Penname: nickeyd26 [Real name: Nicole
Member Since: 16 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

stories/7939/images/3023603255_16b3a638ed.jpgI am a wife and working mother of three.  And I am a rabid Twilight fan.  I also love good wine, good friends and skin art.  Oh, and I live and breathe the music around me.  Currently, I love 100 Monkeys, Kings of Leon, Killers, Pink, Death Cab For Cutie, Van Morrison, Bruno Mars and Adele.  But like the weather where I live, just wait five minutes and it could change.


I discovered fan fiction by accident while looking through Twilight websites and have been addicted ever since.  My husband never complains about my hours of computer time because he always reaps the benefits in the end. ;)


Not only do I love to read a good piece of Twilight fiction, but I am working on several stories of my own. 


I had a most incredible opportunity to meet the one and only Peter Facinelli on October 23, 2010.  He was absolutley amazing and gracious and sexy as hell!  I got pictures and a new tattoo out of the deal so all in all it was one of the best weekends of my life!!!  Check out the link if you are so inclined.


http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/awesome-fan-encounter-with-peter-facinelli/


 I had an even better experience meeting Jackson Rathbone at a 100 Monkeys concert on July 9, 2011.  What an absolutely amazing group of guys.  If you ever get the chance, I highly recomend you go and see them.  I am now a total Monkey Junkie and can not wait till they come my way again.  And yes, I also got Jackson to sign my leg and immediately had it made permanant the very next day.  Check out the link to read the whole story.


http://www.breakingdawnmovie.org/fan-encounter-with-jackson-rathbone-at-100-monkeys-concert-in-toronto/


Use Somebody A/N:


I have removed Use Somebody. I am attempting to have the story published which is exciting and scary as hell!!! Follow my updates on Facebook, 'Nickeyd26'.


 


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303550
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

The wedding was short and sweet..it was perfect.  The wedding night was exceptionally hot!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Holy Hell!!!!!  Don't even tell me Bella isn't going to et her memory back especially now that Alice is pregnant.  She didn't lose the baby in the accident did she???



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Carlie are twins with mysterious powers.What's the fallout after they are abducted by a psychotic vampire? OOC! mostly canon pairings some OC's

NOW COMPLETE!

BEING BETA'D AS OF 9/19/10

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240263 Read Count: 18343
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Love at First Sight?

WOW!  So Bella's powers can pretty much kick Edward's ass?  I like it!



Author's Response:

yeah, she can!!! lol

Going into Shock by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Threesomes E/B/J and A/Em/R. Lemons galore. No real plot. Threeshot... Did I mention the Lemony goodness? The Shocking series is finished! COMPLETE! Enjoy and please review if you have an opinion!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Femme Slash, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12874 Read Count: 10853
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Anyone in the mood for a little vamp porn???  This story is so it!  Moving on to the next chapter...now!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holy hell!  And I thought Em, Rose and Alice were a hot combo...these three just blew them out of the water!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my word!!!  Domme Bella is the shit!  That was unbelievably hot!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Excellent ending!  I could read about these three forever!!!  Very, very hot!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Wicked Angel

Well that just sucks!  Not the writing, but the fact that he couldn't save her.  I guess the bright side was that neither had to live without the other.

I did like the little twist of Jacob being in love with Edward.  Did not see that coming at all.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

Holy hell!  Excellent chapter.  So, how will Edward take out Mike and not piss off Jacob?  I think he should do his worst to Mike and pay Jacob the million out of his own money.  Jacob gets his money, Edward gets Bella and they all fuck happily ever after.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Dark Abyss

Fuck me!  Where the hell is Alice and why didn't she see Mike in the back of the car?!?

Excellent chapter!  I am glad that  Edward thought of paying off Jacob.  Now he just needs to do some very bad things to Mikey and have Bella ride him into the sunset. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

Holy shit!!!!!  I was blown away by the torture, but nothing prepared me for Bella finishing off Mike.  That was poetic and sadistically beautiful.  I fully believe in karma and Mike got exactly what he put out into the world..he just happened to get his all at once.

Beautifully sick and twisted chapter!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killer Sentiments

How is it possible to feel bad for a serial killer?  This whole situation just sucks monkey balls.  How is Edward supposed to be true to himself and keep Bella in his life?  There doesn't seem to be a balance that can be found.  And fuck Jacob Black that greedy bastard!  He already has one million of Edward's money.  WTF could he want now???

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Deadly Silent

Edward should kill Jacob and Paul for pulling that shit.  And I almost want to add Alice and Emmett to the list.  WTF is their problem not backing up Edward at the wake?  Some fucking friends.

I really hope Bella can forgive Edward.  They soooo need each other.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns

I am so glad they are back together, but I can not believe Edward threw up the cock block.  Ugh!  I see his point, but you know Bella wanted to be with him and have that comfort of reconnecting on that  level.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Faith

I have to admit I miss the bloody bastard.  Having him fake deaths is just not the same.  I want to see him happy with Bella but can he really give up the killing?  And I have a strange feeling that whole Alistar thing was a test Jake gave him and he knows Edward isn't killing anymore.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed

UGH!!!!!!!!   NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

I can not stand this!  Your story keeps making me think there is a chance for a happy ending and then this?!?  Please tell me that Bella reached Charlie and traced her cell phone and he is the one who killed Jake or Emmett or Alice?!?  Please don't let it be Bella???

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Holy shit!  I didn't see that one coming.  But what is up with Rose and Jasper at the end?  Are Bella and Edward really alive in some sort of witness protection?  Are you ever going to tell us or leave us hanging forever?

Excellent story!  It was sick and twisted and a hell of a lot of fun to read!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I wonder if Alice's plan will work.  As stubborn as Edward is, he seems to be reverting back to his vegetarian lifestyle even without making a conscience effort to do so.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Boy, if you look in the dictionary under dillusional you will see a picture of this Edward.  I really don't see how any thing will knock some sense into him and show him that he is breaking Bella.  I would almost like to see him come back to find Bella in the midst of trying to kill herself.  There must be somethin in that room that she can slash her wrists with or hang herself from (not that I reccomend such things, but she must realize that she has no hope of leaving there and who would want to live like that?).

Please don't go back into hibernation.  I have missed this story so much. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whoa.  I never saw that endig coming.  I really thought he would change her in the hopes that the venom would wipe out all her memories.

This has been a very angsty but great story. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm really happy that you enjoyed my story.  I toyed with many endings, including the one you described before I decided on the one I used.  I had it planned for awhile.  Thanks for reading & reviewing.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ugh, that was a hard chapter to stomach.  I have forgotten how incredibly sick and evil this Edward is.  But like a bloody car wreck, I can't help but look.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He could change her.  I would kind of like to see him deal with a newborn Bella with a taste for vengence.  Has Edward had a prostate exam recently???  Sorry, but the bastard deserves a taste of his own medicine.

Summary:

An average human commodity of a doctor's visit turns into a bit more for Edward. Edward and Carlisle, Slash, M for graphic lemon and language.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2530 Read Count: 1015
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa!  That was...something.  LOL.  I never pictured Carlisle as the dominant in a E&C pairing.  Very hot.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OMG!!!!  That was intense and heartbreaking.  I don't know how she can forgive him.  And how will the family co-exist while they are at such odds.

I can't blame Bella for feeling the way she does and in a way, I hope Edward suffers the feeling of rejection like he inflicted upon her 6 months earlier.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Poor Bella.  That really sucks that she killed that trapper not realizing it was a human.  So far immortality kinda sucks for her, doesn't it?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love Edward but he needs to stop carrying the weight of the world.  I am glad Carlisle is there to force some sense into him.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

We are always counting!!!

Loved this chapter.  I am so glad that Alice stepped in.  Someone needed to stop all this self-blame fuckery between E&B.  It was never going to get any better.  Hopefully now they can find a middle ground and start to heal.

As for the bait..I wonder, could Angela Webber be the bait Mike is thinking of???

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I knew he would go after Angela.  Poor thing, just cause she was nice to Bella, now she is the worm on the hook.  I think Emmett should be allowed to take Mike down.  He would have the most fun with it.  Edward will be too busy with Victoria.  OR, are you gonna let Bella batle Victoria???  That would be awesome!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ahhh, I loved it.  I am so glad they have reconnected. 

I love that Carlisle and Esme gave her the family crest necklace now and didn't wait till Edward and her found their way back to each other.  It told Bella that she is as much a part of the family as anyone else with or without Edward.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was a very tasty lemon.  I love fiestly Bella especially when she pinned Edward to the bed and later when she bit him.  Very hot!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh man, anything that has Alice that freaked out can not be good.  I am surprised that she hasn't seen anything about Angela being missing yet. 

Another excellent chapter!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Poor Angela.  I wonder if the Cullens will get to her in time or maybe be forced to change her to saver her.  Hmmm, that would be interesting.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Mmmmm, I love lemons!  I love how Bella tempted Edward with his own words.  Very hot.

I thought that was an excellent conversation they had before the lemon.  I think it is so important to Bella that Edward see her as an equal partner and I am glad that Edward is not trying to keep Bella from learning how to fight to protect herself.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I feel so bad for Angela.  The nicest girl in Forks doesn't deserve this.  I hope Bella kicks both Mike's and Victoria's ashes.  Then her and Alice can dance around the ashes.  I love that visual! LOL ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Poor Angela.  How are the Cullens ever going to get her out of this alive.  And yes, I would love to kick Mike's ass, but I would rather see Bella do it.  She has way more reason and there is the whole vampire strength thing going for her. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm betting it's sparkly Bella!  Please tell me we get to watch Mike get his ass kicked in the next chapter?  Please???  We've been so good reading and reviewing.  We have been so patient.  Please give us what we all want sooooo badly?!?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh crap!  Angela is going to kick Edward's ass when she stops burning!

I would bet anything that Bella told Mike to take her away so neither of them would feed on Angela.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh shit!  The wolves are here!  What is Jacob going to do about the new and improved Bella?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I am a little confused.  Is this chapter happeing at the same time as the last one?  And if that is the case, did Jacob find Bella in the meadow because of Carlisle's call or just by luck?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That did clear up the questions I had.  I am glad Jake and the Cullens got there in time.  And I am sooooo glad Bella was the one to rip Mike's head off.  She deserved that honor.

Now a wedding and a new Angela...hmmm, I wonder how that will all turn out.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow, I wouldn't have thought about Bella's reaction to Edward changing Angela to be like that, but it made a lot of sense.  He was so against changing Bella, but willingly changed Angela without a second thought.  If I were Bella, I would be really hurt by that.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I loved the ending and can not wait for the next story to begin.  My favorite part of this chapter was Edward's talk with Carlisle when he went to get the ring.  I am glad that Edward has made peace with Carlisle and realizes that he brought his pain on himslef.

 

I have started posting a story of my own called "Use Somebody".  It is AH, but if you would like to check it out, I would love to hear your thoughts.  Thanks :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home

Hmmmm, very interesting start.  Looks like Bella found a piece of eye candy at her dad's place.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

Oh my.  This Carlisle doesn't seem like the gentleman we are so used to.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

Oh shit!  Performance anxiety???  That was just mean.  But he deserved it after all the man handling at the restaurant and then getting her all hot and bothered in the kitchen.  A girl can only take so much.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bliss

OMG!!! Dirty talking Carlisle is damned hot!  I love that he found them at the club and took her out back for sex!  It is dirty and beyond hot!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Busted

Oh shit!  Charlie is going to shoot and mount Carlisle on the wall.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Damaged Man

Esme is no fool.  I love that she busted Bella for the contacts lie.

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revelations

OMC!!!  The shower sex has totally eclipsed the rest of the chapter!  That was too yummy for words.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Anticipation

I love the conversation about how Bella was going to wear her hair for the wedding.  Too funny.

Alright, I need to have some time with this Carlisle.  That whole scene in the new house was fucking amazing.  You write him entirely too tempting for words.

Ahh, the prodical son has shown up.  This could get very interesting.  Is Carlsle willing to share?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies

Whoa, Edward really is an ass!  I don't see Bella warming up to him anytime soon.

Poor damaged Carlisle.  How sad that he has taken the blame for years for something that he didn't do.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen

Yep, Edward is definately an ass.  I am glad Bella had the clarity of mind to push him away when he tried to kiss her.

Seriously love this B&C coupling.  They could set ice on fire with the things they do!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Wedding

Seriously, these two are perfect together.  I really hope that Edward does not succeed in his seduction attempts. Grrrr, I really don't like Assward!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

Holy shit!!!  Please tell me she didn't have sex with him.  What was she thinking?  Drinking games with Assward are never a good idea.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

Phew, I am so glad she didn't sleep with Assward.

McNaughty???  Nice! ;)

I loved the scene with the woman at the desk.  I love snarky Bella.

And yes, dresser sex was unbelievably hot!  I need Dr Cullen to make a house call!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Fuck me!!!  How the hell did Assward know about B&C??? 

This chapter was so hard to read as Carlisle broke things off with her.  I actually had tears in my eyes, very sad.

I can't beleive she threw herself at Edward like that.  The girl needs help.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

Hello rollar coaster of emotions!  So Edward was just trying to nail her to take revenge on daddy?  That is sick and twisted and not in a good way.

Ahhh, they finally admitted that they loved each other, but now what?  He can't even look at her.  My heart breaks for them.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

OMG!  So Charlie knew at the wedding?!?  That explains his behavior when he insisted they have pictures together.

I love moments when Charlie shows his dad side.  He was so sweet to Bella.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Ok, Kate gets the award for Uberbitch of the century!  How could someone treat their own child with such ice cold hostility and indifference.  No wonder Carlisle chose to lie.  I love that Esme is the voice of reason in all this fuckery.  And I am glad that she doesn't let Carlisle dismiss her when he doesn't want to hear what she has to say.

I am glad Edward and Carlisle finally had it out.  Maybe now they can start building their relationship back up.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

I nearly had a shit fit when I read James was back in the picture.  I am so glad that he was only looking to be her friend.  Bella has been through enough.

I liked that Edward and Bella made peace.  I really hated Assward.

Yea!!!!  Carlisle took his head out of his ass and came to get Bella!  Woo hoo!!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Perfect ending!!!  I love HEAs and I think the one you wrote for this is excellent.  I loved the flashbacks of the wedding and the pregnancy.  And Edward is happy with Angela and Jasper and Alice are married...love it all.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me

OMG!  That was an excellent chapter.  I loved the scene with Emmett in the hospital and the last part where Bella was freaking out had me in tears.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

Excellent ending!!!  I loved that they adopted not one but two little boys.  Perfect!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Does Paul have time for me too?  I swear the emotional roller coaster this story puts me through is going to cause me to go into some sort of fan fiction therapy.  LMAO.

Well, can I tell you that Garrett is my new favorite guy (Besides Carlisle of course...but you and I know that is for totally seperate reasons)?  He did exactly what I hoped he would do (except caning Edward's ass).  He really helped Edward to unstick his head from his ass.  I wasn't sure that was even possible in the same chapter as his temper tantrum in the beginning.

I was quite surprised that Bella had the balls to not only confront Jasper but Esme as well.  Good girl!  I was very proud of her for doing that.  Though there was a teeny tiny part of me that wanted Bella to slip into her dark numb place just so Edward could realize the damage his little stunt inflicted.  Oh well, I like your way better.

Edward's apology and explaination was so touching.  I love that he realized he played a role in all this fuckery too.  And then to hear how Bella talked about Renee...let's just say that  I cried a lot throughout this chapter.

I loved how you wrote this chapter with so much realism.  They are not just an actor and curator.  They are not just a Dom and sub.  They are two real (well real in our worlds) people who have real problems communicating just like every other couple on this planet.  When they were cursing and slamming doors it makes this story take on a whole new level of realism.  You do a amazing job creating that.

And now, the fighting is over...bring on the make-up sex and the party!!!! :)

All my best,

Nickey



Author's Response:

Hey sweetheart - thank you so much for your comments and your review. I'm telling you sometimes I feel as if they are trying to kill me with all their emotional stuff!  Do you know how good it feels to slam a door when you are feeling pissed off?

That's what I thought!

Lots of sexing to come,

love,

Michele

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

AHHHHH!  I know this story is coming to an end soon and it is killing me.  I loved this chapter because it felt so real to life.  Bella breaking her kitty had me dying!!!  And I have to say if I had to choose a punishment...THAT would be one hell of a good one to me. ;)

The re-committment was beautiful.  And I think it is good that Carlisle was open with Edward about him and Esme.  Yeah, she sort of let the cat out of the bag with that little addition to her vows.  LOL.  And I REALLY hope we get a little sneaky peaky into the new playroom...

The babies are coming!!!  I am so excited to see what names you choose for them.  

Great job hon!!!

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Writer's block is a bitch, but you came through it like a rockstar!!!  I can feel the end is near.  All the issues and unanswered questions are being tied up in neat little bows. {sniffle, sniffle}  Is there a 12-step program that helps you deal with the loss of your favorite fanfiction???  I think I need a Paul!

Alice's reaction to Bella and Edward's arrangement doesn't surprise me.  As much as she loves Bella, she loves herself more and it would be impossible for her to see that Bella was literally running herself into the ground.  I am so glad that Bella called her out on it.  And I am glad that they made up.  Life would suck for both couples if they couldn't make amends.

I loved when Edward explained why he didn't want to continue with the TPE after the 12 weeks.  He may not be perfect, but he is pretty damned close.

And the lovin' in the music room was hot, hot, hot, hot, hot!!!  I really hope we are treated to some very juicy lemons before you close this out.  Go out with a bang!

As always...you totally blow me away!

Love ya!

XOXO

Nickey



Author's Response:

And you my love, are as always too generous with your wonderful words of encouragment! I mean last week was a nightmare and Fiorella was amazing! I emailed her on Monday morning and raised the 'red' flag - she came back at me a couple of hours later with a swift kick in the but for taking so long to ask for help (I am so like Bella in that way!) and with a couple of suggestions and then it just flowed.

I love this story so much that I think just the thought of ending it, gave me stage fright or something.  I still can't seem to find the right place to say 'good-bye'.  I want the kids to grow up (with all of their antics) and to go off to college and to get married and I want to see Edward and Bella growing closer and more mature.... fuck! this is driving me crazy -  so I won't bore you any longer.  I may just do some chapters in 5 year snap shots almost - does that make sense?

Love you,

Michele

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL, very cool beginnning.  I am loving this Bella.  She is snarky and isn't given Edward an inch.  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting developement seeing Edward get jealous at the store. Hmmm.

What the hell?!?  Jake raped her?  That bastard!!!  I hope something heavy fell on him, like a tank maybe.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward is kinda moody bitch, isn't he?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I need a cold shower after reading that one, damn!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love the visual of Edward in the meadow.  I could totally see it.

I am surprised that Bella told Edward everything, but I am glad she did.  I was wondering how he would find out.  I almost expected him to find her treasure box in the closet.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whoa.  That was intense.  I love how Bella naturally slipped into the submissive role once she realized that Edward was a Dom.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Excellent chapter!  It thought the first session was hot and I feel bad for Bella because she didn't get her release.  But I think Edward was being a good Dom by not taking things too far until they talked and boundaries were drawn.  I can not wait to see where you take these two.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I need a cold shower after that one!  That was incredible!!!!  And I think it is so sweet that Edward cooked for her. ;)



Author's Response:

Aaah Nickey - you always make me feel so good xoxo

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Whoa, that was fantastic!  I love that they made it through a session without Bella making a mistake and needing a punishment.  You could practically see her doing a mental happy dance.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Someone needs to slip a tranquilizer in Alice's food.  That girl is crazy! ;)

Possesive Edward may need one too.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh hell, I wouldn't want to be Bella or Alice tonight.  But it sounded like they were having fun while it lasted. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter.  Love the matching cuffs.  Perfect. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love the family, but damn...your Rose is quite the bitch ain't she?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, that was a whole lot of story!  So, Rose is not so bitchy, just a little broken.  Bella is a mess, that girl needs therapy, self help and some mood mellowing drugs STAT!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was incredibly hot!  I think I want Edward to punish me too. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I am surprised Edward hasn't blown an aynursm yet with Bella's mood swings and temper tantrums.  But I love that she is finally starting to open up to him.  I am sure she is going to feel like he is giving her everything and she has nothing to give him, but she needs to realize that be submitting to him she is giving him all he has ever wanted and never found with anyone else.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

The scene with Kate and Garrett was fuck hot!!!  I like how it gave Bella some perspective on a D/s relationship and helped her take her punishment much better than past times.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OME!!!  Seriously, they all need some fucking therapy and self help classes!  What is wrong with Edward?  You would think he was the one who grew up with the crapy life and no one gave a shit about him!  Jasper and Garrett should both smack him around.

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Holy shit!  I have never heard of a D/s intervention!!!  But seriously, I thought Garrett ran the whole thing very well and as much as Bella wants to fight the decision, I think it is smart for them to put the collar and chains away for a little while.  Besides, they are a fuck load of fun even without all the kinky fuckery! 

The scene at the end here was fucking hot and I need to stop reading so I can go take advantage of my husband! ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That scene in front of the windows was fucking incredible...loved it!

I am glad to see Bella is coping better with Edward leaving this time, but poor Alice. :(  At least they have each other.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Vicky and Jim are creaptastic! Yuck!!!  I think Emmett should pay them a little visit.  I really hope it doesns't take something horrible for Bella to move out of that building. 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh shit!  This is going to be very, very bad.  I don't get what Bella hopes to achieve by pissing Edward off like this.  They were doing so well and now what?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Finally, Bella has a fucking voice!  It took her long enough.  But now I have an issue with Edward.  I know it has been a long time coming, but as soon as Bella tells him how she feels he flips out and gets all angry with her.  How is she supposed to be open and honest if she gets that kind of reaction?!?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh. My. Word!  That chapter took my breath away!  The collaring ceremony was beautiful  I loved what E&B said to each other.  It was perfect.  And then the scene in the playroom was mind blowing!  I can't find the words.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ahhhhhg!  What the hell is wrong with him?!?!?  Every time she tries to be honest he screams at her in anger!  He is a very shitty Dom!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Holy hell!  I'd give anything for a few hours with Edward and his flogger!!!

Excellent chapter!  Loved the play time and the down time. ;)  I am so glad to see these two finally talking and not yelling at each other.



Author's Response:

hey there,

thank you for reading and reviewing each chapter this week. Your comments have kept me entertained!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

How can anyone not love Domward?  He can punish me anyday. ;)

I wonder what it is going to take for Bella to realize how dangerous James is?  I have a sinking feeling that he is going to find out about B&E and want her that much more because she belongs to Edward.  I just hope she gets the hell out of that apartment before it is too late.

So, the news is out there, huh?  I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to the new attention. 



Author's Response:

I know right? thanks for the review!

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Poor Bella, nothing like being thrown under the paparazzi bus!  I can't help but worry about her past coming to bite her and Edward in the ass.

I loved it when Edward punched Nick.  That was awsome and most definately classic, protective Edward.  I am surprised he didn't growl at him.

By the way, love Anderson.  He is a cute addition to the security detail. ;)



Author's Response:

thank you for the review and poor Anderson - I think he'll have a tough time being around the girls....

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I need to take a cold shower after reading this.  These two are two steamy for words.

I am so glad Bella has agreed to move in with Edward.  It really is the smart decision to make.

I loved how Bella interacted with the fans.  She is the perfect famous person's girlfriend. ;)



Author's Response:

thanks and at least you are saving electricity right?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ugh, this was so hard to read.  Bella's pain literally brought me to tears.  I am glad Riley offered her a job closer to Edward's especially since she is moving there.

I think it is ironic how Edward, even when he is being a dickhead to her, brings Bella back into balance.

I don't like that Jacob is here and it freaks me out to think what him and Jim could do to her when Anderson isn't nearby.  I do not like where this might be going.



Author's Response:

have a little faith, please. Apparently I know what I'm doing...(who the hell started that rumour?)

:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

{Sighs in relief}  I am so glad that Bella is getting better.  Can I tell you that I LOVE this Domward.  You write him so perfectly that I just want to wrap my arms around him and then let him tie me down and spank me.

I like how he took control of everything for Bella.  She may have thought it was extreme, but she finally realized the reasons behind it.

Excellent chapter!!!

Oh, I have started my own story if you want to give it a read.  It is called "Use Somebody".  I would love to know what you think!



Author's Response:

thanks Nickeyd26 - and I am going to check it out right now!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Damn, I can only imagine how much fun you are going to have writing this next chapter.  Can't wait to see it! ;)

I hate the Jacob flashbacks.  She was so hurt and damaged by that time and I really wish it did not creep its way into her time with Edward, especially when it is D/s time.  I loved how Alice set her straight about needing to allow Edward his feelings and not be such an atagonistic bitch about it.

As always, another excellent chapter.  And congrats on the near 1000 reviews.  You much be down right giddy!  I know I would be. :)



Author's Response: thank you so very, very much!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Crap.  I feel like I need a bottle of wine now since you threw me through an entire emo rollercoaster with this chapter. 

I was all freaked out by the scene with Jacob and Jim in the beginning.  Those two are too many shades of fucked up to be in the same state together, much less be working together.  And now they think Rose and Emmett's place is where Bella is living with Edward...not good.

Then I loved the whole trip to see the family and how they were all getting along.  And of course, who doesn't love a sexy Domward giving Bella screamless sex?  That shit is just awesome!!!

Then the drama with the Denali's.  Let me guess, Jim from accross the hall who has no history to dig up is actually James Denali.  Right?

And then poor Bella is trying to be nice and help with dinner and breakfast for the family and Esme gets all emo which causes sutter-Bella to show back up and run from the house.  I really hope that Esme is just overwelmed and not upset.

Excellent chapter, but I am fucking exhausted from reading it.  I can't imagine what you feel like from writing it. ;)



Author's Response:

Now I need a bottle of wine!  Did ALL that happen in the last chapter? Good god - now wonder I slept for 2 days!!!! (joking)

 

Thanks for the awesome review.

love,

Michele

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Your writing amazes me!!!  In the course of one chapter you can have me crying, laughing and searching out my husband to do naughty things to.  You blow me away!  This chapter is no exception.

I am so glad that Esme was not upset with Bella over making breakfast and starting the dinner.  I love how Carlisle was the one to find her and bring her back.

Jasper's proposal was very sweet and I love the hot air balloon idea.  Perfect!!!

The sex was amazing!  Edward and Bella are the epitomy of soul mates.  They are the exact right person to match with the other.  I love, love, LOVE the way you write them.

I am going to try and pull a little psychic pixie here and see if I can guess what is going to happen.  It is going to be the weekend when all the girls are staying with Rose and the guys are away when Jacob and Jim are going to plan their break-in.  Am I right???



Author's Response:

Keep it down will ya?  You are much too clever for your own good - just like a great ff writer should be :)