Reviews by Sarabella79
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love it!  Didn't take long for her to feel that pull huh?  And I love the personality changes!  Always love a strong Bella, even if she has some of the "plain old Bella" traits!  Great fic so far!  Can't wait for more!

~Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love it, love it, love it!  Very unique and I can't wait for more!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved it!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Man, what an awesome Christmas!  Love when characters gift cars!  Please!  Someone gift me a car with air conditioning! 

Sorry...ranting...loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171453
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So glad that Bella is really healing!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great chapter!  Looking forward to the sex talk with Charlie.  Seriously though, if you find that manual I would love a copy.  I need to have that same talk with my son before too long and I'm not exactly looking forward to that either!  I feel you pain Charlie!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Great chapter!  Loved that Bella was trying to protect her family, even though she was scared.  Shows how far she has really come!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752829
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed

Wow!  Great chapter!  So proud of Bella for facing her fears to take Sellers down!  And the hotel suite...wow!  So hot!  My ex-husband rented a place like that one time when we were on vacation...heart shapped Jacuzzi, mirrored ceilings and all...and yeah its pretty hot!

Loving it!

On to the next chapter!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Yeah...that was actually based on the suite my hubby and i stayed in on our wedding night.  It was hot, but we were so exhausted, we had a hard time fully enjoying it!  I wished we had more time in it, but it was only available for the one night.  The next night we spent in the Roman room...equally as cheesy of a theme, but it just wasn't quite as cool as the heart room.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There

Awe that was an amazing wedding and honestly almost exactly what I would picture for my own!  Beautiful chapter with a box of tissues!  Loved it!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

I really enjoyed your fic over that past few days!  So glad that I found it on a Friday so I was able to read it over the weekend! 

You really gave us all an amazing story with so many emotions, so much actions and some fabulous lemons! 

Loved it all!

Sarah

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55115
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, Bella is hell on wheels!  Pregnency hormones are definitly raging!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter!  Loved the little joke on Jasper!  So funny!

Sarah

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41876
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Faith

Poor Edward...always at war with himself! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 67388
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Love, Love, Love your story!  I've been reading it for the last few days!  I swear this group and never catch a break huh?  I can't wait for more!

Sarah

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ugh, great chapter!  All the emotions she should really feel, but I hate when Edward hurts!  Can't wait for more!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOVED IT!!!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Hmmmm....Bella?  Glad they talked Bella out of going in alone.  Great chapter!  Next should definitly be an interesting one! 

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

So does this chapter happen "during" the last chapter or was Jacob already in the meadow without the Cullen's for warning?  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Thanks for a great read!  Really enjoyed it!  Already have you all set up on author alert for the new story!  Really looking forward to it!  Can't wait!

Sarah

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

Loved it!  I'm so captivated by this!  Can't wait for more!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks so much - I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

Loved to!!  I just love their banter!  There is a fine line between love and hate!!!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Yes there is... and they're walking right on it, aren't they?

Glad you liked it - thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents

OMG, I just loved this chapter!  It was SO much fun.  I abosolutely loved the piano in the sunroom and Edward being no so perfect!  So freaking awesome!

Loved it!

Sarah



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it - thanks for R&R!:-)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration

Good to see that "old" Edward shining thru...moral thru and thru, yet still teretorial!  Great chapter!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks... he is still the same Edward... just younger... :-)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

Ohh!  I James the guy in the alley?  Who would have thought right?  I never expected him to show up!  Great chapter!  Loved the Mocha making!  I want one now...too bad it so hot here!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Oh have an iced mocha... yum! Or a frappuccino! Lol!

Glad you liked the chapter - thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

Ohh!!  I have a theroy!  Well...a couple of them actually, but I'm leaning toward her turning herself (technically leaving him) it to protect Edward...just like he did in New Moon.  So then this journey was to prove that she would do the same thing if she were in the same situation.

My other theory is that she will ask Carlisile to help them disapear?  I don't have much stock in that theory and the previous...but thats where my mind is!

Great chapter!

Sarah 



Author's Response:

Hmmm... interesting theories... we'll just have to wait and see... :-)

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Can you fall in love in 10 days? Can you push someone to the edge of insanity in 10 days? Edward is a bachelor risking fifty grand on the line and Bella is a writer for a prominent woman’s magazine. Loosely based on How To Lose A Guy In Ten Days. AU, AH, & OOC. Canon pairings.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer. I own nothing.

Banner by: moonlit-wishes

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86564 Read Count: 10558
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this idea!  I love both aspects of the story and can't wait for more!  Ok, on to the next chapter!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh this bet is gonna get him in so much trouble!  If said girl does happen to fall in love with him and he her then when she finds out about said bet it all goes to hell in a hand basket (or something like that), but I would imagine that Edward isn't planning ot fall in love, eh? 

On to the next chapter!

Sarah

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oops!  I totally review the wrong story!  Somehow I ended up in your other fic and was totally confused by the second chapter!  I'll have to read the first chapter of that one too!  I really like this idea and can't wait for more!

Sarah

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

I like it!  A new twist and a reversal in the roles!  Loving the idea!  On to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarahbella79, thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Choices

Its so different to hear Bella having the control issues as opposed to Edward.  And for him on to be a part of the Cullens...but I'm really liking the new twist on things!  Fanfiction get so repetative sometimes so its great to find something new!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes...she really lost control there for a few minutes...good thing the guys were FAST!

Glad you like my *twist*...

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Face to Face

I wonder about the recognition thing?  And I had to laugh at the part where his eyes widened at Rosalie...always the beauty queen! And why the blush when he shoke Jasper's hand? Hopefully EPOV will sort that out some of the questions floating around in my head!

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Ah, wonder where he knows her from?

Rosalie is pretty...he had to acknowledge that...LOL

All questions will be answered... ;D ... eventually!

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Phenomenon

Loving this!  I have no clue on E's secret!  And do they really "like" each other or are the just trying to "one up" each other?  I can't wait for the next chapter!  What is you posting schedule like?

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Sarah, for taking the time to read and review. Currently I am posting on Sundays, unless I can get it up sooner. I will tell you that Bella DEFINITELY  likes Edward. BUT...she also despises him, and because of that she is blind to her true feelings for him. Sounds familiar, right? lol. Thanks again for reading, see you this weekend ;)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1

Loved this chapter!  And Carlise's excitment over something new is always a pleasure :)  I'm thinking E is a half breed (like Nessie, which would still give him all of the Vamp beauty...so he could be an incubus), but I'm still a little confused by that guess because I'm not sure that that would still give him the indestructibility that he has.

My other guess is a lot out there but don't Lycans have those glowing eyes?  But I think lycans are supposed to be like mortal enemies of vamps right and then they would have recognized there scents right away...right?

As for Chief Masen?  Well I have no guess for him cause he has to be what Edward is right...or atleast the close to it? 

And Bella is obviously starting to recognize her true feelings...now is Edward stating his true feelings or is that all part of the incubus facade?

I can't wait for more!

Post soon!  I can't wait!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Sarah,

Thank you so much for your review. I love when my readers have questions, it shows me that you guys are really interested in what I am writing. It means alot. Part 2 of this chapter will be up by next Saturday if not sooner. But...I will tell you this...you answered your own question as to what Edward is in your review. Heeheehee...Thanks again =)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Revelations Part 2

Wow!  Ok so I had a feeling about the half-breed thing.  The scene in the woods was so freaking hot!  Now...will he change into a full breed since she bit him?  AND, I can't believe he tried to kill himself.  Poor Edward, he's miserable!  Hopefully Bella can make him happy now? 

So great!  Loved it!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. We will definitely see whether being "bitten" will pay off. And YES poor Edward. He cant catch a break...and I too hope that Bella can make him happy. Though the both of them together could be trouble...*wink,wink* Thanks again =)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter

Well crap!  No chaning for Edward huh?  But that could make for some epically hot lemons in the future...the whole drinking as foreplay is kinda hot! 

Esme is a hag!  I LOVE character changes like that!  And Rose as the kinda motherly figure...it fits her perfectly in a way!  So much fun! 

And JAMES?  Was he human in the past and Bella changed?  Did he maybe know about her and used her to change him...and then take off...say with Victoria?  Probably not huh?  But thats my theory!  For now atleast...until my mind conjours up something else! LOL!! 

LOVED IT!!  Can't wait for more!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Epically hot lemons is EXACTLY what I had in mind, lol. Glad you liked the switch-a-roo in Esme and Rosalie's characters. AND we will soon learn all we need to learn of James...though...you are verrrrrry close with one of your theories, lmao!!! Thanks again =)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Cullen's

Crap, can't they just have a moments peace?  What does James want...he left right?  I want more info on that whole situation.  There has to be more to "imminent disaster."  As for Esme...I can't even imagine what she could have done...did she bang him?  LMAO...thats a pairing, isn't it?  But then I can't imagine that Carlisle would keep her around after that.

And Edward is a soon to be causalty?  What the hell?  Is this gonna be like a reverse New Moon where Bella leaves with James to protect Edward...and where does Victoria fall into this picture? 

Great chapter!  Loved it!

Sarah



Author's Response:

LMFAO!!! We are going to learn exactly what happened to James in the next chapter. All's I can tell you is that its verrrrrrry close to canon. I'm not saying anything further, lol. And more answers to the whole Esme issue as well. I LOVE all your questions, but I dont want to answer them all and give too much away...you understand. THANK YOU for your fuckawesome review though, I really appreciate the time you take to read and review. and OH YEAH...where is my SIN!?!?!?!? HUH!?!?! I am patiently waiting, lol.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Recollection

LOVED IT!!  And I love that Rosalie called Edward and told him everything.  And that Edward came for her.  I really like Rosalie in this one!  The mama bear personallity fits her perfectly.  And Esme?  Holy Shit!  So ya, I hate James...cause ya know he is kind of a prick, but I might be kinda pissed too if I got an eternity that I didn't want...althought you would think that he would be atleast somewhat grateful...right?  And you can't just love somebody one minute and hate them the next.  Actually ya..you can, LOL!!  There is a very thin line between love and hate! 

Anyhoo, Loved it!  Can't wait for more...and I need to know more about Chief Masen too! 

Sarah



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks for your review!!! I know I said it would be this chapter that we would find out about the Chief of good 'ol Forks, but I totally veered!!! I promise...in the beginning of the next chapter that question will be answered! Glad yoou are liking Rose, too. I really hate always seeing her get the shit end of the deal. I had to give her what she deserved. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

Awe crap, I hope the others arive soon!  They are too evenly matched!  I don't have a great feeling about this...but if it follows Twilight's plot to a point, I think they will make it out ok, especially with Edward's gifts, and Jasper's if he can get there in time!  Also...I'm a bit worried about Esme and the Volturi!  Can't wait for more!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks Sara for the review. I too am more concerned about Esme...can we say forshadowing??? I also think Edward is going to surprise us with his vampiric skills ;)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

Thought I would come say hi over here too, since this is where I started reading this!  Thanks again for a great fic!  Loved it all!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

*sniffles* THANK YOU sooooooo much :)

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29485
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 First Impressions and Second Chances

Great chapter and too cute!  I can't wait for the next!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I should have the next chapter up tomorrow :)

Katie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Friends No More

Wow, Emmett kinda blew up, huh?  Great chapter!  Edward was really sweet in this one!  Great job!

Sarah



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All Falls Down

Poor Charlie!  Putting on an act for everyone, and Edward is such a sweetie!  Ya gotta love the guy!  And Emmett, jeez I just wanna punch him!  Such a jerk!  Loved the chapter!  Great job!

Sarah



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Seeing Red

UGH!!!  Emmett makes me so freaking mad!  Jasper killed me in this chapter!  He's so funny when he wants to be!  Loved it!  Great chapter!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Summer Blues

Jeez, Edward's parents are totally nutz!  Loved the chapter!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 When it Hits the Fan

Damn, they just can't catch a break can they?  Feel so bad for him with his parents and becuase of them its harder for him to be there for Bella...and Emmett ratted him out AGAIN!!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sarah



Author's Response:

I know, they are having a rough time! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Katie 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Confronting

Ah man...what happened to him?  Damn his parents are evil evil people!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Pain and Promises

Loved it!  So glad that he is finally out and back!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Angela by LizzieHopscotch Rated: T [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

"If Angela's a witch she can join the party too!"

So...what if Angela really was a witch?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3643 Read Count: 417
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 May 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start.  I'm intrested to see where this goes!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter, anxious for Ang and Bella to meet up!

Sarah

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So great!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG, Kate is such a bitch!  Can I say that in a review here?  I'm not sure, but I'm saying it anyway!  How can someone do that to the father of there child???  This must be what she wanted all along...his money, and now that she knew that she and Edward weren't an options, she did what she had to do to get a hit.  Ok, maybe I'm just ranting!  Anyway, great chapter!  Loved it and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Freaking Kate!  I get it now...the whole thing!  I've worried for years that my ex would do the same thing and run off with my kids and so this makes it all the more real.  I think I may visit my lawyer on Monday!!!

Anyway, great chapter, was crying right along with Edward in this one!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Kate just needs to make a little tiny mistake so someone can see her...or Riley needs to turn her in.  Its just horrible that things that she is saying to Emma to get her to forget her daddy!!!!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Loving it so far!  I've never been able to get much into NASCAR but my family are all mega fans.  I have to say that if Edward Cullen was really driving, I may just have to sit in front of the TV for hours and watch his little car go around in circles!!  :)  And Bella too...I mean "GIRL POWER" and all that jazz!  And the banner is so freaking awesome!

Ok, on to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL...thanks!  I'm pretty proud of that banner :)  I made it myself.  I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  I don't know a ton about NASCAR, so it's really more about the relationships and a little about the racing :D

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

Awe, loved this chapter!  Perfection!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

Awe!  What a great chapter!  Really love your Edward and Bella! 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

Love this story so much!  Great chapter and a good look into their future!  Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

LOL!!  It's Tanya right, and she was totally checking Bella out!  Too bad that isn't the way Bella's gonna see it, but hopefully she will give Edward the time to explain!  Loved it!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

Loved it!  The ILY was really great and totally unexpected, but it was perfect!

Sarah

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

Awe, I really loved this chapter.  I'm so glad that Bella's declarations about her own father and Carlisle really getting out there and seeing what his son could do was could but them in a better place!  LOVED IT!!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

Cullen Racing...I'm liking the sound of that!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

Great chapter.  Edward is such a sweetie!  Loved it!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks so much for reviewing! So glad you liked it!!

Katie 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

I'm guess that she was in an abusive realationship and she is on the run from him?  Edward is really great with her!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hang in there with me and all the secrets will come out ;)

Katie 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

I'm so glad that he is staying with her!  I was a little worried there for a bit!  Loved this chapter!  It's great to see them out of the elements for a bit!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

Wow!  I thought that it was something along those lines, but its much worse than I thought!  Great chapter!  Now we just need to get Edward's story!  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

Oooohhh!!  Is it Carlisle?  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

The mystery will be solved next chapter, promise! I hope you like it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

Ugh, I feel so bad for both of them!  They just can't seem to catch a break!  I hope Edward doesn't do anything stupid.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

Christ, he's been thur hell and back.  There are quite a pair aren't they!  Perfect for one and other really.  So glad he finally opened up to her!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

Damn, I feel so bad for them!  They just can't catch a damn break!  Charlie was being an overprotective dad...but you can't really do that when you don't know your child.  So much drama for them all...great chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella can't wait to marry Edward. As the wedding draws nearer, strange things begin to happen - and the nuptial nightmares have an unexpected source. Will Bella make it to the altar? Collab w/ConfettiRainfall, AH, O/S Entry for the Monster-In-Law contest on FFn.

1st Place DOUBLE WINNER - Public Vote and Judges' Choice.

Thank you to all who voted!

Banner by the lovely Bella's Executioner.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7476 Read Count: 456
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2010 Updated: 30 May 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great!  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Hi,

glad you liked it. It was fun to write. Thanks for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gbb

Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: After School Specials Don't Prepare You For This

Ok, so here are my theroies.  Either Edward has a twin or Edward has multiple personalities?  I dunno...on to the next chapter!  Loving it so far!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review!  I am so glad you love it so far! :)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Can You Say Awk-ward?

Awe Geekella and Nerdward are so freaking cute!  You just gotta love them!  Can't wait for your next chapter!  Loving it!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I happen to love geeks, lol, so I had to write some :)  I have put so much of my geekiness into these two that it's quite pathetic! LOL!!

Thanks for reviewing!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Holy crow...so didn't see that coming!  :)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Family that will always be there

Awe, poor Esme!  I'm so glad that Alice and Bella realized it was a mistake.  It was pretty obvious that she was replacing Alice with Edward because they were "similar."  Not sure about Tristan yet though! 

 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

Holy crow!  He's lost his memory?  Vampires can't do that right...so is he something else now?  Is he gonna fall for Tanya? Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm late replying to this. I'm so sorry. Really, I am.

No, I would suppose vamps can't lose their memory, they are like a walking Wikipedia, but, yes, there is extenuating circumstances here, that will be explained later on, promise.

And Tanya....yeah...u'll see, but - she makes my skin crawl- hint hint...shhhh...Merry Christmas, m'dear.

xx

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: New Year, new beginnings, new discoveries.

Amazing how they were contected in that moment in time when he was attacked.  Now they have to find him and bring him back?



Author's Response:

Dude, I am so happy you caught on to that. You'd be surprised how many missed that, and the amount of ppl who are asking me what happened to him, now... kuddos...I think I might love you :-P

 

Merry Christmas.

 

xx

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Losing a Piece of me

Wow...I was wondering why they didn't look for Edward right away.  It's crazy that they didn't believe her...especially with Alice not having visions.  So are the Denali's keeping it from Edward and the Cullens?  Or maybe they think it's best that he not remember?  

Anyway...Tristan...not sure how I feel about that, but I guess she would have to move on at some point if she thought that he was dead.  

Can't wait for more!

Trippin' by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Trippin'

 

Nicknames, food fights, clumsiness and a crush. Could falling really bring a couple together? We'll see....

 SM owns the characters...I'm just putting them through a few new paces...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3637 Read Count: 230
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2010 Updated: 10 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Really loving this!  Perfect that typlical clumsy Bella would be the start of something for them!  Can't wait to see where this is going!

On the embarrassing moment note...and this is REALLY embarassing, but its the story I always tell when I get that question.  I think I was in 7th or 8th grade I think, and our PE teacher was a real creapy guy.  We were supposed to shower after gym, which we rarely "acutually" did because it wasn't really necessary since we really didn't do much anyway.  We did have to make sure it seemed like we showered though, because after we were all finished the teacher would come in and make sure that showers had been used.  So, we would stay in our bras and underwear, run the showers and get the ends of our hair damp.  This particular day, I had to go to the restroom REALLY bad and the stalls were back by the showers.  I had gotten out of my gym clothes and was down to my bra and underwear.  Some of the girls had already started, so when I made a mad dash for the restrooms, I slipped in the water on the floors.  Of course this was hilarious and I started laughing...and I suppose as a result of the fall, the fact that I had to go so bad and the laughing of myself along with everyone else, I couldn't stop myself...and ended up "going" right where I fell.  One of my friends comes over and asks if I'm ok...and through my laughs that I couldn't seem to stop I managed up spit out "I'm peeing," which only made her laugh harder.  It was a VERY long time before I lived that one down. 

So yeah, it was super embarassing, but also really funny...and a little gross, when I think back on it!  Thats my story!  Can't wait for more of yours!

Sarah 



Author's Response:

Oh my!!! Yes...that certainly falls under "Embarrassing!!!"

At least you weren't hurt!!!

Thanks for reading...and your review, Sarah!

Kathie

Summary:

SEQUEL TO A Different Kind of Moon.  Fifteen years have passed since the fateful day that Angela Cullen (formerly Weber) was turned.  Follow her story as she recounts her adjustments to her new life as a vampire as well as becoming the newest member of the Cullen clan.  How does she really feel about her new life? Her family?  What does she want to do with the eternity that now lays before her?  Did Edward and Bella find their happily ever after?  Will Angela find love?  All this and more will be answered in Careful What You Wish For!

Many thanks to JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56150 Read Count: 4832
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Take A Look At Me Now

A little harsh is a bit of an understatment!  Cause this was all her fault right?  Stupid freaking mutt!  The was about the last thing she needed with all that she is dealing with right now!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Learning to Fly

Uh oh, did her father take his life?  I love hearing the back stories here.  And its nice hearing it from Angela's POV...different and new!  Loving it!



Author's Response:

As you can see, I am catching up on reviews...lol!!  Glad you are liking Angela's POV....the rest of the clan will continue to have their say as well....but she seems to want to be the key speaker right now!!

thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Livin' On the Edge

Great chapter!  Looking foward to seeing if they can all manage to get out of this alive!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: By Myself

Like it so far!  Great to hear from Angela!  You so very rarely do in fic!  Can't wait to see where this is headed.

Sarah



Author's Response: Hi Sarah, Thanks for the feedback and so glad you are enjoying it!! :o)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Broken Wing

Angela is feeling so much of what Edward seemed to pre-Bella and it's so understandable.  Would like to know how she reacted toward Edward after finding out that he was the one to change her.

The part at the end with her father was very sad.  Was there a Cullen stopping him with the "breeze" that he felt or was it just a reaction or a natural breeze that saved his life?

Really liking this!



Author's Response:

Hi Sara, I don't want to give a whole lot away but we will continue to see flashbacks from Angela throughout the story and it will cover alot of how she felt as she learns about life as a vampire as well as how everything happened.

As for your question about her Dad....I would be inclined to say that it was his own faith that made him stop.....

Glad you are enjoying it!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Home

Really liking the family dynamic with adding Ang to the Cullen mix.  That even though Edward is her sire, she still sees Carlisle as the father figure, as it should be!  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I know alot of people were worried how Ang would fit in...I am hoping to show alot more of how she got to where she is.....thanks for the great comments!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Remembering When...

Wow, poor Ang!  I'm just glad that he didn't take his own life.  That would be much more difficult for her to get past I think.  I think a part of me is wish he is somewhat coherent for her visit.  I can't imagine her father would ever think her a monster even with his beliefs.

Thanks for a great update!



Author's Response:

And now I am caught up! :) I just want to thank you again for taking the time to review each chapter as you read - it means so much!  I agree...it would have been tough for her to get past and I couldn't bring myself for that to happen, but I did want to show the stress he was under and how neither of her parents have really moved on.

More coming towards the end of the week...thanks again!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Fly Away

AMAZING chapter!  I'm so glad that he awoke for a short time before he passed and she was able to converse with him via Edward.  He was able to let go being able to say goodbye to his daugher.  Loved it!



Author's Response:

so glad you enjoyed it!! It was a tough one to write but I am glad that everyone has responded so positively!! More coming soon!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Peace

Hmm...who was at the funeral...Ben maybe?  I could just see Alice plotting to pull that off!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Tough Talk

Wow, can't beleive Jake told the secret, although I'm not sure he had much of a choice in the matter.  So...does he know about the Cullens?

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Even Now

Ah, so he is with Jacob...from the end of his POV and now Alice can't see him!  Are they just talking?  Let's hope so!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine...

Jasper is so wise.  You just gotta love the man!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Ain't Nobody's Business

Once again...Jasper the wise one.  But, I understand where Ang is coming from.  She needs to do this her own way, without the influence of others.  And...if anyone should understand the pain Ben could go thru, it's Bella and Edward should understand Ang's mixed emotions.  The situations are so similar!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Something Like That

Yay!  Now  they can be happy (i hope)!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Oh wow...she turned him?  What happened to Leah? Did Angela kill her?  I can't imagine that she would have let her just change or run off with Ben.  I can't wait for your next update!  Great chapter and Happy Birthday!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: It Should Happen This Way

I was wrong...I thought that Angela changed him.  Makes so much more sense now because I knew that Leah wouldn't just stand there and let Ang do that.  Thanks for the update...I'm not sure how Angela will react.  Really it's kind of a 50 50 shot that it could go either way for me.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Remember Me

Cool gift! Ben seemed to take to the change pretty well for the most part. Hope that they find Angela soon!  

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Darkness Falls

Ah wow, they are both is so much pain!  I can only hope that Ang will find her way back to them to find out that he isn't really gone.  I feel for Leah too, the  girl just can't catch a break can she?  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Vengeance

Love Esme's talk with Angela!  This is what they should have done with Edward & Bella instead of the entire family abondoning her!  Anyway, great chapter!  

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: A Whole New World

Another great chapter!  Thanks for the update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

AU set in the New Moon time frame.

Edward has his reasons for leaving after the birthday incident.

He expects the family to start packing, but Alice stands up to him and says: NO.

fs

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15555 Read Count: 3994
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this so far!  I always wondered why Alice didn't see how Bella would be during those months as soon as Edward made the decision to leave.  I can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Me too!  SM's Alice was the all-seeing version...surely she could have shown him the future...sigh...

Hope you like where I take this.

Kathie