Reviews by mentalmute
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Creepy!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Creepy old fucker!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Cast aside her hand? Surely you don't mean to remove her hand? She would be practically useless in working for the family then, right? shudder**

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Yay!!! Felix just has to break and call him!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Yay!! I hope they get out alright- though I wouldn't mind at all if Aro himself caught them and Charlie got to kill him!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514676
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Wow, this is so intense!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Hmmm, does that mean that someone on his end was intercepting Carlisle's phone calls???

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Well, since you gave us a really good chapter and a lot of info, I guess we'll forgive you!! Please don't make us wait long for more though-- even if there are no 69's in the near future, the story is really getting good!!! Love ya!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

OMG!! How can you do that to us??

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

One down, two to go!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Just kill the bastard and get it over with!! Of course, though, sending him to Aro would be the best form of justice- he'll definitely spend the rest of his life wishing he was dead! Maybe that is better- he doesn't deserve the easy way out!   Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Yay!!!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624983
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

NOOOO!!!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Phew!! I was scared there for a few minutes!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

So where'd the chapter go?? Got the A/N and the Chapter End Notes, but no chapter!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

This has been a fabulously well thought out story, and I would love to see you publish it!! I think a series would be wonderful! Can't wait!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153107
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

Wow, I was cringing the entire time!!



Author's Response:

I don't know how to take that....  But thanks for reviewing..

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

I'd love to help you! I have excellent spelling and grammar skills, not to mention all the time in the world!!  I love this story and would love to help develop it!!



Author's Response:

Wow! I honestly wasn't expecting people to offer. I would love to talk to you more later about this. My life is a little crazy right now, but I will defently talk to you about this later.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Most definitely still interested!!! Please continue!!



Author's Response:

I will, I promise

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

Yay!! I was sooo excited to see the update!! Not too long now I guess before the idea of Bella joining the family starts to surface!!



Author's Response:

Maybe.... But maybe not... Edward wont let me say anything, he wants everyone to stay on there toes.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

lol I'll stay on any body part he requests!! lol



Author's Response:

I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

I'd like to hear the rest of Rose's story, and yes, we'd like to see the session, but then I definitely need to hear Edwards pov on the whole thing, and what he was thinking the whole time he was holding Bella, and just what he is thinking about the future.



Author's Response:

If Edward can't speak this next chapter I pomise it will be the one after that.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Definitely keep the chapters at the present length, otherwise you would have to rush some things just to get them in. Perfection is worth waiting for!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wanted to keep the length but I was afraid people would lose interest. I am glad that everyone seems to be with me on this.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Still loving it!! You are keeping true to the story and not rushing things- that's the marker of a great story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks thereis so much going on that I want to make sure that I get everything right.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

Wow, that was an awesome chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yeah for me..... LOL   Thank You.

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64121
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awwww!!!  Just Awww!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank God she gets better!! I hate to get depressed while reading!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

God I hope he just gets on a plane and heads home now!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awwww, he's an idiot, but he's our idiot!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awwww!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Happy Birthday Indeed!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww!! Yay!! Let's meet Claire!!

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77002
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Stave

Uh oh, Jess and Riley???

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Alla Breve

lol so he's trying to speed things up so they can be more than friends, and she's gonna drag her feet so they can still be friends-- sounds like lots of frustration in the future!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Semibreve

This story is probably my favorite of all the stories I'm keeping up with! (And there are many.) I hope he ends up at the cabin with her!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm having a blast writing it! mmm, the Cabin, you'll just have to wait and see...

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Sharp

Aww, I wish the two of them would stop thinking so much about how much time they'd like to spend with the other, and start saying it out loud!! Can't wait for her to take him to Laurent's!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Barline

Oh Bella, Bella, Bella- silly girl!! You don't run away when the man you love kisses you!! lol

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Quaver

Drunk Edward was adorable- just wish he'd been a bit more talkative!! He needed to tell her he was falling for her!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bracket

Phew!! I thought she was gonna get totally pissed about the whole 'interview' thing and pull a disappearing act!! Now he just needs to call her tomorrow and set it all up-- it sure wouldn't hurt if there were some mis-hap on the set and he got to come back to the hotel in the early afternoon!! All he's planning won't actually get to happen if he doesn't get back to the hotel till 10!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Hyphen

Say Anything!!!  Edward needs to drag his happy ass to Forks now!!!!



Author's Response:

Yay, say anything... I'll PM you with a teaser snippet...

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Tilde

Soooo glad you're back!! Can't stand leaving these two in limbo for so long!! Of course I'm looking forward to the time the special 'teaser' I got for identifying Say Anything makes me salivate for what's to come!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Asterisk

OMG!!! I don't know if I can stand it!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Transposition

Please tell me he's not gonna wait till she sees the pictures for herself before he prepares her!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Verismo

Geesh all we need now is for Rosalie to "happen" to be at the same restaurant or even at the bar. I hope Bella actually mailed the letters so she can't change her mind and open them after all!!



Author's Response:

Um, no, she most definietley mailed the letters! Sending back the letters will be a huge positive step. Now Bella needs to communicate with Edward and more importantly, he needs to listen to her.

Thank you so much for always taking the time to leave me a review. It means a lot :)

Luv BBxx

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Tablature

If our Bella is as screwed up as she always is, we'll probably celebrate by her seeing or hearing something, taking it out of character, running away, and deciding that she can't have what she truly wants. Hopefully this time Edward can and will chase after her and change her views!! lol

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29. Kidnapped

wow!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Wow! Not what I was expecting!! I didn't get an update email for this or last chapter. Don't know what's goin on.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! And so glad you checked for an update.

From what I understand there are some server issues. I don't think many are getting chapter update alerts by e-mail.  I have gotten very little. At least when I updated my last two chapters no one got e-mail alerts.

Not sure if I want to update while all this stuff is going on. But I am pretty close to the end of my next chapter, so please just check in to see if I updated in case I do.

Thanks again!  :)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

All I can say is HE STARTED IT!!  lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

botm

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awwww!!! I just found this story yesterday, and I couldn't quit reading until I got here!! Can't wait for more!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

We'll still be here whenever you can update!! Love this story!!



Author's Response:

thank you very much, I'm glad your not angry with me :) xx

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

Anyone angry at someone trying to better themselves doesn't deserve to know them!!



Author's Response:

thank you very much, it means alot that you got my back hehe :) and your very right, however some readers are just like that lol but i think i have pretty good readers :) xx

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

OMG!! Even the MONSTER is SCHMEXY!!!  lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366426
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Why Can't You Stay

Okay, now we're all depressed! Happy fucking weekend!! lol

 



Author's Response:

LOL!! Very Bella-esque of you. But it is a happy weekend because you get another chapter tomorrow to find out exactly what the hell Edward was thinking!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

I think I love you!!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings

Wow that was heavy!! I'm so glad she told him though, and I hope after his 'discussion' with Emmet he gets back into the room before she wakes up. If she is truly pregnant- which she has to be, right? all this stress can't be good for the baby(ies) at any measure- waking up and finding him gone might push her over the edge.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Flash Fill

Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Additive Color

Such a sweet day!! Can't wait for the date!! I hope he doesn't take her somewhere too snooty-- he should realize that she won't be impressed- just uncomfortable. Plus, I don't think we want to run into any of his previous conquests on this date-- I mean, you've heard the phrase "Three strikes, and you're out!! Right??



Author's Response:

i guess you'll see :)  I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Fixation

OMG!! I love this story!! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it and I hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

Wonderful Story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story so far!! Daddyward and ink-- how can you go wrong??



Author's Response:

That's what I thought! :P

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww!!  Just Awww!!!



Author's Response:

Can I add one more 'awww'? :P

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Don't be a wuss Edward!!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What can I say but Awesome!!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

Sorry to hear of your troubles. Just know in your heart that God has his reasons for closing doors on chapters of your life- that being so new doors can open! We all have to date a few Jacobs' before we find our true Edward!! Be strong and have faith (Ben and Jerry's have a great support team also!!) We'll still be here when you're ready to continue!!  Just one small snip of advice-- don't spend your time worrying about the past- you've invested enough there-- put all your energy into your future-- the kind of people you meet when you're out to better your life are exponentially better than the kind you meet while moping and drowning your sorrows!!  Just know we all love ya and will be here for you!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

You did great-- some lemons are just better hinted at!! Glad to hear you're doing better. Give it time, and you'll see that everything happens for a reason!!

As for a beta for your new story, I'd be willing to give it a go. I'm currently working two stories now for Avery Shane, but I have plenty of time. I pretty much return the chapters the same day, given I get them early enough. Let me know if you need me!!

Summary:

Because we all want to know what Murphy was thinking the whole time during the events in Destiny and Driftwood.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1672 Read Count: 149
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL I loved the original story, but this one was priceless!!!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

lol what's he up to now?? Is she gonna win a house make-over or something>??

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

These two are definitely a piece of work!! As for the outtake, you just gotta do Dr Daddy and Nurse Mommy!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I think an outtake of Jasper and Alice would be perfect right about now- I mean to give a perspective of how an experienced D/s couple can handle problems- seeing as Edward and Bella are about to have a very big problem with Jim!! I loved how you handled Friday night, and can't wait for Saturday and Sunday, Saturday more, because he'll leave on Sunday! I really hope she just decides to stay at his house and avoid Jim and Victoria, but this is Bella, and she just never does what we hope!! lol



Author's Response:

I think so too! thanks for the review and feedback!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ow!! You can't leave it hanging like that and make us read Alice and Jasper before we get to the bottom of this!! So Mean!!!



Author's Response:

Dear MM,

sorry, but I will see what I can do - J & A should be up tomorrow and then B & E on Saturday (you greedy little thing, you!)

thanks for the review.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOL I was wondering when those pics would surface!!



Author's Response:

Oh heavens - the drama just goes on and one!! thanks for the review.

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

That was just mean!! But we still love ya!!



Author's Response:

Hey MM - thanks and I really do love you :)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Hmmm, I'd say that Jake and James are gonna pop up at a most inopportune time!!



Author's Response:

thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Phew!!! I was holding my breath the whole chapter waiting for the proverbial ''other shoe'' to drop!! Now I can at least breathe for a week, right??!!  And Rosalie is pregnant??!!! Yay!! That will be awesome!



Author's Response:

hey mm - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Phew!! I"m glad that's over!! I was so afraid you were going to leave it off somewhere in the middle and make us wait!!  Sad that Bella only got to hit Jacob in the head with a bottle and stomp on his chest- he deserved so much more!! I'm surprised that Emmet and Edward didn't go after him at all!! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

thanks mm!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I loved Christmas!! Can't wait for them to get home and for Bella to give him the photographs!!  (I also loved the Buzz Lightyear reference-- To Infinity and Beyond!)



Author's Response:

thank you so much 

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40825
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Hmm, all I need is 10 minutes alone in a room with Tanya and a cat-o-nine, and we'll see who walks out smiling!!



Author's Response:

:-) Maybe I should start a contest where my dear readers can write their version of the punishment of Tanya...

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

Definitely EPOV!!! I'd love to hear what he's thinking!!  lol



Author's Response:

:) You shall get it!  Thank you!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field

Just Awwwww!!!



Author's Response:

Haha thank you :)  I was kinda swoony after that TD dedication myself!

Chances by AmoreBella88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Bella Swan lives a dull life, but when a trip to the emergency room brings her to the Cullens, everything changes. Things are not all roses and sunshine though, there are attacks on women at the local campus of UW and it's got everyone worried. Everyone needs chances, but what happens when someone chooses the wrong one...?

 

(AU-AH, OOC for Bella's vocabulary)

 

Rated NC-17 for language, mature sexual content, and violence.

 

On temporary hiatus, 12/19/11Chances Banner by Sarah Elizabeth


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100701 Read Count: 5338
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Oh, No He Di'int!

Okay, dog breath better back off!!  He just put a serious buzz-kill into play!!



Author's Response: Ohh, just wait for the next chapter. Don't kill me yet! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Let Go, I've Had Enough

Geeeeesh!!! Open the door Bella!!



Author's Response: Lol, just wait for the next chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sexual Attraction

Wow! You are so mean!!



Author's Response: LOL! Yes, yes I am *snort*. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awesome!! Posting today would be good!! I bet it only takes a couple of hours instead of 3 days since she's already mostly changed!!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG!! I was really hoping that when Bella got off the plane she would see Kate trying to drag Em on a plane!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yay!! Emma's home!! I hope it isn't Riley trying to collect the reward money!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64022
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13

OMG!!! I'm sooo glad she didn't cave!! Now she can go to the ball and chew Edward out, and mid-rant he can grab her and kiss her-- that should piss her off!! lol

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

OMG!! How much more can they take???

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Uh-oh!! Bella has spotted a challenge!!  lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, looks like Bella's gonna have her hands full with this one...literally... ha ha ha.. I'm so punny. *chuckles* Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

LOL  Tame the lion Bella!! Get in touch with your inner circus freak lion tamer and make him purr!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions

lol this should be awesome!! lol

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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stories/186/images/DIAMONDINTHEROUGHBestLemon-300x237.png    stories/186/images/DIAMONDINTHEROUGHBestJacob-300x237.png   


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loving this story!! Very realistic- not rushed-perfect!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you like it...lml

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm, seems  Edward isn't the only tease around here!!! Are you seriously gonna leave us hanging right here???  lol   As usual, we'll be waiting for any tidbits you feel generous enough to dole out- kinda like Bella's 'treats'-- hopefully our reviews will earn us some!! I love lemon flavored treats-- just sayin'.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh yeah, he'd know!! I'll bet she decides to do it, and right when she gets it out of the freezer he'll call or text her reminding her she can't touch herself!!  I'm seriously hoping that wasn't James in that car, but somehow I figure my hopes are in vain!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment…here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

            “Hello.”

 

             “Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.

 

            “Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.  

 

            “Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”

 

            “Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.

 

            “Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”

 

            “Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Just one glass of wine, huh? Score one for Bella!! lol



Author's Response:

lol ... she used her womanly wilds, got what she wanted. Her ass paid for it, but I'm sure she thinks it was worth it...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

Here's a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think it was perfect!! It was just what she needed coming from the place that she is in her life, and it was exactly what she should expect from him throughout their relationship!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I really liked writing this chapter...lml

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmmm, I still think he should have a little more respect for his brother than to come into his home ogling his girl- especially his sub whose trust he is still earning-- I mean I know they are both fully familiar with this life, but she's not. He should at least have kept his mouth shut after seeing how uncomfortable she was. I hate it when Emmet is an idiotic jerk and the family members just ignore it!



Author's Response:

Did he come off as a jerk? I thought he was just playful.  Bella was uncomfortable with her state of undress, but Edward took care of that. She is his #1 concern. When Emmett started getting out of hand. Edward put an end to it. Don't worry, Bella can take care of herself. you'll see.. In the mean time thanks for reading and for leaving a comment...lml

Here's a teaser for you....

             Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

My question for the both of them is, "How can you just let the whole dog collar thing go and not worry about it? Don't you think you should like put up security cameras outside of the home to watch and see what goes on when you aren't looking?"



Author's Response:

I'll put your question on the list ,,,thanks for reading. I have a teaser for you..lml

“You know what I think?” He raised his eyebrows “No I don’t but I would love to know love to hear it”

 

“I think you are wrong …“ Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.” Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

 

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.” Edward nodded

 

“Your right I was, Aro doesn’t give them out.” I went on with my theory, while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom.

 

“Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week, you and I got together and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you”

 

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?” I nodded.

 

“And it’s working”

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Only one word will do.   AMAZING!!!



Author's Response:

I have two words for you ---Thank You !!!...lml

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Okay, you achieved your goal, we're all holding our breath waiting for the other shoe to drop. Seth's collar, and then the barking, and if the hotline person gave out her personal info this time, who knows what has been leaked up to this point.....



Author's Response:

hmmm...I don't know I told you my story is a slow boil and I think it;s just starting to bubble,,,Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Hmmm, I am thinking that Heather is James' new girl, and the cop is somehow related to her and helping her to try to clear her boyfriend's record or whatever. Tanya figures into all of this somewhere as well as Caius, but I don't exactly know how- these two situations might be totally unrelated, or they could be all a huge campaign to screw Edward and stop him from having control over the club. Maybe Caius and Tanya are working together, and once they found James in Bella's past, they pulled him into it as well.



Author's Response:

Those are all good theories...I guess we will have to see if you are correct ...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”