Reviews by janm
The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Lies catch up to you. Good story.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Interesting. Got my curiosity up.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Like sparks flying.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Nice fantasy.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Did a great job. Him too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

But can she hold off. Don't think so.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

However, I think Bella is a little more forward than most, is it the French?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

It would be much easier if they married and she got out of the house.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Calm before the storm

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Bound to happen.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

No love it. Don't care if it's historically accurate. It's too much fun the way it is.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

All for second chances but I think she will go after Edward. Sometimes a leopard never changes his spots. And Alastair will be out for revenge.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Tanya had long term effects on many people.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wondered about the ages. Thanks

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Love the spitfire Isabella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Alice confuses me too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Leave it to Isabella to save the day.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

So sweet.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard

So happy things turned out well. Maybe now, without the pressure, Alice will get pregnant.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Beautiful ending. Really enjoyed the story. Wasn't surpised James got killed but really didn't think it was Edward.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Is she going to tell Edward. Quess I missed the hints. Bella isn't really one to not voice her opinions, so I'd be surprised if she doesn't say something.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Poor little thing, none of this is her fault. It's always the children who suffer.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

What does he want?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Glad Jasper to the rescue. Something else is going on here. Have a nice visit.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

James get killed but it isn't Edward who kills him. Jasper or Alice maybe?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I forgot about that. Was Isabella a distraction so James could sneek in and take Kate?

Summary:

Winter, 1693. The hysteria of Salem has reached the town of Carlisle, MA, where a group of magistrates including Edward Masen are sent to investigate claims of witchcraft. Will they find the truth & save those who are innocent? FGB o/s Javamomma0921.

 

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This banner was created for me by Rosalynn as a part of my FGB bid on her awesome banner skills.

 

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This is the banner I created for the story myself.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17336 Read Count: 1154
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered

I really hate to give bad. Could have been a really good good concept but read like a primary ready. See spot run. No depth Sorry, needs more feeling.

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Rose is her usual self.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Hope you enjoyed!

Update coming soon!

xo
jaime

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Very nice reunion.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review!

I hope you had a lovely holiday and an update will be coming soon!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Sooo good.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Very quick.



Author's Response:

I know it is quick.. but ... when you know you know.  One of my BF's got engaged 2 wks after meeting her husband. 

Hope you are enjoying!  Update coming soon!

xo

jaime

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Never pays to keep secrets.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Knowing it was coming did not make it any easier.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Trust after lies has to be earned. What can he do to get her back?



Author's Response:

I agree... :) thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - RL has been keeping me busy!!

Thanks so much for the support!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

So cute. What a great ending.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Any doubt that she's pregnant? None at all.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow he certainly got his feeling across with the review. This separation is painful.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Had me worried there for a minute. Thought she was going to see him with Heidi.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Was afraid it was going to be too late. Edward has no job, he will be great running the lodge with her.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

So happy for them.

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 *~ The Chapter Where They Finally Do It!*~

Glad they finally got together. He won't be able to stop now.

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: CPR for The Dead Heart

I agree don't like overkill but it's always enoyable getting into his head.



Author's Response:

he definitely has his moments... i love a nervous edward.lol

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

Love getting to know the family better. The biggest thing that shocked me about Seattle was the homeless people. Even in Chicago it didn't seem so bad. My son said it was because the weather in Seattle was much more bearable. Granted Illinois winters can be brutal. Seattle shuts down if it snows, of course they have so little no one needs to know how to drive. It's an instand shut down the city.



Author's Response:

sounds like the south....one snowflake and everyone starts wigging out.  lol.  I'm the child of yankee parents living in the south with a very southern husband. (yeah..he had ancestors in Jamestown and is a descendant of Pocahontas...what am I supposed to do with that?  lol ) reason 57 of why i drink (on occassion)...

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

Human stalker moments are good.



Author's Response:

Edward can stalk me any time.  Emmett is forbidden...although he wakes me up from time to time with something silly he wants me to write about.  annoying.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

He'll always be Emo.

 



Author's Response:

that's true...but i'll keep trying. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

So glad for Edwards take on things.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Tying Up Loose Ends

He'll feel better, forgiving. This made me remember our train trip from Chicago to Seattle and back last summer. Quite the experience.

 



Author's Response:

i agree.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

This was really funny and I really need to find out what that chair is. I'm so dumb.



Author's Response:

they have a website...but be careful, the video may as well be a porno....just sayin.  Don't judge me, I merely viewed it for research purposes.  ;D

Dark Moon by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella told you the story of our life together, which according to her human memories was correct, she told the story, as she believed it to be. The problem with human memories is that they fade and become blurry over time. Vampire memories are stronger and more reliable. Not to say that Bella didn’t tell the story as she remembered it, but I remember it a bit different than she did.

There was quite a bit she had no knowledge of. A lot of things that happened with my family that she couldn’t know about and I never revealed to her. This is the story she wouldn’t have known to tell. My hope is that it will clear up a few misconceptions…

 

 

Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115560 Read Count: 6233
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Ending

It's so much sadder from his point of view.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and responding. I find EPOV sadder too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Werewolves

Really hate the wolves.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-The Meadow

These were the longest chapters in the  book for me. Really don't like Jacob.



Author's Response: I'm with on that statement and you'll be glad to know there is only one more Jacob chapter then it's back to Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Misery

You really had me nervous there for a minute. I thought he was going to stray. Glad he didn't. Hate his agony, but he brought it on himself. Stupid guy.



Author's Response:

Yeah! I got that alot with this chapter, but never fear Edward would never do that on purpose. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15-Italy

Like hearing EPOV



Author's Response:

I'm with you I love EPOV too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Volturi

Always a disturbing ending.



Author's Response:

THanks for reading and reviewing. I loved the Volturi the way Stephanie wrote them, not so much in the movies. I think they were a little to dark in the movies. I know they were suppose to be, but really I think it would have been better if they were less serious because we already knew how evil they could be. There is nothing better than someone appearing normal when you know they are not.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Flight

Love this POV

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-The Vote

Nice, just as I imagined.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389624
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Wow, are we ever going to get out of flashbacks? Love Esme, Emmett, Alice and of course Edward.



Author's Response:

Eventually yes!  Patience is a virtue!  When you rush things get sloppy!  Trust me you´ll get your chance at ´hard and fast´ soon enough!  Lol!  Thanks for taking the time to read and review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Love Alice !!!! So funny



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Trying to get a grip.



Author's Response:

Well I don't want to give anything away, but I has been about 5 years since they've communicated with each other, alot can change in that amount of time.  That said, we'll just have to wait and see how that telephone call goes!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Leah was always a bitch.



Author's Response:

That she was! I think she was born that way!  Lol!  You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Holy shit that was hot!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Can't wait for them to finally meet. Love Mojo.



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Fanning furioursly.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Oh my, holy shit. That was so intense. If I wasn't reading Master of the Universe last night, (during the SB) it would have happily been this. The anticipation is agonizing. Can't wait until identities are known.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Sitting on the edge of my seat. He better not screw this up.



Author's Response:

Let´s hope he doesn´t ! Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Such another fantastic chapter. Was so afraid you were going to leave us with them separated. Loooove the pictures too!Can't wait for the next update. Hope he takes care of the "problem" then.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Loved, loved, loved it. Have to cool off. Fan, fan, fan. Whoever doesn't like your pictures is nuts. Want more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the love!  Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more!  Check  em out!


Krazi

xoxo

 

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

God, you make me tense.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

Absolutely great chapter. Hope Bella doesn't need to choose between Mojo and Edward. Wonder who would win.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Won't be mad about updates if you keep putting out chapters like this. Can't wait to check blog but need to wait till I'm alone, know you understand why. Hope Mojo tears Jake's leg off and then gets a piece of Leah too.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

In all the years they were married, Edward didn't know who Angela's mother was?



Author's Response:

shhhh.....a lil secret.......she adopted...so he knows her adoptive parents.......... xoxoxoox

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home

Oh, that was beautiful.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

This has gone absolutely crazy.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved your very hot picture of Edward and Bella in the shower. Is that photshoped or did they pose for it. Yum



Author's Response:

ur welcome...xoxox Definitely photoshopped LOL......

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

Ang should get stuck with Eric



Author's Response:

Hahahahah she should xoxo thanks for reviewing DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

Not exactly the night they planned.



Author's Response:

Noooooo, not at all....xoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

Gotta love Emmett's warning!



Author's Response:

Emmett is great in this story....Ari writes him perfectly....

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

How worse could this get. Now she and Eric get along. What a mess.



Author's Response:

Clean up on aisle two.......:) i hope ur enjoying the read and thank you soo much for reviewing...xox

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

Loved Emmett's ramblings. Can't see anything good coming from Edward's plan. Going to make it much harder to get rid of Angela. Didn't Ang already tell Bella that he was a jerk?



Author's Response:

I just updated so hope you enjoy what happens next...xoxo thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

One down. His plan is backfiring. Love all your pictures by the way. Very very hot. Oh, my god!



Author's Response:

Thank you we love making pictures,, especially when then Spartan hot...thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

Eric was a freek case.



Author's Response:

Yup, he was....thanks so much for the review hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

Loved the goldfish story. This couldn't be the first time guys came on to Edward. It really isn't a pretty sight.



Author's Response:

I loved the fish story too the first time I read it...Ari is great....xoox thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

What a complete messed up situation. Hope Angela messes up big time. Bella doesn't need to be in the middle of this.



Author's Response:

WE shall see where this story brings us....we have our outlines done but we throw in here and there can change everything xoxoxo happy holidays

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

Trouble is can you every really trust someone that's had an affair?



Author's Response:

Thats a good question.....RL........I would have a problem...but I do have clients that HAVE been cheated and have worked on their marriage successfully.....as for Spartan and Kitten....I think they both know they were meant for one another

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

A very Merry Christmas.



Author's Response:

Indeed! LOL I wish my Christmas was that awesome!

Thank you so much for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

This will be good.



Author's Response:

I hope soooo too......

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

First of all, I love Edwards well thought out extensive list.

Second, how did Ang get in with the power outage? She must have someone working with her.



Author's Response:

:) His list was awesome LOL

Can't tell ya that yet. But you will find out how Ang got in, in the next chapter.

Thank you BB for your great review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x00xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

Wow knew Mike could come in handy.



Author's Response:

Yes he has....xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

Ang needs to be in a padded room.



Author's Response:

LOL why yes she does! But you haven't seen her crazy yet. Just keep that in mind.

Thank you so much for your review.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Knew there was a reason for Esme's behavour. And he still hasn't spoken to Bella, not good.



Author's Response:

sorry but the chapter was all in one at first soo he does talk to Bella to ease ur mind......and the rest of the chapter is Fan fucking tastic

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

It is indeed LOL

Thank you so much for your review BB!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

What an excellent chapter. Love the commanding Rose.



Author's Response:

She's so easy to write like that! We're glad you liked the chapter.

Thank you for your review!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

Could we hate Esme any more?



Author's Response:

I know Hey.....well I could give u a few more reasons..........xoxoxoxooxox

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

Why on earth did they uncuff her?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

Poor Carlisle and Edward. This is hard to take.



Author's Response:

WEre sorry but we hope the outcome of writing this scenario is worth it

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow

He's being really stupid.

 

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

Good, I was ready to never speak to him again.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer

Talk about leaving on a cliff.



Author's Response:

:) we're sorry about that. But the next chap will be up soon!

Thank you for your review!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.

Beautiful wedding, love her dress. Oh, and your jokes were great too.



Author's Response:

hahaha we try to make u laugh with the jokes....xoxo thank you soo much for reviewing....and a honeymoon is right around the corner

Summary:

You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!!  Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA

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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!

Ari

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love

Oh my gosh, so sad.