Reviews by Rockmamaoff
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

I'm trying to improve on my poor track record of not reviewing stories so here I am....reviewing.  You two have some seriously twisted minds and I can appreciate that.  I read the Training school so I was prepared.  I like the plot on this one and it feeds my fear of cults.  I read a short story on ff that was about cults where Carlisle was the leader and it broke my heart.  I love Carlisle and it always makes me sad when he's an asshole so having Aro be the leader is much better...thank you.  I look forward yet fear your next update as this story creeps me out.  Keep up the good work ladies.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

What a beautiful ending.  This story grabbed me from the beginning and touched every emotion possible in me.  I thank you for sharing it with us.  I absolutely loved it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

17 year old Bella is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be all she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And will she still want him when one night changes everything? A/U Cannon pairings


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74283 Read Count: 29128
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Fusion

Love your story.  Beautifully written.  Well done.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Nicely done ladies. Interesting story with some great plot twists. I always have a hard time reading stories where Edward has sex with other people but thank you for not writing a lot about that. Not a big fan of Jake's so offing him was cool. I love Alice as canon but I do get a kick out of evil Alice. I will hold onto the belief that Edward and Bella are still alive somewhere loving each other and the funerals were for show....is that considered denial? So be it. Again ladies, excellent story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I am really terrible about reviewing stories I read and I apologize for not reviewing each chapter but I do want you to know how much I enjoyed this story.  Thank you for sharing it with all of us.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am one of those awful people that read stories but seldom leave reviews..to that I do apologize.  I got a little behind on this story and just finished the last 4 chapters but I knew I had to give you some feedback.  I really love this story and look forward to your updates.  I've been crying like a baby over the last few chapters with Charlie and Christmas at the Cullen's.  Very heartwarming.  This last chapter was interesting.  I was preparing myself for something truly awful from your A/N but this was just typical Edward to me.  Don't get me wrong, I love Edward but he tends to overreact quite a bit in this story, has temper issues and is way overprotective in some instances so this doesn't shock me.  I agree with the reviewers who defended Bella's actions on Alice's secret.  Bella handled perfectly and Edward threw it in her face.  Very wrong on his part.  Who would ever want to confide in Bella if they knew she told Edward everything?  Seriously, girls keep secrets just as I'm sure Edward has some as well.  This particular secret needed to be shared but Bella was trying to get Alice to share it with Jasper first and now she is being punished.  I hope she gives Edward hell.  Loving Carlisle to pieces (wish he were my papa) and Esme, well, disappointed comes to mind.  I love my sons too but I'm not blind to their faults like she seems to be.  Kind of wish she'd kept her big mouth shut.  Anyway.....again love your story and looking forward to the next update.   Oh yeah, thanks for your rec's as well.

Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Excellent chapter.  It's exciting to see how much Bella has grown and I am so proud of how she handled this situation.  Her confrontation with Jasper was probably my favorite.  When she pointed out how clueless he was to Alice's situation, especially being her Dom and that is his job yet as her friend she caught on immediately I wanted to hug her.  I love that Bella is no longer a "doormat" (thank you Carlisle) and stands up for herself yet does it with grace and confidence and not all whiny and childish (ehm....Edward).  I love Edward to pieces but when he was thinking how he wanted her to grovel for his forgiveness I wanted to slap him myself.  I am glad Bella cleared the air with Esme and I loved the choice words she used in describing Edward.  Esme overstepped her bounds but at least she could admit it and aplologize.  She's a great mom and Bella is so lucky to have her and Carlisle in her life.  Garret made me laugh with his attitude and Edward is very lucky to have him as his mentor.  Again, excellent chapter and thank you for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, yeah there were a few moments when I had to walk away from my pc so that I didn't hit it in frustration. I kept seeing Edward's supercilious smirk - aaaaggghhh!  thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I love this chapter.  I was so proud of Bella at the party and happy Edward put Mandy and Vanessa in their places and Carlise....love that man. 

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

I am so totally in  love with this Bella.  Most stories make her wimpy or so lovestruck the minute she meets Edward it makes me want to puke.  Please oh please keep her snarky and keep her messing with Edward.  This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories.  Well done.

Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

The internal workings of Bella's mind are fascinating.  She is so feisty and strong-willed.  I absolutely love her.  She will definately keep Edward on his toes.  Jessica is, well, disturbing but I agree with the reviewer who said it was nice to see her mindless instead of spiteful and cruel.  Would love to read a few chapters in EPOV if possible.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Good job.



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

What a fantastic story.  You created such an interesting and unique story.  I love the friendship between Jasper and Bella and making Bella and Carlisle siblings was very creative.  Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)