Reviews by kiss234
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

thank you for such a wonderful story, you are such fun to read. thanks again can't wait for the update!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

outtake for sure... an annoyed Carlisle...hot

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

You are such a wonderful writer, love your thoughts love, this touching story :)



Author's Response: thank you so much xoxo

Author's Response: thank you so much xoxo

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189015
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

wow... wasn't expecting that, but, family sticks together through anything. This is one more step closer for Bella and Edward!!! Thanks for the real life in this really fabulous fiction, can't wait for the update!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Rarely do we expect stuff like that but I promise I won't drag it out and that it serves a big purpose for B&E.  I'm so glad you're still liking my story and I'll resolve it soon!  Thank you!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer

Thanks once again for a memorable chapter... you are a very talented writer, this story is delightful!!!!!!!! More please :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Much more ahead, I promise!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

Are you still writing about how Edward gave Bella the key to his apt. I am sure he was imaginative...



Author's Response:

I intend to but that will probably come at the end of the story, because I think it'll be more of a full-length chapter.

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

awesome... glad Esme is fine!!!!!!!! We are dealing with Cancer in our family right now and it is a long and terrifying issue when drugs don't do the job they were meant to.

Go Bella!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're glad Esme is fine!  I'm so sorry to hear you're dealing with cancer.  It is very scary!  You're in my thoughts!

Thanks so much for the review.  More soon!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Little League

I so appreciate this story... Your football knowledge makes this story very real.

I am a huge Steeler fan, from the Burgh thanks for making this fix fun to read!!!

Football rocks, good luck with your book and thank you again for your wonderful writing. Outtakes are always a good thing!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's a blast to write my football and my characters together!  So happy you enjoyed it!

More to come, I promise!  Thanks for the kind words!  Good luck to your Steelers!

 

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

thanks for a lovely story... you are the best!!!



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows

awesome chapter... long awaited!!! :) More please!!!

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104695
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

love this story... let the fun begin!!!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update and the time it takes to do in a busy  world. Know that your readers do appreciate your story and never give up what you love doing!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thanks you for this touching story, we can never have too much love and sappy caring in this world that can be harsh at times so thanks for this!!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hope your trip was wonderful and has inspired you for the next chapter of this cool story!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

thank you for this precious family time for all of the Cullen's. Families do stick together through thick and thin, and no matter what this pregnancy will be a precious gift to all of them and just one more thing to tie them together!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Firsts

thanks for the update, pregnant Bella and a thoughtful Edward... cant wait to see what happens next. Miscarriage...been there, not a pleasant experience, one that caused me lots of depression... don't want anyone to have to be there for too long. Nasty is a nice word for that place of wanting and guilt...

Summary:

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Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

good to see this story being continued!!!!!! Love the other one as well!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yay!!

:)

xoxo

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672664
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

awesome!!!

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184474
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point

love this story...fans self!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Epilogue

thanks for this amazing story you are a wonderful writer I hope there will be more from you!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - A Little Poison in the Pot

wow... you are one awesome writer!!! I can hardly wait to read your next update.... thank you so much for this terrific story!!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Jada...wow... you are one exciting writer!!! You keep us all on the edge of our seats, can't wait for your update!!!!!!!!! 

Thanks for sharing this fic with us!!!!!!!!! :)

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

wow...fans self!!!!

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

You have totally captured all of us who have read this story... the passion and angst,  the give and take of your character conversations and the insight you share into their souls... you are one talented writer!!!

Thank you so much for the tenderness in your writing as you lead us further into this story, things are surely going to change because both sides have a better view of the past. 

You continue to intrigue us all with your writing thanks and more please!!!!!

Antiques Roadshow by aerobee82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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I took an antique in for appraisal, only to find a much rarer treasure.  I met Bella Swan on Antiques Roadshow, and PBS would never want for funds again. Canon Couples, Vamps/Humans.

Credit goes to forthelongestday for the incredibly lovely banner.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82797 Read Count: 28259
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love this touching story thank you it makes me smile when's see you have updated!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, kiss234!

Your kind words mean so much to me. Thank you. Knowing you've enjoyed this story and it's conclusion feels great.

- Rachel

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

more please:)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the story!  I don't have any plans for expanding it, but I will keep it in mind.  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

Common Ground by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Banner moved to chapter 1 to comply with Google Ad-Sense requirements

Bella has come to accept that her unusual fetish may mean she spends her life alone, that is, until she meets handsome OB Edward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11008 Read Count: 23183
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome!!!!

Summary:

Bella pays a visit to the Doctors and gets more than she bargains for.

AH, lemony fresh,  originally intended as a one shot, but I squeezed out a few more chapters.

I acknowledge that all things Twilight belong to Mrs Meyers and that i'm just playing around.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15686 Read Count: 19006
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome beginning... pretty sneaky...



Author's Response: he, he, he, glad you liked

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kiss234 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Moving Day

thanks for the fic it's fun to read and an interesting fill in of one of my favorite stories... it's interesting that this story has such an amazing following and is now being fictionated as it were...talk about coming full circle...

Hope you keep this fic going this story never can have enough about these 2 wonderful characters and the love they share!!!!!!