read Count: 11753
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it can't wait to read more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

he is so sweet i loved it bella needs to belive in her self more

Summary:

In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?

 Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 22429
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it this looks so good i hope they make it to the house and her parents are ok



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing Halloweenlover future chapters coming soon.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

iam hooked can't wait to read more great job



Author's Response:

Ty for reading halloweenlover. more exciting chapters coming soon.  thanks for the feedback

Thanks

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

iam so glad that bella is going to get edward and his baby i can't wait to read edwards pov love this story i hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing halloweenlover. Can't wait to hear from you in the coming chapters.

Thanks

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Summary:

Alice and Bella are on the trip of a lifetime, spending Halloween in one of the most haunted cities in the world brings scares, laughs and much more than either of them ever expected.

One shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11955 Read Count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it i really hope that you make this into a full story pretty please

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yes i want and need more please this looks so good i really think this could be a great  full story and the way that you write just pulls me in every time

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

forever is a promise you keep banner 2

(Banner by AngelGoddess1981) 

Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

(New Banner by DivineInspiration)

Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

Under the Radar Banner

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Need a Hero

Wow you blew me away this looks very good.Since in your a/n you said based off of true events i hope every thing ends well .i can't wait to read more and see where this will go great job



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like the story so far. I was really nervous about posting this, and it helps to know that someone likes it.

 

As for your comment about this being based off of true events, I will say one thing. Without giving anything away, I can say that some of the things that will happen in later chapters contribute to the reason my husband has seizures. But, it's possible that I will decide that Bella and Edward deserve a better HEA than the hubs and I got.

Thanks for the comment. :)

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141815
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this i can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh this looks so good .A stalker a dad who she hates and has no contact with jasper has something going on he can't talk about and domward oh bella you are so screwed lol loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh he has her number lol loved it i wonder what happened to her ex and why she is so closed off to this lifestyle?  loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved edwards pov now i have more questions why does he hate jasper? I loved it i would be a pile of goo after seeing him lol so hot

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh ashit he is a dick he wants revenge on jasper for what ever happened w/tanya and will end up hurting bella dick but i still want him to be the good guy i hope his plan changes after he finds out that jasper is her brother

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow he is good lol loved it i just know bella is going to be hurt by him

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

damn he is so hot and i can't belive he just wants to use her just to hurt jasper i hate that part i hope he grows a heart

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i just know it has to be her ex evil prick but maybe not .i feel bad for her i can feel she is going to get hurt by edward and his lies

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i konw he is a good person who has been hurt by jasper and tanya but bella has nothing to do with that crap i hope he finds out that he can't just use her and hurt jasper that way

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

that was so hot

Carnival by pdd912 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bella meets Vampire Edward at an amusement park in New Orleans.  Mind control and Smut ensues.  Dark Edward.  Defiled Bella.  Consent is questionable.  Might be nonexistent.  AU, very OOC.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1336 Read Count: 670
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh my god that was so good please tell me that you are going to continue this i really liked it so good and so hot really great

Summary:

 

Written for Friday Free For All. Bella's had a long day at work, the last thing she wants to deal with is drama when she gets home...or does she? Rated M for lemons and language. BellaxMaggiexEdward


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5364 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was so hot loved it



Author's Response:

haha.  Yay.  Thank you!

In it for Love by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Town rebel Edward returns to Forks after being forced to leave. Bella is a newcomer, tending bar at the local pool hall, who desires wealthy men. She has her reasons. Can Edward refute her materialistic views and win her affection? OOC/AH Lang. Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50065 Read Count: 9911
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Iam so glad that you are moving all your stories to this site .I am always in awe of your writing . You are very talented can't wait to reread some old favs and then the new stories as well

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

that was so hot i really can't wait to read more .i hope that you will continue this it looks great



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it..


Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Oh thank god I really can't wait to see what happens next I have faith in you bb that it will all work out Loved it Ang and Esme that was an awesome twist I didn't see comming.

 



Author's Response:

we were hoping to shock a few peeps about that tid bit...but Ang doesnt know...so she in for a shocker too

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god i just fell in love .This looks so very good i can't wait to read more .Very good start!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yaaaay! We're so glad you like it! I'll update in the next few days. Thank you so so so much...Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok where to start Ang is a money hungry bitch wow i never thought i would read that but i really liked that spin on her and not the norm of tanya or jessica so thanks for that.Second i think i need to fan my self that was so hot, i can't wait untill edward finds out who his mystery lady is .I really like this story the both of you are doinf a fan fucking tastic job with this story i love every thing i have read by you both .I just really love this story so far.



Author's Response:

Wow, just wow! Thank you for the awesome review! Yeah we thought it would be good to throw Ang and Dr.Lame-O in the story. We were tired of Jess, Tanya and Jake also ;)~

We really appreciate your support! You are awesome BB! We're so glad you like our story so far...Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

I loved it i think it's so funny that ang got stuck with bella dumbass hubby while bella got angs sexy hot sex god hubby that bella has been lusting after the same way he has been lusting after her i can't wait to see what happens at the club next .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

Oh shit !!!!!! why if ang hates edward so much and just wants his money and name does she care if edward finds someone she is such a  bitch .I always love what you and dlir write i can't get enough of it this story  it just has me on edge i want everything all at once but yet again i love the way it is playing out i have never been let down by what you write.I feel edwards rage over ang i hope he will get away from her and find out that bella is his woman from work but i love the build up . i can't belive he just got attacked i hope bella finds him.i love it you guys are the best



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving such a gr8 review....I hope You like what we have in store for our spartan and kitten ...DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

Much Love to Ari BB my thoughts are with you and you know I love you and DLIR very much .And I loved this update sexy Spartan and his Kitten are closer to being together now with pinky boy out of the way lol and very soon Angela will be in the past as well boy is she dumb LMAO "E" lol .XOXO 



Author's Response:

*snort* pinky boy bahahhahahahah ohh I cant wait for the next chapter.....rubs hands together,.,cant wait to see what Ari conjures up

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

I loved it That was so freaking hot hOOr down LMAO .Ang will never get it dumbass .I think it's Eric how is stalking Bella but I am not sure he is stalking Edward . Love you ladies xoxo



Author's Response:

*Looks around yelling* (Everyone stand back h00r d0wn! Don't worry I went to the fifth grade and got me my EKG! I know how to do CCR! Never fear psychopath Ari is here!) :)

Oh we love you sooooo much sweetie! Yes I know I put EKG. Yes I know it's CPR not CCR I was bein a dumb ass. Ya know like also BB! :)

Thank you sweetie for your review! We love our FB h00r!

x0x0x0x0xx0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204643
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was so damn good and so sweet they really are a family in every way .LOVED IT!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Love you!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That was so sweet of her to do that for her BBC .great chapter loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am glad she went out and even if she had to tell them to stop treating her like she was made of glass I think things will get better for her from now on.loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That was so good I hope the boys love the house it would a great step for them all to take together .loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you again for all the reviews!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I am so happy to see their family so happy and full of love .I loved it!!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I am glad Tyler told Bella his story very sad and I hope Bella and Lauren can move on and heal foe Alex .Loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I cried my eyes out I was freaking out for themthat was so sweet of Anthony at the end

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella needs a girls night out we all do it helps us to relax and be a better mom in the end <3 BBC!!! loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

loved it that was very sweet and perfect for their first time together.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

loved it a night without the kids what will they ever do lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I am glad her meeting with Lauren went well .I love the boys they are so cute

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

loved it that was hot and so happy that Bella let him explain about Victoria before she left

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh crap I hope Edward can fix this.Yeah Bella she is writing and I just know that Edward and Anthony being in her life now helped her to do that!!!loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I think Bella needs to just tell everyone (but Edward) to back off she is trying to move on but with them all treating her like glass it's not doing her any good.I loved it Bella is very stong and she has done a great job with Alex.