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Single mom of 3 teenage kids who loves twilight and loves reading fan fiction.
Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135060
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
full circle, wow. man how can parents do that to their kid. i can't wait for the chapter that explains what happened. looking forward to it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
omg she has defentiely been to hell and back. i feel sorry for how much was taken from her and how much she lost and also that she will never bear any of her own children. i would have killed him slowly if i had a chance. thank god the police killed him
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
well the kids no what family is
i am sad for will and cat. i think they are just scared. i hope they get their minds back to where they need to be. because taken rose and jasper from the equation will make things worse
Author's Response:
Yes, it would.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
omg that was heartbreaking. why are people so cruel. i just can't understand why someone else would be so mean. they just don't understand.
poor thing wants to die but she has so many people that love her. it will take a while for her to know she is not his dirty little whore.
bella go back to your parents. they love you.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
OMG how heartbreaking. i know it is what is best but omg it is going to tear them all apart at first. her parents have to be dying inside. i wouldn't be able to let my baby go. they all do need help garrett is right. it is a perfect place that she is going to. they can all imagine what she is going thru somewhat cause they have been thru it. it will be tuff but i am sending all my prayers for all of them. mr varner was so wrong on so many levels. i am glad he will no longer be able to teach. bella does have alot of people in her corner and it will be hard and heartbreaking but they got to have hope. she survived for 6 years for a reason. she came back they can only go up from here. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
wow, their stories are all heartbreaking. garrett's man oh man what where his parents thinking. you think they had kids just so they have sex toys and someone to toture. my heart goes out to them. you got to hope kids do not have to go thru that. poor garrett couldn't save his brother. i think by hearing his story isabella felt that she should listen to him because he know what it felt like and somewhat she went thru. their are some sick sick fuckers out there. man you hope once they get put in jail someone just takes them out
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
i think this has got to be the hardest thing to do. they love her and i believe would do anything for her. but the hardest thing right now is to walk away so she is forced to get the help she needs. i see them trying to help her but like garrett says she would become dependent on them all and never be able to do anything for herself or learn to cope with people around her. maybe on day but man someone could eventually get hurt when it wasn't meant for them to get hurt. hard decision. but they all did it and i have to believe she will see in the end that she is worth it and that they did love her enough to walk away
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
that insight on garrett, loved it
he has also been through so much and i love that he helps others. it is alot to deal with others pain and not take it in.
i also love that he wants her to have a happy ending with edward. he sees that there is something there worth saving and nuturing
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
i thought the chapter was perfect. she did what she needed to do and edward responded. they both where in control and it was as it should be. them both saying what they needed at the house was great. i am hoping that they got it out. i know there will be some trying times but it seems like it is time to heal and see what the future will hold
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
well that wasn't too bad. at least they all know where she is ocming from and hopefully cans ee the light at the end of the tunnel. they have a better picture of what happened as maybe how to handle things better.
look forward to school
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
got to love Ang and how she said turn and walk away bitches
pe was my favorite so far. i can't wait for varners class. so far so good
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
well it is great that the girls will get the help they need. i cna't believe they never said anything. man that blows me away. i love that bella once again beat garrett. it is great that the family is learning to get to their happy places. seems they are slowly dealing and piecing themselves back together. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
wow that was an eye opener. man i feel sorry for garrett and laurent. there parents are sick fucken bastards and i hope in jail they are dealt with appropriately for their behavior towards kids. i hope that there is a news article a small one abouth their deaths. vial disgusting pieces of shit. human being is too good to call them they are not human. man oh man i wish garrett or bella killed them but then they would be in trouble, sucks big time. but hopefully with garrett speaking and now bella his parents or pieces of shit will go down big time
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
that is so heavy shit.
the island should be quite the happening place. there are quite a few people on the island that shouldn't be together. this should be interesting
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
one step forward two steps back
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
wow a whole lot going on. again she takes a step forward and two steps back. i hope she finds another happy place. i hope she goes to school. she would do good at anything she sets her mind too. working for garrett could be interesting but would she have to be in brazil? if so how does that affect her and edward? i am glad sje told the girls how she felt. i hope the go back and know they are given a second chance and make good of it
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
well the bond between all of them is amazing.
well seems b knows what she wants to do after medical school. i am curious how edward fits in. i know they are soul mates but what is it that he wants to do after school.
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
wow i cans ee where bella is coming from. it is one thing for people to know what happened but to actually see it being done to you wow now that is hard to grasp. poor bella like the nightmare never ends. man if they have footage of the men i don't see how they can say they are not guilty. man i hope they all get what is coming to them. if i recall correctly inmates do not look kindly on people who do things to children. all 25 need to pay for what they did especially since it seems they see nothing wrong with what they did. just sick
thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
well that was a huge step for the two of them. he was gentle and watch her and listen to her to make sure she was okay. he truly loves her and she is aware of how tuned into her that he is. he would never intentionally hurt her. they deserve each other and happiness. this was a great step for them
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
what a chapter
i am glad they got to say there peace. i hope karama comes back to all of those there. it was great for the family to face some of them and let them know what they did.
i am glad jasper and rose have a place and a family thta cares. very sad that their parents left their stuff for them and walked away. wow
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
you go bella. you have such a good heart you are a surviour everyone should be proud of you
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
maybe and i am hoping this story might help someone out there. or maybe think about how people treat other people.
wonderfully written chapter thank you
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
she did a beautiful job. she has been thru hell and back and she is the bigger person. she is strong. i sure hope the group learned something from her talk
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
yeah the fun is begining. she got to enjoy a day with her dad of fishing and driving great day. like it should be. now she is spa with her mom to get ready for a date with her boyfriend. love it and can't wait to see where they go
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
that was a perfect date. he knows her so well
i love that he asked her to marry him. he is willing to wait for the girl he loves. hehas already proven that. love it all thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue
it was a great story
cycle went full circle. they are all giving back
i am glad garrett and kate have a little one
i hope one day bella and edward get that happy blessing
theya te all together and helping others
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
France 1830
After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
OMG is correct. i wouldn't want her seeing my man in all his gloryness. maria already wants him. bella needs to just lay her out. i wonder if maria will go running to charlie and renee as to what she saw edward and bella doing. man oh man he should have kept it in his pants.
love it and can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
i am so loving bella's character. she is so full of life. i love when she is angry. she has a lot of passion
it would be alot to keep up with bella as her chambermaid. she would keep you on your toes.
love it
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
man renee is a spit fire and bella takes after her. so loving it
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
wow edward you should have been more honest with bella
i think if you told her the truth she would have been mad but she would have been okay with it and accepted it. now when it comes out she will look like the fool and she will be pissed beyond belief i think
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
hell no you are not wasting your time. i so love the story. i totally think those girls screwed around just as much as the guys. maybe not the words or at tleast we didn't hear them. but i think it all went down and if you didn't see it doesn't mean it wasn't happening.
i really love bella being feisty, it suits her. the family dynamic is great love it. ahh i am hoping maria gets put in her place. i so love it that renee and charlotte are so accepting in a way of what has happened between bella and edward. they do love each other and will be married. not like they are sleeping with someone else's partner. keep writing. i'll keep passing your story along to my firnds. keep on keeping on. love it
Author's Response:
Thanks. I really needed to hear that. And I plan to keep on writing.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
i was proud of Maria and was glad she seem to stick up for her cousin. i think she truly realize alstair is a pig and wanted nothing more to do with him and defentiely bella wanted nothing to do with him. i am hoping she gets a second chance and someone nice to love her. i am hoping she stays out of bella life with edward and has kearned not to go after bella's men. she hopefully learned that message loud and clear. I am glad the men got there also before anything got to out of hand for all of them. alstair needs to be buried in the back yard cause i do not think he will go away otherwise. love it
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
wow alice has alot to deal with. seven years. i am hoping tanya's baby is not jasper's. got to wonder cause we still do not know who daddy is. i wonder why japer and alice are not secure with how they feel for each other. i hope they talk before it is too late for them. seems they started out so strong but not being open or being afraid of what is said is a sad thing and is harming them. too funny about bella saying something about esme hat. but edward should have known. bella is an outspoken one. i sure how he is proud about it and doesn't try to change ehr cause that could be his downfall. seemed when he was talking with carlisle he was second guessing about the people from london liking her. i didn't think he cared about what they thought. but it seems he may since he is the one who could be producing an heir. edward tred lightly and do not lose the best thing that has entered your life. love it
Author's Response:
Yes, I know that you all don't know who the baby daddy is yet but I can assure you that it is not Jasper. I wouldn't do that to Edward or Alice. The reason that Jasper is doubting his marriage is because he truly thought that Tanya and Edward had what Alice and himself did, then learning that Tanya cheated on Edward makes Jasper question everything he and Alice has. Alice is worried because Jasper has a duty not only to his family but to society as well. She is terrified that he would leave her for someone who can produce an heir.
The hat thing was just an idea I had right before I started this chapter and it was something Bella would do.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
wedding time. bella knows exactly what she wants and is thrilled. i am glad she is so mindset and i believe edward loves that about her. esme not so much
so it seems they are getting married just in time so they can announce the new arrival. oh i bet esme will just be thrilled.
can't wait for more of the wedding. love the story
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
wow edward i think we all told you so. you should have been honest with bella. i think she would have understood. so what a blow to know have to raise a child that is not yours. i wonder if the real father will ever show his face. by then will it be to late. will edward and bella have accepted the child by then. a baby. i love that bella says she is pregnant with the demon spawn, too funny
love it
Author's Response:
The Baby Daddy will show his face. I just really want to see if people can guess who the father is. A lot of people have guessed Jasper or Emmett, while that would have been a good plot twist, neither of them are the father.
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
i love that bella is not changing for anyone. i love that edward loves her for it and doesn't ask her to change. so it seems mrs newton and mrs crowley are the problem childs. isabella put them in their places great.
can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
i am not wrapping my head around the forks estate and alice being ms cullen. i am a little confused
i still love bella's spirit. she defentiely speaks her mind. i sure hope she doesn't lose that. i feel she will be good for kate. i am not concerned with her coming to edward and bella. i think all will work out
Author's Response:
Okay. Jasper is the heir to Carlisle's fortune and the Forks estate. Alice married Jasper which would maker her Mrs. Cullen in a certain respect. She would on day be mistress of the estate. However, she is scared that Jasper will divorce her, something she does not want. Thus hoping that Isabella gives them an heir.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
i love how isabella took control and welcomed kate. i have a feeling bella and kate are going to get along just great. i see them having a great relationship. i am worried as to who her daddy is. i am hoping it is not anyone in edward's family. it seems that esme is a little more accepting of bella by how welcoming she is with kate even thought the little girl is not hers. poor alice i hope things work out for her soon. it seems might be interesting with edwards parents being so close since bella will nto be going to their home. and they want to be around for the birth. i still love how open and no hold bar that bella is. great story. looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
i am thrilled that kate is happy and bringing happiness to edward and bella. seems she fits in well with them and has made a drastic difference. i am loving it
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard
well a little boy was born. i bet edward is thrilled they are both okay and he has a heir tot he cullen name. i can't wait for kate to meet her brother.
love it
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue
well i can't wait for your new story sounds to be promising.
i really love the vineyard. i am glad bella was able to help edward get closure with tanya. who would have guessed that she was forced, since she did not speak up. she had a beautiful child who was loved and is very happy. she got a second mother to cherish and love her as her own. too bad edward can't plead self defense since that is what it was really. james did have it coming. they will or might miss things with phillip, how sad. i loved the way things worked out for all. i am glad jasper and alice had a little girl. what became of rose and em. did they stay married and have any children. great story and loved the writing. thanx
Author's Response:
Everyone got their happy ending, including Rose and Em. I didn't mention them mainly because they really weren't that big of characters, but yes they did have children. Five in fact. Now, give me five or so miniutes and my new story should be up on TWCS.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
i feel sos orry for Victoria. She has always been nice to bella. I feel for her that her husband couldn't keep it in his pants and i hope victoria isn't made a fool of. she doesn't deserve that.
i am glad bella is so imeresed in the kids lives. she is a good mother. i am glad she doesn't take crap from the snobs. i love that edward accepts her and doesn't change her. i hope they have more kids. loving it
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
i am hoping the man is guarding her and not watching her in a creepy way. edward needs to take them back to france or go to his parents home and get away from james. too bad he can't just off him. he so needs to be 6 feet under. he just threaten not only bella but kate. i would fear for both their safety. i hope they do the right thing. too bad it seems bella might not be able to continue to be friendly with victoriia. seems she needs all the friends she can get. love it
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
the devil has resurfaced. wonder if he is working for james. oh i just want them to be able to get to the boat and get to spain and then head home. bella sure does think of all things, such a smart women. i am also glad they listen to kate and put her in their room before someone took her. love it
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
what a cliffy. i am glad allstair didn't get away with hurting bella. i am hoping jasper shots allstair cause otherwise he will keep being a pain in her side. he needs to be dealt with once and for all. then they need to get out of town with kate to keep her safe from her asshole of a father. can't wait to see what happens next. love it
have a good visit with your sister
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
i am shocked. i like so many others believed tanya was unfaithful. didn't think james raped her. how sad.i am glad alice and jasper can now move forward with their relationship. she now knows what he did and now he can make it up to her. he deserved the slap. seems rose and em are getting a blessing of their own. i sure hope victoria got the kids and meet bella in the carriage. i will be estatic if it is james that got shot. the cullens and katie do not need to be looking over their shoulder the rest of their lives. love it
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
omg who the hell was suppose to be watching kate. i know somebody was. i sure hope they do not hurt that little girl. she has been through so much in her little life. being with edward and bella seemed to be giving her a little stability and a place to belong.
jasper i am wishing you the best with alice. i hope you are able to get your marriage abck on track. if you are not going to tell alice you slept with sienna then you need to put it behind you and try and get your life back on track with alice. you can't keep bringing your bad karma in your marriage.
love it
Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.
This story is about how the strength that family love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.
check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Speak copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11
loved it
i love the way everything is going. i love the way leah is around edward. there are one happy family.
love it
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -
I have to tell you i have really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the next chapter but i am curious was leah alive and did she know her dad? in one sentence it seems as if he wasn't there while she was born: he was even there with me when Leah was born in place of Jake whispering of how proud he was and how much he loved us.
then again leah is not talking because of the drama of losing her dad. Just so I can understand the story can you clarify . i really an loving the story and can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Don't worry you'll find out very soon. thank you for reviewing,
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
well edward is getting some of his answers. i am loving this story and looking forward to where it is going.
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
my first instinct is to say mike newton but not sure. i am thrilled that bella is giving edward a chance. anthony and leah are so cute together. they go together and get each other. leah is letting her mom know edward makes her happy and that she wants to play the piano. love it can't wait for dinner with all of them. seems these guys are going to make some changes in each others lives.
Author's Response:
thank you, I can't say who it is but is but if you have doubts over your instinct, than chanes are it's worng ;-).
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
wow what a place to leave us. OMG i would have thought she was playing with anthony but now i am a little worried. poor thing i sur ehope the dr is able to help her with her attacks. my what alice must think. but it was good she helped them out when they needed it. i sur ehope bella seeks the help from dr cullen so she can get some sleep. she cant help leah if she is just as torn up. love it, please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you, you'll get your answers in the next chapter which I will post very soon, so don't worry to much lol.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
ahhhh the kids are so cute. edward is such a good dad and bella is a great mom. these guys would be so good together. all in good time. i have a feeling bella might just help out when edward and em need to go away on their trip. i can't wait to see how the dinner goes. loving the story
Author's Response:
thank you.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
i am curious as to what was going on with the kids in the store. maybe riley wasn't being nice to leah and he was protecting her. hmmmm
well i am glad bella's studio is everything she wanted and more. hopefully jasper being around will be nice. another familar face always good.
love it all
Author's Response:
hmmm, we'll see more riley soon ;-) I'm glad ou want jasper around, the guy is kinda loveable
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 part 1
my heart is going out to rose. i sure hope she is okay and hiding and not in trouble with royce
i sure hope the guys find her
i love this story
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9
well we have come along way. man oh man can leah through a fit. i loved ehr stomping her little foot. i had a great laugh, love it. i am so thrilled that edward called his sister and got her to make alot of accomadations for leah. he loves her and is just looking after her. it is so sweet. i think bella sees it she just isn't used to someone doing that for them. anthony is adorable as well. i loved him waking up with bella and telling her he wasn't ready to get up. love the story
Author's Response:
Anthony and Bella together on this chapter is my fave scene, I just think there so cute. Edward's heart was in the right place, but was he right and not even mentioning it to Bella? Thank you bb
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 part 2
heartbreaking
i love them all. i am sending them all hugs except james. yuck i spit on him. trust edward bella.
love it
Author's Response:
I would be spit on him and the rest all send them back :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10
love the pictures.i think slow is good for bella and edward. seems they both have issues and need to go slow. but they are getting to know each other. edward just needs to give bella time and it will be worth it. looking forward to these guys learning to trust each other and grow. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you and your spot on with the characters. :-)
Teaser will be in PM. enjoy
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12 part 2
edward you better make things right by bella
too bad rose didn't shoot royce
ahhhhhh he so deserves it
In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?
Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 22429
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
i really enjoyed this story. thanx for writing
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
when i read zombies i wasn't so sure about it but then you start reading and it keeps you quite entertained. i must say she grew up in a rather unconvitional way but thank god cause she was ready and prepared.
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you Sassy.
We always love hearing from new readers.
IP28 & Shawney
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23/ 21
man so many preganant. but hey really what else do they have to do. i am glad bella is happy being pregnant. too bad katie is taking it so well just a little jealous. i know she will grow out of it. kids are funny when they are jealous. i love the name faith. it fits for them and there miracle baby. well it has been what almost a year. they do not know what caused the virus and what keeps it living so called. but now it seems as if the zombies are dying off. maybe cause they have nothing more to feed off of. can't wait for the new chapter. loving it, thanx for writing
Author's Response:
No thank you for reading Sassy.
We always love the indepth reviews from readers. It tells us what they liked, loved and hated. Yeah they have been underground for almost a year now. The next chapter should be posted soon. Thanks again for reading.
IP28 and Shawney
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
i love the candy as dog poo that was great. i cringed i thought she was. thank god it was candy.
poor carlisle and hsi junk. but at least he knows the pain she is going through. hope the peas helped. i can't believe the zombies are getting in. you would have thought be now they would be gone
love the story
Author's Response:
Thanks Sassy, the dog poo thing was something my oldest son said. It was kind of a rhyme or song. I thought it was funny so I added it. I am glad you liked it. The junk squishing and pea accident is something I whitnessed when my friend was in labor and waiting for the ambulance to arrive. I was the one who got the peas for his twig and giggle berries. Thanks again for reading.
Ip28 and Shawney
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
i feel sorry for elizabeth. christian took advantage of her not having the money to see her kids. she was trying i am glad she got away with the 3rd child. looking forward to edward and car finding out. glad esme had a little girl. their family is complete. but now they are having issues with the zombies
i am having so much fun reading this story. i am on pins and needles as to what will happen next. will they keep fighting them or go under and bunker down. love it
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
love it
glad bella and renee worked things out
seems her relationships are going better.
ohh feel sory for bella when she gets home to her punishment
i hope she calls instead of surprising him. edward seems like he needs to know where she is at cause he worries.
her playtime was hawt. go bella go
love it
Author's Response:
Hmmm...we shall just have to wait and see! Lol!Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!
Krazi
xoxo
FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!
Hope to see you soon!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
so this is interesting.they both have feelings for each other and the kinky life but don't know the scene will be with each other. man i can't wait
love it
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far. I want to welcome you to the story! We're almost to the prologue, so take your time and get caught up. Lol! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! Happy New Year! Laterzz:) Krazi & Mojo xoxo BTW... if you've got a minute check out the blog at: www.forthelovedomination.blogspot.com
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
wow jacob stupid man you could have had it all but you had to cheat on her. i sure hope she gets you back. i am surprised bella would settle for jacob anyways. she barely knows him and doesn't love him. i am glad things didn't work out
Author's Response:
Lol! Yeah Jake was a bit stupid, he took Bella's naevity for weekness, but don't mess with Ms. Swan, especially when she has a meddling pixie on her side! Lol! Soon Mr. Black will get more than he bargained for, trust me! *laughsmaniacally* Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Happy New Year!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
i am glad they or someone red
i don't think they should be doing a scene especially since he wasn't into it and he would be ending it
but oh well makes for a good story. tanya is too much i do not know how he has dealt with her for so long
Author's Response: Haha! That was a bit of a mess, wasn't it? Lol! Thanks for catching up with us! As always thanks for reading and taking the time to review! Laterzz:) Krazi & Mojo xoxo
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
man leah you need to look in the mirror. i am glad bella stood up for herself. jacob you are a pig. i am sorry sue was hurt but she needs to see how much of a bitch and disrespectful her daughter is. shame on you leah
seth is adorable. he has such a big heart
Author's Response:
Yeah that was one hell of a family Christmas! Lol! Let´s hope that Leah gets it together for her baby´s sake! Seth is an absolute sweetie pie! Lol! You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
wow what a hell of a chapter. man these two are just perfect for each other. the feed off of each other to the brink. i so can not wait till rose starts to train her and edward gets to particpate oh what fun we are are going to have. like you said let the games begin.
oh when he finally finds out his perfect soul mate is truly isabella i think he will blow his loud. love the story so far.
thank for writing
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
wow was shocked to see bella used her safe word. but all in all it was smart. she is learning and she has awesome teachers. man i can't wait for her test screen. she thinks she is getting over edward man oh man when the masks are off hold on to your seats. love it
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
omg that was way more than i thought. it was wow not words to explain the 4 orgasms that bella had.. he owned her and she owned him. man when they find out who they are to each other. this was some night for them and so well worth the wait. i love that edward has people who are loyal and good at what they do to help him with bella. she will know and does know it is all worth it. he is worth it and she is worth it.
love it and god can't wait for more
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
wow what a hell of a chapter and so loved the photos.man oh mna i was worried there for awhile. so they both know and now what will they do. it is a beautiful thing of how submissive bella is for edward. she is perfect for him. because of their relationship or her yearning for him i think it is easier for her to submit to him. she does it so flawlessly. OMG edward your mouth must be to the ground and you probably blew your load as soon as bella said she was a virgin. my oh my what news. what will edward do now. love it
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
so loves these two together. i can't wait for more, want more with them. hawt
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
wow i defenteily love the pictures in your chapters.
well seems things have moved along and we are getting steamy and wet. omg so hawt. they are together and so loving it. i am glad bella got her groove on. they are good for each other. loveit so much thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out! Krazi xoxo
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
man i love your writing. it took these guys long enough to get together and now we are looking at moving in. can edward get used to a dog. i am sure he can or at least he is willing. i can't wait to see what bella does next. love the story and love the pictures. thank you for writing
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
happy bday
wow what a chapter
so it seems someone has it out for bella and will stop until he gets her. scary. i feel for the replacement he has. she gets the brunt how sad
love what edward did to be able to keep up the playtime. how hawt is that. he seems to be getting just as much from it as her.
love it
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Training Day...
seems they both have it rough right now
but yeah bella screwed up
banner by lvtwight09
When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268927
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
ahhh how heartbreaking
at least the boys are there and are a little buffer. kind of helps isabella fit in
can't wait to find out what happened to her parents
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
well i am thinking bella could be the dead isabella. but why do they think she is dead. was she kidnapped when she was little
i can't wait to read on and see if she ahs a family still out there. will she get her answers. what will it do to the family she has had for 14 years. loving it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
wow heartbraking. your pissed cause your hauled out of your house any noone will tell you why. then you wait in a police station and are fuming mad. then you find out they may have found your parents after 14 years. man you have been happy and now they are coming to tear apart your happy family. that sucks to high heaven. to have your life ripped apart in a matter of seconds or minutes is just, ughhhhhh. well edward you need to be there for bella. love it
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
so much is going down. i was hoping edward to explain he obivously knows what happened but he didn't. i can not wait to find out how bella got separated from her family and why the cops think she is dead. so they where i phoenix and somehow ended up in LA. now they are all in Forks where the rain doesn't stop and the sun don't shine. both families are hurting. they both want bella. they both feel they have a right to her. thank god she is almost 18 and can make her mind up for herself. man i can't wait to see what happens next.
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
i have to say they are all in a tuff situation. i see where charlie and renee think he we had her she was taken it was our fault we want her back. but they took the word that she was dead. they where never given proof nor did the police have any. they just assumed and all stopped looking. the police didn't look any further really no justice was done. the guy who took her car doesn't seem as if they ever found him and made him paying for injuring renee and taking bella. i see where they are coming from they are assuming the police did there job but then again me being the parent of 3 hell yeah you better show me proof my child is dead or i will continue to look for her. so yeah they do need to take so blame for giving up the search for their daughter. bella has a right to be hurt. they looked for her parents for 2 years. they put the effort in finding bella's parents. i think renee and charlie have a tuff road ahead of them. it will be up to bella if she wants a relationship. love it
Author's Response:
Who said Charlie and Renee stopped looking for her? Did the police let them down? Yes, but that doesn't mean they stopped looking. Yes, they do have a tough road ahead:)
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
bella has alot to deal with. i think with time her relationships will be what happens when not trying. right now they all want so much and att he same time she doesn't know what to be to everyone especially herself. wow
Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?
Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.
Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6949
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 ** Beginnings **
wow what a chapter. it is too bad carlisle couldn't face the man he molded. it is sad that edward feels carlisle wasn't i guess able to accept what edward did. not sure but am loving the story
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 ** Welcome Home **
poor alice. seems as both girls have had a rough life. or they have had a event which brought them to their AA meetings. i can't wait to hear both their stories. loving it
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 ** Women **
i am really looking forward to these guys learning about each other. they are so perfect for each other.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 ** The Cullens **
mike newton you so need your ass handed to you. i am proud of bella for clawing you. man you deserve so much more
i love the interaction between edward and bella. seems they are so intune with the strange they kind of know that something is not all what it seems to be. again they are so perfect for each other.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ** The Stalker **
i cant wait to see what edward's reason is to why he is outside of her house. i am sad he didn't show up. i am thinking that it was michael driving the car that is almost about to hit bella. at first yes i did think it was michael in the backyard and not edward. seems he might be a little close to bella more than he wishes. loving the story
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Obsession
love it
i am thinking maybe mike feels threaten by bella and sees her as a threat so he thinks he might have to get rid of her. i mean to have her and jessica against him that could be too much. since bella doesn't seem to scare he might feel can't wait to see who is behind the killings and hoping he or she stays away from bella. seems she attracts the crazies just a little. i am so loving this story and can't wait to see what happens next. will emmett get his guy and will edward make an exception with mike or has he now fit into his code. love it
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 **Heroic**
i am so loving this story. i think they have so far to go but at the same time they are learning new things about each other and themselves. it seems they are so alike on so many levels. thye mesh they just need to talk and get to some sort of compromise. but hey it seems like they are both not looking and are willing to move slow so it seems it might be a slow process.
i am so loving the story and look forward to the next chapter. thanx
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
well that went alot better than i thought. my goodness what jacob did to james. man he truly cares for bella to stick up for her honor. i am sorry he is in jail but love that he defended her. james had no right in what he did. but i am not sure he knows that. i wonder if his parents will stick up for his ass or make him face the consequenses. i liked to think if i was in their shoes i would hold my son accountable. if you don't then they will keep doing things they shouldn't. they need to know their is consequences. i guess jacob had a feeling he would be held accountable so he became judge and jury but now poor jacob is the one that needs representation. rape is a hard thing to prosecute. i feel for all that are involved. last but not least bella kissed edward.
Author's Response:
I wanted Bella to have one decent parent and it was odvious that Renee wasnt going to be. his parents wil come later... of course i love jake in this story:) ty for ur review
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
wow now because the phone was off and she missed all the messages and off course didn't get jake's daddy is coming for a visit. it seems the truth is going to come out and may hurt alot of people. i am curious if james and his parents will want the baby. i wonder what mike wants. i wonder if it is to apoligize for his asshole brother. i am glad through all of this bella has rose to talk to. i love that rose confronted her. well i guess we will see off course if any of them decide to keep their babies or if they find great homes for them we all hope. looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
Author's Response:
lmao, love the way you think.. gosh i have some one the ball reviewers
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
well seems like there could be a love connection. love the respect edward has for the gals in the house. he parents raised him well. i can't wait for charlie to go kick some serious ass with james. i am hoping jacob is able to get off. it is great to see bella has a circle of women in her corner supporting her. great chapter
Author's Response:
ty so much... chapter 8 will be up in a few days if not sooner
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
charlie needs to get rid of his wife. loose term. man oh man renee you need a serious ass whipping. how dare you say that. you don't stand by your daughter because you being a socialite is being threaten by what your daughter is saying. how dare you. bella is better off without you. i feel for bella
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on
well i hope your daughter has a great b-day. some people can handle being pregnant and accept the responsiblity that comes with kids. it sure is alot of work and i think alot of people do not see that. mine are older and it is still alot of work and you would think it gets easier. i also have a friend who lost her 16 yr old daughter the mother is 42 now and starting over. i do not think i could do that but i understand because she was missing that part of her life. we all do things for a reason for our kids and hope for the best.
i feel for victoria but am pleased that she is finishing her schooling and staying where she is happy and feels loved. alice and jasper have made the decision to stick together and raise their child. i hope they get the tools that will help them be sucessful. bella i guess we will wait in see in her deceision. she has alot to think about. i love what edward says plans change. she can always go to school in Aizona and she has her family there and who knows maybe she end up wanting her child or she makes that descion to not raise the child and go thru witht he adoption process. it needs to be what is best for all of them. love it
Author's Response:
She had a good day thankyou, I couldnt imagine starting over at that age, but i understand the need to be a mother. thank you so muc for your review
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present
well my bet is on his brother. i think his brother was so upset and that this wasn't the first time james did this and he did not want him to get away with it again. i bet mike might have had a crush on bella and felt bad. just thinking
i so love edward and bella getting closer, hot. rosalie is too cute in helping out bella with taking care of her needs
love the story
Author's Response:
Thankyou. so much for review.. love your ideas:)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
wow i was very shocked to learn mike didn't kill his brother. seems his dad took matter into his own hands, that was a big surprise. seems james was quite busy. too bad he wasn't stopped long before but he is gone now. this family has alot to get through.
heartbreaking for rose but she did what was right for her at the time. at she will be in the child's life. so not all doors are closed.
well bella seems papa charlie is hoping you make the decision on keeping the child. your mother was the one not wanting to have anything to do with the child. seems charlie has come around and wants bella to make a different decision. maybe she can attend community college and her dad can help. but again she needs to do what is best for her and only she can make that decision. loving it
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company
OMG I am so pissed. she wants her rights as a grandmother to be heard when neither of them could be good mothers. Damn they both have a hell of a set of balls to pull bella in to court. it is bella's baby and charlie is her parent and is behind what she wants. if she wants to raise her baby she can. which is what she is thinking of doing with edward. but she wants him to be the father. i am shocked and pissed. i wonder if bella can sign her rights to her dad and edward. i am sure bella wants to be in her daughters life but maybe this will force her hand. i am sure she doesn't want those to shitheads to be anywhere near her child. my good her husband killed her son for raping all those women. what judge would give her custody. renee they have your own writing of you being a bitch to your own daughter
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
well that was a surprise. i am glad he wants the chance to be a daddy. it is great because he does have the love to give a baby who needs it. esme will be a great grandma. also he not only wants the baby but it seems he put himself out there saying she was welcome to come homw when she was done with her school. wonder what will happen next. i do believe bella has the right to call off the adoption. it is sad that when people find out that a child needs are more help that they are labeled. there are special people out there for those children and all involved are special.love it
Author's Response:
i agree with you completely