Reviews by mentalmute
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255111
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Okay, now every time I have to watch the Emmy awards on tv I'm gonna think about that!!



Author's Response:

lol ... Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

 

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So, does Bella know with absolute certainty that she can't have children, I mean did she have stuff removed, or is it a possibility that she could have trouble conceiving , but it's still possible?



Author's Response:

She only knows that she can get pregnant however the problem will be in carring the baby. Her Uterus is damaged bad and contains alot of scare tissue that would prevent implantation or growth ... and then chances of rupture are very high...so is it possible? yes, but it won't be easy and it could be dangerous....ok enough of that ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Between me and my children and my daughter in law, we will have them all to compare and share!! lol



Author's Response:

You got all the bases covered...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I hope those are for Seth!!



Author's Response:

I hope so too...

Thanks for reading ..I have this weeks teaser for you...

“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.

 

Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”

 

At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”

 

Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”

 

Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”

 

Why?

 

“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”

 

“What is it?”

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

Well, I'm glad he left without too much trouble, hope he takes the hint and disappears- though I have a feeling Renee is about to show up! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

Hmmm, sounds like a playroom might be added in the basement as well!! lol

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

I can't wait for Bella to actually find out what is on his personal balance sheet!! She's gonna freak!!

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Diamond Extra's

Just wondering if she is so scared of dark places, how can she be excited about blindfolds?



Author's Response:

That's a good question. Bella's fear of dark places is more of the enclosure and being alone there. It gives her that suffacated feeling. With the blindfold, it's like closing her eyes, she still has the open air around her, and she would not be alone at anytime. It's also a matter of trust on her part to know that if she starts freaking out, that the blindfold would be removed immediatly, giving her a sense of safety. Thanks for reading and for asking the question. To be honest I thought more people would wonder about that, but you were the only one. So Thanks for letting me explain my reasonings...lml

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238937
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

 Loved the vamp tattoo's!!  Can't wait to hear what Car says about the meds!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Glad you liked the vamp tatts! I'll post more soon. Thanks for reading/commenting!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Definitely continue!!!



Author's Response:

I will!!! Thank you for reading it! I hope you continue to follow it. I love excited reveiws, so feel free to tell me how you feel as the story progress.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Nah, he wasn't sorry- he just knew he could plant that seed in her mind so he could try to get her when he gets out!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mercer Island & Minibars

Wow~ awesome chapter!! I'm glad most of it is out of the way, now Bella has to finish her story, and we need to get to the bottom of the Tanya debacle.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

lol!! I love Rose!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

LOL   we don't mind a day at a time!! It's all in the details my dear!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

Hmmm, cabbage rolls and brussel sprouts!!



Author's Response:

HAHAHA..thanks!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

Yeah, the Johnny lunch will be great, and I really can't wait to get Charlie and Clint together!! Charlie will probably whip off his jacket and throw it over a puddle for him!! lol



Author's Response:

I have to make that epic!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises

Loved it! You had me holding my breath there for a minute, and then I actually felt bad for doubting him!! lol  I need a life!!



Author's Response:

join my club....i'm entirely too involved in this story..lol.  Although..reading Love Rescue Me will convince you to never doubt Edward...he is head over heels.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

What can I say, but awesome and amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you're not mad about the cliffy.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Lol I knew for sure when she bailed on the wedding cake tasting!!



Author's Response:

See?  I gave little hints.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Awwwweee!!! That was so awesome!!



Author's Response:

thanks ver much! glad you liked it

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 part 1

A very drunk Edward without anyone to tuck him into bed?? How can that be?? I volunteer!!   Anyway- got kinda sidetracked there-----    I knew it was the same James!!!!   I just hope you don't allow Bella to close herself off from Edward because he lied to her about this trip!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

I'm glad you didn't have her jump right into his arms-- though that had to be a tough decision to make!! lol   The road trip will be great, and hopefully Rose will be able to help Edward fit into Bella's life a little better. One thing--- is Bella's James the same as Alice's James??????? Can't get that one out of my head!



Author's Response:

Everyone keeps asking me about James but I don't want to tell anything, sorry :-) Don't hate me! I'm happy you that I didn't just thow them together. Your teaser will be sent through Pm. Enjoy :-)

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awww!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I hope you like the next chapter!

Lisa

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm sorry, but if one of my children treated a guest in my home that way, my child would be asked to leave and not to return until they could act as if they hadn't been raised in the jungle!!



Author's Response:

I know, Jane is too much, over the top.  i wanted to make her more like Esme.  bella has yet to stand up to her own mother, let a lone someone she just met.  It'll come up for sure though.  Thank you for reading.  I hope you like the rest of the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmm, Edward needs a little jolt-- I think maybe Bella needs to ask him for some space and time to decide if she can be with him and give up all of her hopes and dreams of marriage and children- either that, or she needs to be in some sort of life threatening accident so he can realize that he can't live without her- or if that's too much drama, he could just have a really awful nightmare where she runs off with Jake and the next time he see's her she's got a child and a little house with a white picket fence, and she's happy and doesn't even recognize him when they run into each other!!  lol  I wish I had the patience to write one of these!!



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you fro reading! :)

Bella and Edward will eventaully talk about things, but they are ignoring their problem at hand for a bit longer.  The next update will be posted this weekend or early next week,.

-Lisa

PS-Love the idea of the nightmare!  If it fit into the story I would have to use it!

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yeah, she should definitely go. She needs to show Edward that her life is going on- she's not sitting around pining for him. She's keeping herself healthy and not sitting around waiting for him. Maybe the loss of his father will jar him into reality, but even if he falls on his knees at the funeral and begs her to marry him, she should tell him that if he still feels that way after the baby is born, they can talk about it, but during this emotional upheaval she won't even consider him serious. He needs a therapist, really.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Edward is stubborn.  He is willing to compromise and meet half way on certian things, but not on marriage and children.  He and Bella will meet up and see each other in the next chapter (which I am workign on as we speak).  I hope yoau re enjoying the story.

-Lisa

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Eight

Jacob absolutely had to have erased all Edwards messages, and I thought Bella handled things extremely well- though as hot-headed as Jake is, I don't think he would have folded quite that easily and left without a scene, but that's just me. Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Bella will find out baout Jacob adn the messages, don't you worry.  Jacob truly cares about Bella and just wants her to be happy and safe, two things he doens't think Edward can be with her.  He didn't argue with her because he didn't want to upset her any more than she all ready was.  he didn't want to cause her more stress. 

The next update should be today some time.  I'm actually trying to wrap it up now.

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty Two

She let him off a little too quick and easy, but yeah, she should have forgiven him. Kudos to Rose for 'manning up' and giving Bella some decent advice for once- there may be hope for her yet. I don't think he should be arrested- I mean the pap grabbed for Bella. I think before they take him away someone should step up and say that the pap instigated the whole thing. Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

hello and thanks for reading/reviewing.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I had it planned for a little bit that Rose would be the one to offer advice to Alice.  Things with the arrest will get resolved in the next chapter! 

-Lisa

Remember Me by NoelleSeven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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One love.  One destiny.  Can you change what's meant to be?  AU/OOC NOT related to Rob Pattinson's movie of the same name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126600 Read Count: 8254
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

Amazing story! You should be very proud!

Summary:

In a world of vices, wrongs and rights everyone will put those aside to fight for the right to live. Edward Cullen is a twenty five year old single father of a four month old baby girl named Katie. He lived with his older brother and sister in law in Hayward CA. Bella is a twenty two year old single female that has been living on an island for the last six months. They come with baggage, emotional struggles and a common goal. Strangers becoming family and fighting for a little slice of peace. Can personalities that clash survive the zombie attacks that are taking over the world? What is Salvation House and who will make it there alive?

 Rated NC-17 for language, limes and lemons in future chapters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93057 Read Count: 22429
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aaarrggghhh!!  lol   You know we'll keep waiting!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awesome as always!! I don't think they should add anyone else to the group.



Author's Response:

Hey mentalmute,

Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  We really love hearing from you guys.  New chapters coming soon

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmm I'd like to go to a candlelight service with Rangerward!!!!

It's You by duhitsangie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

A Locket, A Picture, A Dream.. What if someone you thought didn't exist came into your life when you had given up? B and E are 2 college kids in LA who meet and feel like they've always known each other, is it more than just a feeling? Fluff/Humor/LemonsBanner by Mehek18

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150715 Read Count: 25531
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Just AWWWWWWW!!!!

It's You by Lost Twi Sisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

Bella and Edward meet on a cruise. Both are attracted to each to other.  We'll see what happens after some fun- loving on a cruise, when they encounter each other again.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88437 Read Count: 41339
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was a little too rushed and ooc

 

Antiques Roadshow by aerobee82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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I took an antique in for appraisal, only to find a much rarer treasure.  I met Bella Swan on Antiques Roadshow, and PBS would never want for funds again. Canon Couples, Vamps/Humans.

Credit goes to forthelongestday for the incredibly lovely banner.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82797 Read Count: 28260
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm happy that you're still enjoying my story!

Rachel

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Perfect!! The whole pregnancy discussion was well done too. The first time I've seen Edward break down because of it-- I liked it!



Author's Response:

Hi, bb!

I'm really glad you acknowledged that particular part of this chapter. These are healthy, well-rounded characters, and he's shaken by the fact that he truly can't give her everything. Thank you so much for reading!

- R

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by ChildOfSummer!!  THANK YOU!!!

If someone gave you three wishes, would you use them? That's the question Bella Swan, practical psychology major, has to decide when her grandmother presents her with a story that she can't believe, and a blue sapphire ring that she's always coveted. If you could go to any time in your future would you make the wish?

AU-Human. Cannon Couples. OOC. Not angsty, but a few tissue moments in places. Language, Lemons (of course...you know me). It's different than anything else I've written. Interested in a little magic?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've read
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72920 Read Count: 15590
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hopefully soon!! This is currently the story I most look forward to updates for!! And that says a lot, cause I have no life and read A LOT OF STORIES!!!! lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: When the Shit Hits the Fan Fiction

Gah!! It's been 10 days and I'm dyin' to see what he says!! Can't wait to see how he acts with her now-- will he be snarky or super sweet knowing that whatever he does may end up in the story?? Will he decide how he wants to see it end and try to lead her in that direction? The possibilities are endless!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life

lol I think his dick might need to upgrade to a hard hat when Charlie gets wind of this!!

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Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427939
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

No, I don't hate Charlie yet- it remains to be seen if he is going to try to take any of the money for himself, or if he is just trying to help his baby girl  have as easy a life as possible while she goes to school! I mean, he obviously can't give her much, and she'd have to work while going to school to help support herself, so maybe he's just trying to get her as much as possible so she can just concentrate on school and her career.  Now, if he does try to drain any of the money off for himself, that opinion can and will change drastically- though I really hope that doesn't happen. I mean, he wants Bella to be happy and whole, and something like that would break her and cause her to need therapy. Every girl needs her daddy to be a hero, not a slug!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings

Oh I can't wait for Bella to run in to check on those noises!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31184
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

Here's to hoping that 'next time' comes very, very soon!! This is a fabulous story line! I can't wait to see where you go with it!! Please just don't make Emmett a bumbling oaf-- I have never been able to understand how anyone thinks Esme and Carlisle could have raised him that way in AH stories!! I mean, as a vamp, sure, he was raised by others, but as a human, they would have instilled better values, right??? lol

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

Awesome~~!! What else can I say???

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117811
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 55

Edward's gonna be pissed!!



Author's Response:

Oh, most definitetly.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 64

Yay! I hope Charlie steps up to the plate-- maybe Edward's family can help too!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 61

Hmmm I'd have shower sex with him even without crazy people!! That sounded totally wrong!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

I love it when you lie!!

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Aww, sweet dreams!! I know mine will be!!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75

Awesome!! Minnie Mouse and Hammock sex all in one chapter! You're too good to us!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue

AH CONTRAIR-- I have personally had hammock sex, and not only did we not fall out, it was a totally 'ROCKING' experience!!!!   Anyway, thanks for a great story!! Hope to see you come up with something else in the future- you have a great writing style, and your ability to update so quickly yet not lose quality is greatly appreciated!



Author's Response:

Kudos to you and your successful hammock time! So jealous lol! Sigh, thank you so much for taking the time to read & review. You make me smile with your compliments :') off to go cry some more like the little bitch I am.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218349
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

Loving this story~~!! Edward had better go after her!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Love it so far!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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BANNER BY READERGOOF!  THANK YOU, LOVE!

“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime…mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed. –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: To Read, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125792 Read Count: 33644
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 May 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story line! Can't wait to see where you take us!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love that Jake is team Edward!!  lol  And of course, Jasper will be so taken with Alice that he'll fade quietly into the background, right??  I don't know why, but I no longer receive email alerts for updates on TWCS, so I have to keep checking most recents and discovered I had missed a couple of yours, but I'll try to do better!! Any ideas about why I don't get alerts?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123

Amazing insight into Edward's character! I'm glad he taught her the pinkie swear- that will give her confidence to tell him the hard stuff! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Teaser for chapter 11.

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Well in this chapter you were given the chance to know Edward a little better, in the next chapter you will get to know a tad bit more about the kids and the background story on them, but you will also learn more about Bella.  Alice and Jasper are still together, but Jasper does have issues with Alice and her behavior and he will continue to call her to the carpet on it.  Rose wants the world to revolve around her, and when she rages there will be all kinds of fun things going on.  More to come on their bad behaviors, lots more...  Don’t everyone lynch Carlisle, he is just worried for the welfare of the children, and he will be a saving grace in Bella’s life because he is now the children’s doctor.  Edward and Bella are both going to be learning form the other.  Edward doesn’t realize what Bella is teaching him yet, but he will figure it out.  Thanks again for having some faith in us, I know we can’t redeem him in everyone eyes and there are a few of you who are still very upset about his time at the club.  If you are still upset, I hope by the end of the story, you’re not dwelling on that, because the basis of the story is so much more than that.

Thanks so much.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

 

Chapter 11 teaser… Subject to changes during beta process.

“I am Seth Charles Swan.”

“Do you know your date of birth?”

He nods his head. “December, 31st, 2003.” So that makes Seth seven years and almost nine months.

Carlisle looks to Bella. “Was he born in a hospital, or at home?”

She looks at Seth. “Hospital, mom had a few weeks left before they were supposed to be born. The police had come to tell her dad had died, and her water broke when she was shouting at them. Then the EMT people came, one of them was a lady and they took mom away to the hospital.”

Carlisle looks at Bella and nods. “Do you know how early?” Bella bites her lip and shakes her head. “After he came home, has he seen a doctor?”

Bella nods her head.  “I had to take them to see Aro’s doctor and he gave them all the immunization shots they needed.  Zafrina took them for me if I was at work at the hotel.  Zafrina is Aro’s mom and she promised that they would be okay and said that they needed those shots. She told me that they were very important for them to have so they stayed healthy.”

Carlisle looks at her. “Can you tell me who Aro is, or the doctor’s name?”

Bella frowns at him and then looks at me. It is clear she is confused as to why he doesn’t know who Aro is. “Zafrina lives next door to me, she very kind and looks after Seth and Leah when I am at work because you’re not supposed to leave them by themselves, that is very bad.  Aro is her son; he helped me get my jobs. They help me, but I know that I should have been there, but… I… have I done something bad?” She looks like she is getting upset, and at no point has she told him that I know Aro. I grip her hand and rub the top of it and give her a smile to thank her for keeping my secret.  I turn to look at Carlisle and tell him who she is speaking about.

“I know Aro and the doctor she is talking about. His name is Jason Jenks, I am sure you are familiar with him. I will give him a call to fax all the paperwork he has on them.” Carlisle looks at me nods his head, and gives me a clear look to say that he wants to know more about this. I stand up heading to the door.

“Okay, Leah can you tell me your full name?”  She smiles and nods her head.

“Leah Sue Swan,” she smiles at him.

“Do you know your date of birth?”

“Yes, it is January 1st, 2004.”

“Ah, the twins have different birthdates, so that tells me that you Seth were born very late at night, and you Leah were born very early in the morning.  Am I correct?”

They nod their heads all together, and I smile.  

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names

wow, that was a lot!! I'm glad she hasn't been sexually abused-- I'm still at a loss to understand all of it to even form an idea of what actually happened, but I'm still reading!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  There have been a few questions regarding Edward and why he is so tainted by women.  More of his back story is coming out, but between having a mother who was mentally ill, who subsequently abandoned him.  The one girl he gave his heart to was only using him for money.  One girl pretends to be his friend to gain access to his friend and for all accounts adoptive brother.  And don’t forget the person he looked to as a mother figure who lied to him and hid the truth of things from him.  When you put all of those things together, it is hard to trust and believe that there is honesty and truth in caring from a female.  I know lots of women who think men are worms because of this or that, which happened, so it should not be so hard to understand how Edward may have this view of women.  Next we have had an overabundance of questions regarding when Edward will find out Bella’s true age.  That will happen, but first we need to build a little more of their friendship together.   I know that many of you are not happy of his time going to Aro’s, but I assure that those times are coming to a close.  It is important we felt in the story and as the story goes to show how he is dealing with his own reactions to Bella.  There will not be any more explicit scenes from the club, however your knowledge of him going will not stop until he stops… AND WE PROMISE he stops going.  This is a rather slow burn, but for this to be realistic, in any way, shape, or form it needs to be.  With that said we will not drag it out either.  You will continue to learn more about Edward and Bella, as well as a few of the other characters, but it is all going with the storyline.  There are some great chapters coming up, and for all of you who still have some hate or anger for Edward, I am sure that you soon will find that hate or anger directed in another place. 

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 10 Teaser…  Subject to changes during Beta Process.

Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett, and I, all meet up on Saturday for a workout and lunch. The topic moved to Bella, and Emmett was not happy that he was the only one that had not met her yet.  I, well we, explained that she did not like close contact with people and might say things out of the norm.  Of course, this all fell on deaf ears, because his only response was him promising to be on his best behavior. Now, we all love Emmett - most people do - but he is a large hulk of a man.  Emmett is six foot six and must be tipping the scales at close to three hundred pounds.  His biceps are the size of my thighs. He also has a quick mouth, and often says things without thinking. We tried to tell him this, but he didn’t get it.  We all knew that he would end up trying to hug her, or that she would end up saying something and then he would joke about it, but either way, she would end up hurt.  I just couldn’t allow that to happen, not even by one of my best friends.  He pouted the rest of the time we were together, even after Jasper and Carlisle both said she could not meet him yet.  I was a bit worried at the end of lunch when Emmett looked as if he was hatching an evil plan.

I look at my watch, seeing that it’s almost nine-thirty, and I know that Bella is about to walk in.  I have set up the table with some of the supplies I need to help teach her, including alphabet cards.  Since she can already recognize some letters, I know teaching her the alphabet should be pretty simple.  I know the best thing for me to do, is to start at the beginning.  This means that the alphabet song we all loved as a kid, is first. I look to the door as it opens, and see Bella walking in.  She glances at me, and I can see in her eyes that she looks both excited and apprehensive.  I am sure she is a bit nervous about today, so I smile at her. We already decided that we would do an hour and a half on Tuesday mornings, and an hour and a half on Thursday afternoons.

“Bella, hang up your jacket and come over to the table.”  She nods her head and does what I ask. “We will begin with the alphabet.  There are twenty-six letters in the English alphabet; twenty-one are consonants, and five are vowels. I will show both the capital and lower case letters.  Are you ready?” She nods her head before putting her glasses on. She has them sitting at the edge of her nose, which will make her look over the top of them rather than through them. I push them back to sit on her nose correctly. “No looking over them, Bella,” I say, giving her a smile.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by the talented chistagbanners.

 

Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.     

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mentalmute Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmmm, if I had to venture a guess, Alex had Edward beaten to a pulp to leave Bella alone, and the only way he wouldn't ruin his record deal which would also ruin his friends lives, would be if he made her hate him.



Author's Response:

You are very perceptive, you might just be right :)

Thanks for the review

Bee xx