What a great story!  I loved how they helped each other so much.  Their relationship made both of them stronger.  Your Edward was sweet and giving, a real hero.

Great chapter.  It was incredible!  I'm glad Rosalie got her revenge on James.  As for Jacob, it kind of feels like he got off easily, but I'm sure he would be in prison for a very long time.  I like how Bella handled the situation and helped to keep the others alive until help came.  Thank you.

For the first time in this story I am not liking Edward very much.  I get that Bella really messed up but the spanking with the hairbrush seemed  abusive to me. I enjoyed the rest of the chapter, especially Bella's visit to Forks.  I liked Seth and Sue. Charlie has really redeemed himself in the eyes of his family. 

I am enjoying this story.  I liked the girl talk. Rosalie.  Who knew she could be caring?  I also liked that Bella hit Edward when he kissed her. Her anger is appropriate.  He needs to convince her of the truth first and not take things for granted.

This was an awesome chapter.  Love your Edward!  I really like Bella too, especially when shen takes on Emmett:}

Emmett cracks me up!  I also loved Edward's interactions with Charlie and how he won Charlie over.  Edward and Bella are so good together.  They complement each other perfectly, and the fact that they both have been broken makes their romance sweeter.

This was an awesome chapter, one of many in one of my favourite stories. The best parts for me were Edward kissing her bruises, as well as the applause from Bella's classmates and the epiphany that caused her to have.  Well done!

Thank you! I really needed a good laugh today.  I'm not sure I would want to be the target of Emmett's pranks, but they are a lot of fun to read about :)

Poor Edward! This was an excellent chapter. I liked how Charlie got Edward out of trouble with the other cop.  Thank you for writing these two stories. Well done!

I loved it! It was beautifully written, tender, passionate, and seriously hot!

Brilliant! As much as I want them to "just talk already!", both of them are so damaged that there is no easy solution.  Something tells me that their next meeting will either have to come from Bella(unlikely), or happen by chance. I can't wait to see what happens next.

You are doing a good job of building up the suspense.  Victoria discovering Bella's pregnancy can't be good.

Charlie was a jerk!  Even if he needed to leave he should have told Bella that he needed some time to cool down. I liked that Edward was firm with him.

Something tells me she wants a house to take Bella to.  Hopefully Jacob will phase for the first time around Victoria and not Bella.  Edward now has that to worry about.  On another note, I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to their gifts.  Good chapter. 

I liked Edward's reaction to the image of their baby in the ultra-sound, especially when he saw that the baby looked like him.  Sweet!

I can't believe Charlie!  Edward should tell Bella what Charlie is trying to do.  Good chapter.

I hope the party goes well, but I have a feeling that Charlie may cause an argument.  Edward seems to be feeling the tension.  I liked Renee and Phil's reaction to Bella's new life. 

I really liked Phil and Renee's characters in this chapter, especially Phil's conversation with Edward.  Nicely done!

I am really enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I loved their time in the grocery store, especially what he said about the box of cereal, and telling Angela about his fresh food diet.  TOO FUNNY!

Your descriptions of Yellowstone made me want to visit there myself.  I loved the restaurant scene when Bella ordered Elk for everyone.  Well done!

I like the way Edward now refuses to take Bella's choices from her.  That really showed in how he handled telling her about his fears for the pregnancy and her safety.

I really liked the headboard scene, as well as Bella's interaction with Esme.

Bella and Edward deserve some happiness after all that they have been through and some time to revel in that happiness.  I am really enjoying this story.  It is not at all boring.

My favourite parts of this chapter were when Bella helped the family to have their birthday party, and when they felt the Baby kick.  Thank you.