Reviews by helluvabell
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

...The ranger.... it was the ranger the whole time... That caught me off guard... wow...

And ewww, please don't tell me he and Geri were "together".... well they're together now.



Author's Response:

lol not together like that...eww.  They were friends.  Thanks! next chap is up now.

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Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

I really wish you would stop writing about creepy characters that harass Bella. I feel so useless reading about it when I want to knee them in the family jewels or arrange to have them in a grizzly car/bus accident! No, I wouldn't do that... maybe.

Great update!

Funny thing... I'm reading this update on the day of Oprah's last airing :D

Guess she couldn't stick with your timeline!



Author's Response:

It's all good...their visit to Oprah occurs in June 2010...so it fits perfectly. If it makes you feel better, we will have a much smaller dose of creeps from now until the wedding (s).  Thanks so much!

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Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

So do you have anymore buses we could use to hit Rose's cousins? Seriously, I would have told them to take a hike, etiquette be dammed.

So disappointing about the interview. Not really surprised to see they found a way though...bastards.

Loved the wedding and the image of the uptight Mrs. Whitlock dancing to Soulja Boy XD

And for the record I would never call you a whore....maybe...possibly.

Summary:

Outtake for Creating A Mate.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5062 Read Count: 1344
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Gifts

Thanks so much for explaining. I was wondering about the mall thing. I look forward to the next chapter. Will there be a show-down?

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
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Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Valentines For The Enamored

I think 'freak show' is probably the best way to describe Geri!!!

Thanks for another update! I don't know if I'm sorry to here that you're snowed in...I'm digging the updates to this and V&V :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm halfway through the next V&V...

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Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Wow, you've just about caught up, huh?

Love drunk Edward just as much as I do Drunkella! "I can hold it just fine, right here in my fucking hand, motherfucker." Too freakin' funny!



Author's Response:

haha  i liked that line too.  okay so just posted the next LRM...and I've been working on the next V&V so it won't be long until I post that.  Thanks !

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Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

I official love EPOV! I myself have a hard time writing it, so I appreciate reading it. Thanks for another chapter.



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!  Thank you for the review!

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

STALKER!!!!

lol...but seriously, it's kind of nice knowing he can't help himself :)



Author's Response:

I enjoy writing this character slowly come apart at the seams...it quite fun.  Thanks!

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

Van Morrison is a great choice for a Bella playlist. And it just squeeved me out that those nasty women throw themselves at Edward....I would never do that...maybe....



Author's Response:

hiding in E's bed?  Well, I wouldn't do it in his parent's house....that would be tacky.  But in his L.A. house?  hmm  with the pool just made for schmexing..... No, I would not do that.  Never.  (Did that sound sincere?)....ah screw it...I'd do it in a heartbeat.

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Of all the panties to steal, he takes those! That's just too funny...Little Mermaid...the Holy Grail (lol).

And how sweet was Sidney? Worrying over Bella's clumsiness. It actually earned an "aaawwww" from me.

And you're right, I'm loving Team Charlie too. I wonder if they sell any shirts ;)



Author's Response:

glad he didn't come across as some sort of pedophile..lol.  I think I've seen Team Charlie mugs and t-shirts....rocking the 'stache.  Thanks!

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Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Resolutions For The New Year

Ah...Tanya...I forgot about the whole avoiding thing. No worries, her secrets will come out ;)

What a sweet New's Year Resolution. Hopefully he's nothing like me and can actually keep it!



Author's Response:

if Ben and Jerry's didn't make Chocolate Fudge Brownie ice cream i could keep my resolutions too.  lol  Thanks!

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Making Plans For A New Start

I get drowzy in the car too...not when I'm driving though, 'cause that would be bad. No, when I'm driving I crank up the Black Eyed Peas and pretend Emmett is right next to me, sing off key (because I can't be the only one)!



Author's Response:

the carcalepsy term is something actually made up about me by hubs....i had to use it...how could i not?  Yeah, i miss a lot when hubs is driving me around... lol  Thanks! 

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Calm Before The Storm

Sometimes it's like reading two different stories...I have to go to V&V to get a reference of what's going on! (LOL)

I read you put that part of the pedophile in....might I make a teeny suggestion? When they finally do step it up...don't give Bella a bald kitty. If he's having problems now, he definately will need to see Dr. Gould!

Thanks for another great chapter from EPOV!



Author's Response:

okay...you just made me laugh my ass off!  That was hysterical.  Bella would do that on her own...but you know that Rose and Alice would try to force her.  It could be very funny....  We'll have to see.  Thanks so much! 

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Destiny Interrupted

Those damn paps have to ruin everything!



Author's Response:

always.  That will be a recurring theme unfortunately.  THanks!

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Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

And I thought it was sad from BPOV! God, you are so good at pulling at those heartstrings.

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

In a way, I think it's probably sadder from Edward's perspective.  After all, he knows the truth, and just can't get her to listen to him.  So he thrashes around while quickly losing his mind.  poor boy.   Thanks! 

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

I really like hearing Edward's thoughts.

I use to work the projection booth at a theater that did TRHPS. Loved watching the fun those guys had. Their initiation ritual was different. They made the 'virgin' get dry humped from behind by the friend that brought them, while they sang the Oscar Mayer wiener song. Hilarious.

Your story takes me back.



Author's Response:

that would have been freaking hilarious too....the one here does the paddling.  If I'd been really thorough I would have contacted someone in Seattle and had them investigate. lol  Thanks!

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Prelude To Aspen

I simply love their skype banter! Thanks for another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Long Awaited Reunion

Edward's reaction to Bella's nightgown was priceless! Cavemanese...LOL!

Oh, and Truly Madly Deeply was one of my favs in the '90s... it made me want to be in love *sigh*

Thanks for the sweet update.



Author's Response:

I love Caveward.  THanks!

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Setback To A Full Recovery

It's amazing to see all the people who care about her jump into action. We saw more of it on EPOV than in Bella's. Great Job!



Author's Response:

glad you liked it.  yeah...Bella was  little out of it.  Thanks!

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Warm Love For The Impatient

I loved knowing I wasn't the only one getting impatient with Tanya's bs.

Great chapter btw...so...SNL, huh? Will that be a chapter we get to read? :)



Author's Response:

SNL would be fun but couldn't happen until sometime btwn sept and dec...i would love to write a chapter on that...it's in the outline if i decide to.  Thanks!

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Crash And Burn

Guess we have to read the bad with the good, huh?  *sigh* Alright.

Oh, the last part of his dream did make me laugh. Emmett could do some serious damage, but what Edward fears most is getting farted on! LOL... man, that must be some powerful stank!



Author's Response:

lol..it's because he knows about Em farting on the paps..it must have freaked out his subconscious. lol  Thanks!

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

How the hell did I forget about that pool scene?!?!?!? It was steamy and I didn't remember it until I was about half-way finished reading it! Gah!

Well, another wonderful chapter! It's nice reading about the women in Edward's life lay into him. If I was there, I would have chewed his ass out too.

I have to tell you something. I had a total Bella moment while reading this chapter. When Edward was talking with his peen, I actually offered to talk to it for him... out loud. I clapped my hand over my mouth and looked around, completely embarrased.

*sigh* I could only hope, huh?



Author's Response:

hmm.  did anyone hear you?  I'm guilty of speaking out loud while writing my story...i realize I've done it when hubs quirks an eyebrown at me.  so far, I've been able to cover, pretending i'm reading or laughing at something online.  i will outright lie if I have to...hey that's better than being sent to the looney bin. lol   Thanks.

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

I'd be totally willing to sacrifice Bella's liver if we get to see more from Drunkella :D



Author's Response:

LOL.  I'm sure she'll have more 'episodes'.  We still have Rose's bachelorette party to look forward to....  oops...i'm talking too much.  ; )  Thanks!

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Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Karaoke For Cavemen

Gah, Edward's line about Bella turning a bar full of gay men was hilarious!

Yeah I hear you on the zombie thing. People look at me like I'm nuts when I worry about a zombie apocalypse! It could happen! I have a plan set and everything ;)

"What was that noise?" I don't know; someone else can go check it out :D



Author's Response:

damn zombies.  they freak me out on a regular basis. lol.  i've even discussed with one of my daughters which would be safer to withstand a zombie takeover.  BJ's or Walmart....because of the unlimited supply of food etc.  I lean more towards BJ's because there are less windows to bar....my husband overheard us and threatened to have us both committed.  LOL.  i normally can't stand Walmart..but if it will help me survive zombies...i'm there.  Thanks!  

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

OMG... I would have loved to see Edward telling the priest to fuck off. I don't think Bella would have been too happy, but it would have made my day :)

I miss Father Pat (?)(I think that was his name). LOL.

And Miss Gloria Powell... what a classy lady.

Great update, can't wait for Seattle filming!



Author's Response:

i've met one or two i'd like to say that to also.  Father Pat will be back soon... and we will meet Gloria again.  Thanks!

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Give And Take

It's weird, if Edward was a woman *frowns* we would be disgusted by all the men who hit on her, but because he's a man he only gets a little bit of pity. Maybe it was because it was own fault. Even though I didn't like Angel, she had a point. For years Edward did nothing about his reputation as a man-whore and look what's happening!

Grrr... I don't want to think about it anymore... *pouts*



Author's Response:

cheer up..it will get better...actually it's already a little better a month later in V&V.  Thanks!

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Just thinking about Edward's girlie scream has me in stiches!

Yes,yes, he stalked her... just say it. It's nothing to be embarassed abo--... well yeah he should be embarassed. :)



Author's Response:

i love the scream too...even if it is only imaginary..lol.  Thanks!

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Awe I forgot what he had said when she was sleeping with his shirt. "I wish I was in it." Awe, sooo sweet. That's a good one :)

I really liked the talk he had with Charlie! I was wondering what was said...

Thanks so much for the update.



Author's Response:

thanks!  LRM is catching up with V&V....yay!   I'll be so glad when I finally get there!  Glad you liked the chapter!

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

Oh, the timing is perfect!!! While Bella was freaking out about the skype dance, Edward was planning a purposal =)

Great, great update!

LOL...loved seeing Edward trip over himself to get to Drunkella.



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed that..just posted the next one.  Thanks!

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Sage Advice For The Overworked

OMG... I was totally eating oatmeal when I read that phone call with Esme. Do you know how gross oatmeal is to clean up? lol...

Great chapter. I loved how Edward told that interviewer off. It was kinda hot. You know what else was hot? Johnny Depp. I just spent my Spring Break doing a museum tour, and of course one was a wax museum. I totally took my picture with Johnny Depp. *sigh*

There was also an Edward and Bella set-up. I was sooo disappointed. It looked nothing like them! Not that that stopped me from getting a picture with them too ;)



Author's Response:

sorry about your oatmeal disaster.  Emmett is usually the culprit in these situations.  I don't know what the heck got into Esme. lol.  Glad you enjoyed it.  If you liked him telling off the radio dude...you will love when he meet Victor James in the chapter of LRM I just posted.  Thanks!

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

I got a bad feeling about the nightmares...



Author's Response:

he will have them for a while....  Thanks!

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

Gotta feel bad for Eddie here. He must have felt so cheap being groaped as a form of payment... *shudders*

I have to be honest, I kind of wanted to see Sidney lay the smack down on Granny XD



Author's Response:

LOL...u are so bad.  Thanks very much!

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Dammit, you made me cry!

Great chapter. To see his entire world spiraling out of control because of what might have happened to her is frightening.



Author's Response:

Sorry about the crying.  Edward is getting better now..thank heavens.  next chap is up.  Thanks!

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

Grrrr.... I want him shut down! I'm going to get a little picket sign that reads 'Down with James Victor!' or possibly something more catchy... something that rhymes... and glitter...can't forget the glitter...

Of course, I'm fully aware this will make me look like a crazy person, but I don't care! He needs to go down! Oh, we need Oprah power!



Author's Response:

lol  and now we've got Oprah....just need to see what magic she works.  Thanks!

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Probabaly one of the funniest chapters I've read!

Great update :)



Author's Response:

I thank you!  It's a good day if I can make someone laugh.  Diligently working on the next V&V....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella pretends to be a coma patient's fiancee just to be able to keep seeing him. What happens when he wakes up from coma? What will she do when his brother begins to suspect she's lying? AH, AU, OOC, Cannon, E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52812 Read Count: 15309
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
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Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Fateful Day

Oh, sweetie, that's my favorite scene in the movie where SandyB makes that "uh uh" sound! LMAO!

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Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Late Night Visits

It's so weird. I have the movie playing in my head and when ever the dialog is changed to fit twiligt it's like blaringly obvious... is that sad that I have the scenes in my head like that?

Love it so far. My only difficulty is invisioning Carlilse as both Peter Facinelli and Peter Boyle...hmmm....strange.

I'm reading this during my writing breaks, if you're wondering :D

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Great story.

I can't wait for their trial scene! Now that I'm all caught up, I hope to review regularly. It's just so much more tempting to hit the 'Next' button than typing out the review! LOL... apologies. ;)

Will we find out what happened with Jake/Will and Leah next chapter?



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

AMAZING SCENE!!!!

I still can't imagine him not be able to do her aftercare. I know, I know... it was necessary, but still. No wonder his emotions were all over the place.

Great update :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Right, so I'm already familiar with both of your works, so I knew I had to check this story out. So it's pretty much a fanfic of LAV...LOL. Can an author write a fanfic based on their own work? LOL...

I don't know, but I do know I love what I've read so far!

I'm off to the next chapter ;)



Author's Response:

Hi Helluvabell!

Thanks for giving this a shot. This version is the dark version of LAV- although this is a stand alone story. LAH will be much darker, and there are some things that will differ significantly. LOL@Can an author write a fanfic based on their own work? Yeah, I think so. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jells

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Gah...that chapter was soooooo good!

I...words cannot... I don't know what to say....

Except something I've promised myself never to say.... write faster!

Shit...now I feel like a bitch.... don't listen to me. Take your time to make the chapters just as awesome... and if those awesome chapter are updated in a speedy manner then it would be awesomer. Great, now I'm making up words. I hope you guys are happy :P



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you =) Glad you liked.

*gasp* write faster? lmao I wish we could! For realz! But we'll do our best to get the next chapter out asap.

Thanks for your awesome comments and for giving our story a chance!

~Jells

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Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Yea......*claps hands excitedly* they're finally together!

Great chapter, I can't wait to see how this plays out :)

The violence didn't bother me, what actually bothered me was Jasper's foolish hunger to be better than his brother. It makes me shake my head. I understand sibling rivalry, but enough to kill and be killed over. I don't get it.

Looking forward to the next installment!



Author's Response:

Look at it in the human aspect of males. TO always be pent against your brother, to always be told he was better, to be told you fail at life. Jasper is determine to prove that wrong. To prove to his species he isn't as weak as they think. He wants to prove he can "hang" with Edward and it's just no phycially possible. NO the jealousy and anger trns to hatred and rage and he does dumb shit.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Tyggy~

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71762
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So, I've been reading this fic for two days now, and I must tell you, I LOVE IT!!!! I love everything about this story. (I especially love Big Red.)

I can't wait to see where this story is going! You have me wondering who is behind controlling Alice and how Edward will react to vampy Bella. I look forward to it!

--helluvabell

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

Such a great plot! I look forward to the next chapter :)

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Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!

Are you just gonna gloss over the fact that Edward came home smelling like another woman?!?!? If Bella won't say it, I will-- That's messed up! What the hell did he do?!?!

Oh...BTW...Eden is adorable :)



Author's Response:

i wont gloss i assure you.. when people are in their right mind.. it will come up

The Cut by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

cut

Re-write Of Not So Average.

Isabella Swans' Life at home is no fairytale. She struggles with her weight, depression and family. Eager to get away from her verbally abusive mother and start afresh, Isabella journeys to her first year of college, where she experiences hardships, friendships and Greeks. After seeing her first  Greek step-show and eyeing the most popular guy on campus Edward Cullen for the first time, the burn inside her to belong boils to the surface, but there is one obsticle in her way. Rosalie Hale...

Warning: This fic contains: Hazing, Bulimia, Sex,teasing, child abuse, Negligance, suicidal thoughts,OOC, and angst.

All actions that occur in this story are purely fictional.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13368 Read Count: 3341
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Nov 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Somewhere I can Be Myself.

Such a sad home life. Poor Bella thinks things would be better if she wasn't heavy, but people like Renee will always find something to criticize.

Can't wait to see where your new direction will take this story. Looking forward to it.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Somewhere I rather be…

Great update! As much as what Renee did to her sucks, I'm glad she's free of her. And yea for Jasper being there! Glad to see she's already making friends.

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am loving the hell out of this story. Their family is sooo naughty! And I'm glad that Bella is, of course, his favorite.

Looking forward to the next chapter...I have a feeling Tanya is not going down without a fight.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving it a chance! Tanya will different be making a mess of things. I hope you like it! Nails233

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yeah, okay... I really like your pervy story ;)

So Tanya's in trouble. James is in trouble. The plot thickens!

I'm intrested to see what the fall out is. Did I read that correctly-- Tanya can be stoned? Hmmm...intresting.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not much in this chapter other than a lemon.... not that I'm complaining btw.... guess I'm just antsy for Tanya and James' punishment. I'm also worried about Victoria's place in the house... huh? guess this chapter did stir up a few questions LOL. They were hiding behind the citrus!

Have I mentioned how much I'm loving this story? Well, just making sure ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So very happy that Maxine didn't die. Kinda curious about the no babies being born.

I'm looking forward to next update :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Such a great story! I'll have you know you had me in tears a few times. I can't wait to see how things smooth over for Bella. I'm glad she told them how much she wanted to do this on her own. She's grown a lot from the first chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.

Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Putting the Pieces Together

Oh, that sucks soooo bad! Poor Bella, that's what happens when you crush on a boy slut. At least he finally remembered.

Great update! Looks like Hot Puss is going to do everything in her power to limit the amount of competition! Go, girl!

Summary:

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O/S: Edward comes to terms with his failed relationship with the help of someone unexpected, yet completely needed. Cannon Pairing. E/B

 

Banner done by: Beautiful Liar (Thank you)


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3853 Read Count: 690
[Report This] Published: 05 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YOU HAD ME GOING!!!! I was thinking to myself, "This is a depressingn E/B story!" I was wondering wher the hell you were taking this!

Good one!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84331
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Present

You had me worried there, first with her fall, then Edward missing...and now....well, we'll just have to wait and see how they make up ;)

Great update!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One

Oh Mistress,

I've been reading your story all day, and I must say I love it!

I love it so much that not only did I add this gem to my Favorites list, but I will be rec'ing it in my next two updates :)

God, their lust/hate relationship is so yummy. I really hope he doesn't break her heart too terribly.

Great story, sweetie!



Author's Response:

HI!

WHAT A NICE REVIEW TO RECEIVE FROM A FELLOW WRITER!  EXCITED TO SEE YOU'RE WRITING TWO FICS! DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT!

I'LL BE SURE TO R&R THEM TOO!

XOXO

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (or not)

Good for you!!!

I personally don't recall your grammer being an issue, but on the bright side, this will make you a stronger more confident writer. Word of advice, don't be too crestfallen when you see how much PTB corrects. When I went to them for "Control" I was devastated with how many mistakes were in the document. That's OKAY. They are there to help us writers put better fics out. Personally I rarely use them, only because it's a lot to keep up with my stories AND edit my previous works. I'm glad you're doing this and I wish you the best of luck!

I look forward to your return :)

--helluvabell



Author's Response:

Thanks for the heads-up!  I guess that's part of the reason why I didn't want a Beta in the first place!  I don't want writing this story to feel like work, you know?  It's meant to be fun, and I'm scared s**less that it will turn writing this fic into a duty in stead of a plesure!

Nevertheless, I've made the decission, so yeah, we'll just wait and see what PTB comes back with!

Guess there's no harm in growing and becoming stronger as a writer (although it makes me feel like a plant in stead of a human)! ;)

Hopefully I'll see you around on the next chapter!

xoxo

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow

Oh Edward.... he thinks he knows it all. Surely he knows the Jessica sucks as an editor and would benefit if Bella was on board... but no, all he knows is that Bella lied to him. Boo freakin' hoo... he would cut his nose to spite his face. Unfortunately well all like his face!!!

Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

Love it! I especially love the office scene where everybody thinks he's in trouble. I'm wondering when he'll realize the truth on why she lied about his manuscript! It really was for his own good *shudders when thinking about the nasty Jessica*

'Til next time, Mistress!

--helluvabell

Summary:

“Your name is Galifree, after your dad’s lost world. Galifree Tyler, the newest Time Lady.”

Set after Season 2 episode 14: Doomsday


Categories: Dr. Who, Alternate Universe
Characters: Rose Tyler/The Doctor
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 700 Read Count: 107
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2011 Updated: 26 May 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Rose by Any Other Name

Awe... so sad! S tried to tell me about this story arc, but I've never seen Dr. Who. I know, I know... what's wrong with me?!?! But I do know enough to get what you're writing about. Great work, sweetie. Are you going to continue it?



Author's Response:

lol, I agree, what is wrong with you? :* But I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I am planning a sequel, just not sure when it will be completed. :)

Summary:

 

 

For those of you who read "The Perfect Wife" this takes place twelve years after the epilogue. You do not need to read TPW, but an understanding of the story is helpful.

Carlisle ran a human trafficking ring. He was an abusive husband and father. Esme suffered cruel and horrific atrocities at her husband’s hand. Her sons, Emmett, Jasper and Edward were raised to treat her no better than a slave; undeserving of love and respect. Rosalie, Alice and Bella are brought into this life as their wives and together these women fight to change their outlook on life and women. At the end of TPW, Em/J/E have learned to change and passionately love and respect their wives.

Carlisle is finally killed when he attempts to hurt Bella, freeing Esme from a lifetime of abuse. His will stated he wanted to be cremated so his ashes would remain with his family, forever a symbol of his power over his family. Esme refuses to let him control her life any longer and takes his urn from the house returning empty-handed hours later.

TPW was Bella and Edward’s story. This is Esme’s story.

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4083 Read Count: 7763
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Esme is such an amazing woman! Classy and strong, and the undeniable pillar of their family. The love she has for them is truly heart touching. I might have gotten a little misty-eyed reading it :)

I'm really looking forward to TDOP! Will it be released as on e-book format?



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to show that not everything is perfect, but it's what you make of the life you've been given that counts. The pink flamingo tree is real and sits in my house every Christmas. The flamingo lights hang in the windows of my sewing room and I even have one flower bed that's full of tacky plastic pink flamingos. I see them every night when I pull in the driveway and I remember to laugh.


The Darkness of Perfection will be released in paperback and ebook formats.


Take care!

Mic

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

My god, they are so sweet! I'm loving this story. I know there's going to be a rought patch coming up, but I'm ready to brave it just so I can see them happy like this again.

I can't wait for how this story will unfold!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such a sad chapter.

But it will be okay. Edward's getting all vamped up, no?... soon?...right?

I know the next chapter will probably be a doozey. Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

Vamped up?? LOL Yes, Carlisle will change him but we won't be seeing Edward for a while. We must check in with Bella and see what she's up to and how her life will change with Edward gone.  Thanks for the review, darlin. You know I love them - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek of chapter 9:

“Mrs. Jones, what do you think he’s doing right now,” I asked dreamily.

 

She chuckled again. “If I know that boy, he is in his room right now thinking of you.”

 

“Do you really think so?” I asked, never taking my eyes off the clouds.

 

“Miss Bella, that boy has been thinking of you since the two of you were babies. He will not be stopping now just because you aren’t near him.”

 

A smile grew on my face as I thought of Edward lying in his bed, ankles crossed, hands linked together under his head, hopefully with a smile on his face while he thought about me.  I rolled my head to the side to see Mrs. Jones.

 

“I just wish he knew how much I love him and how much I want to be with him right now.” I sighed.

 

“He knows, Miss Bella.” Her grin crossed her entire face. “He knows because he loves you just as much.”

Summary: Past Featured Story

fsg

New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life

Oh my God! That was too hilarious. Seriously, I needed that laugh. I'll keep checking in as I read ;)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It

Don't you hate it when people blame you for their crappy day?

Loved the Dickmobile and Dickcave...LOL.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse

"vhy your cock does not vorrk..." --hehehe

Yeah.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Departures

You did not call her vagina a hot pocket!

Sounds like B has a little green monster on her shoulder. Or maybe... Yeah, I can see where she's coming from. To apologize for bad behavior then immediately ask for a favor like that seems in bad form. Then again he did help her move in. Oh well!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Perceptiions and Misperceptions

I loved reading Edward's thoughts during this chapter. Too funny. "Tit-for-tat... tit... cleavage... pink bra."

LOL

I don't think I would be brave enough to go snooping through the Dickcave. I know, I know, I'm a wuss. But I'd be afraid of what I'd find.



Author's Response:

Hi helluvabell!

Well, what can I say? I love being insigde Edward's head. If I can't be in his bed, I can at least try to get into his head, right?  ;)

I am loving your play-by-play reactions to what you are reading. Thank you so much for all the reviews. I hope you continue to enjoy the read.

-bannerday

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Into the Lair

Inanimate objects taunting her? Maybe she is a basket case.

Awwwwww, I like Tupperware-holding, cookie-eating, eyes-only-for-Bella, Edward!

That's hilarious when the basket case thinks you're screwy...lol. And yes, he was totally standing there naked.

I can't believe you made me look up gubernatorial...*snort*. And I can totally see someone with a love of books being named Atticus, but it does sound old...hmmm.

She's so gonna get caught.

I CAN'T WATCH. I CAN'T WATCH. I CAN'T WATCH.....

I can't believe you stopped it there. If I were Bella, I'd totally own it. Say, "Hey, you're back. BTW, I went snooping. It happens. Bye!"



Author's Response:

He helluvabell!

I laughed all the way through this review. And I wanted to hug "Tupperwear-holding, cookie-eating, eyes-only-for-Bella Edward"...especially when you described him that way. You are describing Inner Edward. He's in there and I'm trying to bring him out.

I loved the "I CAN'T WATCH segment of your review. I'm surprised you were able to type that out, hiding behind the couch like you were. LOL

Thanks for giving me some guffaws. Your reviews are a delight.

-bannerday

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning

Holy shit, indeed!

I gotta telly ya, anytime I hear or see, "Are you crying?" I immediately hear Tom Hanks telling me there's no crying in baseball. Crazy, huh?

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Espect

Wait... so he didn't put that python in the side table?... You know, they tell you to take the batteries out when not in use. Just saying...

KING DONG!...hehehe...Mega meat*snort*...sonofabitch...hehehe

That is some pretty vivid alliteration. Dirk Diggler Dancing Dong. Kinda just rolls off the tongue--oh yeah. I love it when words are naughty!

OMG....I was going to say that Bella's lucky. I always love it when Alice is nice and outgoing and it's certain that they will be great friends (not how I always write her), but this connection to Edward must have Bella on guard. Not a good way to start a friendship.



Author's Response:

Just "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"

Python...batteries out..."Dirk Diggler Dancing Dong kind of just rolls of the tongue."  (Better than having the Dirk Diggler Dancing Dong dribbling off your tongue, you know?)

Glad you like my alliterative and naughty language.

Thanks for the latest cackles.

-bannerday

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces

LOL...that he's jealous of Eric Yorkie....*gasps clutching side*...can't breathe...

OMG! I LOVE getting reviews from male readers. I got one today that made me choke on my spit, snort, and respond in a very un-ladylike way. It was awwwesoooome! Oh I can't wait to find out who these reviewers are :D

"Can I be candid?" Pfft. Sure, tell us how you really feel.

Ah, young_at_hearts review made me smile. Boys and their...toys?...hehehe. Or, "Hey, look at what I can do!"...with my junk.

Hmmm... would that be a newly dented sandalwood candle?

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much

Oh my God, she did not just faint!

Hmmm...honestly I wasn't digging the way the pixie was giving our boy a hard time, but after this chapter I think I might like her. She was never one of my fav Twilight character...always scheming.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Enlightenment

Oh, but I love him jumping to conclusions!

No, Bella! We like that Predator's jewels! If you're nice to them, they'll be nice to you ;)

*Face-palm*... she should have said she locked her knees...ugh...

Who is this broad talking in her head?!?!?! I don't think I like her. She needs a gag.

Killjoy, indeed. :P

OMG...she's taunting the Predator! Where's that little voice now?!?!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Distractions

You know, I finally figured out what I love about this story (besides the fact that it so funny is makes you want to slap your pappy.) I can totally relate to this Bella! Not that hot guys regularly yell at me when they're aroused. Gah. No, I find myself saying, "Oh my God, I do that!" Although I think I'm slightly more obsessive about getting reviews than Bella is. Mmsa says I have a problem and should seek counceling. Also, I'm horrible about responding to reviews. I don't know, I used to respond to all of them. Then as more people started reading it started becoming overwhelming. Not that I'm complaining...lol. I wish I could respond to them all. Good for you if you're anything like your Bella!

P.S. You can never go wrong with an Edward self-lovin' scene ;)



Author's Response:

Hi hb!

Sorry for the delay! I was trying to finish a chapter for New Year's Eve. I haven't posted it here yet...just over on FFN, but I'll post it here in a few days.

I think you are spot on with the interest in this Bella. With all her awkwardness and basketcasery, she feels familiar. I think most of us, no matter how cool and collected we might seem, often have doubts. Especially when it comes to relationships. And I think maybe this Edward is also kind of alluring simply because of that same fact. This girl has him rattled, and he doesn't usually rattle, so it's fun to see his turmoil, because you don't expect it to be there.

Thanks for all the reviews. Sorry I didn't do a better job about replying to all of them. For some reason, I'm much better about replying to reviews (I really try to get every last one) over on FFN than here or Twilighted.

Happy New Year!

-bannerday

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five

NOOOOOOOOOO! I don't want him to read her story! Those are her private thoughts that aren't really private. Annonymous, that's it! ... gasp... oh no.

Great dinner. Great prank. I gotta say this was one of my favorite chapters. They are so cute together. Glad to see that Angela is open-minded and perceptive.

To Be Branded by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

 

Edward is a century old vampire.  He has trouble balancing his submissive and fetish tendencies with his Victorian morals.  The Cullen’s rescue him from 10 years of abuse.  Can Isabella and her ranch be the balm to ease his wounded soul?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8310 Read Count: 2107
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 14 Jul 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Tonight's the night

Absolutely loved it! Sometimes I don't get a feel for animal play fics, but your story wasn't just about their play. It was about their relationship as mates and how they take care of one another. Simply wonderful!

--helluvabell



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533658
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

This is probably one of my favorite mob fics out there. Seriously, I can't get enough. It's weird... even though things are peaceful, I'm reisitant to letting my guard down. Because I know when that happens someone gets shot, or an affair is uncovered, or there's some big misunderstanding that causes Bella and Edward to fight. Yeah, guess I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Argh! I love this fic!

(But seriously, what's up with Rose's beef?)

A Redeeming Love by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Can you forgive the ultimate betrayal?  What if he didn’t deserve the girlfriend he has?  Can you forgive your fiancé?  Your brother?  Can you find love again?  Let’s find out…


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10553 Read Count: 1851
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2011 Updated: 15 Aug 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Redeeming Love

God, Alice and Edward were a couple of sluts, huh?...LOL...

Great one-shot!



Author's Response:

Yep - thanks for reading - Beth

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

YOU WERE NOT THERE!!! SHUT UP!!!....we need to talk...this weekend...find time and I'm there :)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

aaaaaaaaww

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

LOL...I knew it! Their relationship is strong sexually. Nothing wrong with that.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sweetie, this is amazing! Can't wait to see where you take this.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OOOOOHH.....you did not stop there!!!!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Look who's rocking the coffee cup!!!! So excited for you!

Not liking how this chapter ended :(

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

For being a doctor, he's pretty fucking stupid. I'm not liking this. Not liking the angst one bit!

P.S. Love the cat bit.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Yeah... I officially love Peter!

Great job, sweetie!

Now I'm gonna go vote because I've been very naughty in neglecting it ;)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

...I've decided I don't like any of her friends... except Peter... unless he's being a cockblocker. Friends shouldn't make you doubt yourself. WTF!?!? She just got out of a marriage that made her question her sex appeal. Her friends shouldn't be in her business like that, I don't care how much they think they make sense. The truth is, they're not women so they don't think like she does. Not even Peter.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

You did not just do that! I get how hot that scene was....wow was that hot... but did they have to fuck in Nessie? That's so wrong, dude!...lol.

BTW, loved the ending ;)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Well, I can honestly say that's the first blow-job purposal I'd ever read... Thanks for keeping it intresting, and for ditching Alice...I hated that little bitch.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

BRAVO!!!!!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218368
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The scene where Bella's talking to her baby is so sweet and tender. Amazing.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, how I'm loving this fic!

I think Jasper was a little out of line. Not only did he do that in front of the family, but in front of Billy and Sue too. And during meal time! Who ruins a meal like that?

I was impressed with the way Carlisle handled it.

Can't wait for the pregnancy to come out. 'Cause things weren't lively enough, eh? Oh, hell yeah!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

Hmmm... intresting Edward you got here. I can't wait to see how Bella responds to him!