Reviews by Sarabella79
Summary: Past Featured Story

Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

AU set in the New Moon time frame.

Edward has his reasons for leaving after the birthday incident.

He expects the family to start packing, but Alice stands up to him and says: NO.

fs

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15555 Read Count: 3994
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Alice is such a quick thinker!  Takes the truth and streachs it just enought to suit her needs.  Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

She was quite clever, wasn't she?  Ah, she and Emmett...quick on their feet!

Thanks for reading, SB79!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor girl, this part of New Moon always crushed me.  We've all had our heart broken at one time or another and it sucks to go thru that, but atleast she has a great big support system this time around!



Author's Response:

I know...I hated this part of the books...and then Jake, all lovey dovey...yes, she needed someone...but, ugh...LOL

She does have a support system here...it does help...but still her heart is broken...and there's no easy way around that...TIME helps...but that's it.

Thanks for reading, Sarabella79!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good for Bella!  Anger is an important emotion to feel if you use it the right way, and she really did!!  I'm so glad that they are helping her along, helping he see that there is more to life that just being his!



Author's Response:

It really is...anger CAN help...to get your behind in gear...

Although one reader felt the need to send me a message:  I can't condone needless violence...

I guess I don't write for EVERYONE...lol

I've been known to smash plates in my past.  They were MY plates, so maybe that makes a difference...but I felt SO good afterwards...also bashed one of my phone once...that felt so good...LOL

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love the little affirmation messages!  I'm glad that she is trying to turn things around.  She may still be broken, but she isn't letting it take her all the way under!  And with the "senseless violence," all I have to say, I sometimes you just feel the need to break something!  She didn't destroy everything, just enough to let the anger flow...and that can be a good thing, cause if you let anger bubble...someday you really blow your top!

Loved it!



Author's Response:

I think that's it exactly...don't let the anger build up to a Kileua extreme!  LOL

And I didn't let her smash the Volvo...or the Vanquish!!!

Thanks for reading, SaraBella79!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmmm...what does Victoria have up her sleave this time?  And if Edward is tracking her, is he in Forks too?  Or did he mess it up just like he did in New Moon and end up on the wrong side of the continent?

Loved the chapter, and Bella's thought process.  I love that she has a bit of some spark in her!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Ah, that Vickie...she really does make us want to hurt her, doesn't she?

Ah, Edward...he's a MESS!!!

Thanks for reading, Sarabella79...

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love that they are trying to annoy him into anwsering his phone!  Still wondering what Victoria has up her sleave!  Bella's ephiphany should help her as well I think, although she still deserves to be angry with him! 

Loving it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sarabella...annoyance through phone calls...I think Rose really could do that...LOL

Bella's ephiphany is going to help her...a LOT...

Makes me happy to hear that are loving it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow!  She finally strikes...on her own no less!  Awesome action packed chapter!  Lovin Jasper here too!  And that he can support her and hopefully forgive himself!  Loving foward to chapter 9!



Author's Response:

LOL...V thought she was TOUGH...LOL

Glad you enjoyed Jasper...he needs to be the good guy sometimes...

Thanks for reading, Sarabella!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

Awe, love an HEA!!  Glad that she made him spill his guts and not just run into his arms.  Ya gotta make the man work for it!!  Loved this so much!  Thanks for a great read!

Sarah



Author's Response:

HEA!  I'm ALL about that...LOL

Glad you enjoyed her calling him on the carpet...

I've enjoyed your support, Sarabella...thank you!

Kathie

Summary:

In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?

 Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 22429
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Really enjoying this!  Action packed & keeps me on the edge of my seat!  Thanks for a great read so far.  Looking foward to the next chapter!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you Sarahbella. We always love to hear from our readers. I am working on the next chapter right now and it should be posted by this weekend.

IP28 & Shawney

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23/ 21

Great chapter!  Looking forward to baby Charlie...well all of the babies in the near future.  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Sarahbella.

It was great hearing from you again. We are so glad that you liked this chapter. The next should be posted some time this weeksend or next week. As always thanks for reviewing.

IP28 and Shawney

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389625
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

AWESOME!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Phew!  Awesome chapter!  The emotions had me reeling.  Can't wait to find out where they go from here!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Ah shit!  I can't imagine he would have too much of a problem with this?  It may make things a bit interesting to begin with, but I would think that he would love that fact the he is the only one to have taken her.  The "deviant" would probably love that!  Can't wait for more!  :)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Great chapter!  I hope that end was just her suprise to hear him say it and she doesnt freak!  I love the pics in the chapter BTW!  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

Steamy chapter!  Loved it!  Thanks for the update!